Foxblaze of MapleClan

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  • Character Name: Foxblaze


    Character Age: 12 moons


    Gender: Tom


    Alliance: MapleClan


    Rank: Warrior


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): Foxblaze has bright orange fur with a white diamond marks his chest and white fur lines his toes. He has beautiful green eyes that shine in the sun. He is bigger built, but not fat. His shoulder has a scar, which always reminds him of that inccident. His tail is average length. Under his pelt when he runs, you can see his strong, rock-hard muscles, ripple.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Foxblaze is nice, but has a very short temper. Sometimes a small thing could set him off on a rage and other times, he shrugs and moves on with life. He is not very loyal to one place. He goes from side to side on arguments and decisions.If he likes someone, they hit his soft spot and he literally cannot be mad at you.
    ---Likes (at least 3): Foxblaze likes silence and keeping to himself. He has a big crush on an apprentice, Fishpaw, who is just a few moons younger. His favorite prey is vole and enjoys practicing his battle moves.
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): Foxblaze doesn't like loud noises or annoying cats (mostly kits). He dislikes obeying orders given to him by someone other than clan leader or deputy. Usually, Fishpaw's sister, Eveningpaw, annoys him badly. He doesn't like the smell of dew or dried blood, which can even make him gag at times.
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Foxblaze is a very good fighter. He can come straight forward at his opponent and easily take them down. He uses his weight to his advantage and holds others under him.
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): Foxblaze it a clumsy hunter and is terrible at stealth. He rustles leaves and misses pounces. Foxblaze's bulkiness makes it hard to fit through small spaces.


    History (8 or more sentences): Foxblaze was born and raised in MapleClan. He is son of the great leader, Froststar. His mother's name was Longfur and suspiciously left after his and his sister's birth. His sister, Mousepaw, died in an accident during a training accident, in which another cat landed on her spine wrong when jumping from a tree. Soon after his mother left, Foxkit (at the time) was attack by a fox and now has a scar on his shoulder, giving him his name. Losing his mother and sister, made him go a bit insane. He attempted to murder Eveningpaw, the she-cat that he didn't love back. Foxblaze was prevented a moon from becoming a warrior.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Sunlight streamed through the Warrior's Den's entrance. Foxblaze yawned and blinked at the rays. He stood up and padded out into the clearing. Walking to the fresh-kill pile, he greeted his father, Froststar, "Hello," he smiled, picking up a rabbit. "Want to share?" Froststar nodded and they sat down to eat. When he was finished, Foxblaze decided to do some hunting. He wandered through the tall towering trees. A mouse was skittering at one of the roots. Foxblaze crouched and tiptoed forward. A fern rustled as he twitched his tail. The mouse heard and Foxblaze quickly pounced. Clumsily, he smashed his face into the tree's trunk. The mouse ran down its burrow.


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    The post was edited 1 time, last by Mufasa! ().

  • You have many choppy sentences. Please lengthen them by combining multiple short sentences into one complex sentence or adding more adjectives to make the sentence more descriptive.


    I'm assuming that Foxblaze is a part of MapleClan? If so, you need to put that in his Alliance.