Applekit of RiverClan

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    Character Name: Applekit


    Character Age: 3 moons (3 months)


    Gender: Female


    Alliance:RiverClan


    Rank: Kit


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): She has Dark brown cinnamon fur , a notch in her right ear and a scar on her forehead. She also has one white paw. Applekit's eyes are dark blue and match that of the night sky and she has (on the top of her tail) white fur.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):Applekit is an adventurous, curious kit and can get into trouble really fast and she often gets lost and gets scolded by the elders. She was found playing by the RiverClan kits but isn't really 'from' River Clan. She is energetic , but kind and sweet to anyone she meets. She loves it when its cloudy and she plays with every member of RiverClan and she hopes to be a strong adult when she is grown.
    ---Likes (at least 3): Cloudy skies, ladybugs and flowers
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): Rainy days, foxes and thunderstorms
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): training to hunt and swimming
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): when she sees someone smaller in trouble, when she sees someone crying (she goes to help she cant stop her self from helping) and cute things


    History (8 or more sentences): Applekit is really from SnowClan but was found in RiverClan because she wandered away from her clan. She had a twin brother but her twin is still in SnowClan, her mother died and so the elders used to take care of her in SnowClan. Her brother almost got killed by a fox, but Applekit tried to protect him and that's how she got her scar and her brother ended up dying. The fox spared Applekit and even though the fox spared her life, it didn't change how Applekit felt about foxes. Another of her fears are thunderstorms because that's how her mother died and Applekit also almost got shocked by a lighting bolt.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Applekit aproaches a large group of kits playing in the grass. She watches in intrest and excitement and when she sees them tackle each other, she leaps right in to play, "Hi!" she says with enthusiasm.


    Comments (optional): Hopefully I did what I needed for the Roleplay sample. :)

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Lightbreezekitkat ().

    Hi there Light! Swifty here. Your bio is coming along nicely, but some things could use fixing up :)


    -You'll need to specify your character's age - kits can be any age under 6 moons. :)
    -Could you remove the excessive smilies from the bio? We don't use them in roleplay. ;)
    -Your sentences are a bit short and choppy - try lengthening them up.
    -A roleplay sample is a medium-length piece of writing - a roleplay post, basically - that reflects how well you can write.


    [spoiler]

    [align=center][font=georgia]You need three more sentences in Appearance.
    You need two more sentences in Personality.
    You need two more sentences in History. :)