Acaciapaw of Windclan

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  • Character Name: Acaciapaw


    Character Age: 7 moons


    Gender: She-cat


    Alliance: Shadowclan


    Rank:Apprentice


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): Acaciapaw is a medium-sized golden tabby apprentice. She has fiery green eyes, that lick up with blue flames, when shes happy or mad. She has a white underbelly that flares up like a bird's wings. She has a white tipped tail, but no golden tabby stripes on her tail. She has a lithe figure, and strong haunches that make her go fast. She has short fur, and medium length whiskers, and and a build that will keep her running for a long time. She also has only one white paw (her left one).


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Acaciapaw has a calm appearance in her clan, but she is enthusiastic, she is only calm in dangerous situations. She has a light hostile attitude to the other clans, but for some reason, always defends Shadowclan against accusations, even against her clan, is put as the odd one out. Other than that, she has a light floaty, enthusiastic attitude to others clans at the gatherings, and tends to head to the Shadowclan side of the ring of apprentices.
    ---Likes (at least 3): She loves to run, AND feel the wind in her fur.She also loves it when her whiskers brush the wind, as if it is a solid object against her.
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): She hates water more than anything, and can't stand the stink of fish, precisely why she holds her nose up in the air when she walks by Riverclan cats. And if ever to eat a rat again, that would make her throw up...
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She is really fast, and has a thicker coat than most Windclan cats and can push her way through brambles if she has to. She also has a strong flow of courage that pushes her on. She has this way to detect if something is not right in the situation
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): She cannot swim, and has a weaker spot on her left white paw that makes her stumble when she lands. She also has that weakness for lightning, and is scared of it greatly.


    History (8 or more sentences): Her mother lives in Windclan with her, and since she has green eyes, and somehow, she found those eyes in common with another apprentice of Shadowclan, although that apprentice hasn't been to a gathering, she has seen her on border patrols. Her mother says she didn't have a sister or brother, and her father is dead, but she still thinks about that now and again, abd thinks about those eyes.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Acaciapaw moved swiftly and crawled under a gorse bush, scenting Shadowclan cats near. She wasn't sure to confront them or not, but when she saw them go by, from where she crouch, she gasped silently as she saw an apprentice's eyes, and she was plunged into memory, of seeing her mother with those same twinkly eyes. She pulled out of the daze she was in, and crouched, wondering, Do I have those same eyes, Have I not tried to see them, my own eyes???


    Comments (optional): The apprentice was called Russetpaw, btw. ;D


  • Looking good, but a few things before I can approve it.


    - choppy sentences
    - some run-on sentences
    - you need 6 sentences in personality
    - you need 8 sentences in history
    - it's unrealistic to have blue flames in her eyes
    Bump when done!

  • You know I am not doing this to get it enabled, right? I am just making this for like something my friend can look at and see Acaciapaw's Bio/Profile.

  • [align=center]Approved!