Icefeather/Snowclan

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    Cat's Name: Icefeather
    Cat's Age: 24 moons
    Gender: She-Cat
    Alliance: SnowClan
    Position: Warrior
    Appearance: <blockquote>Icefeather is a sleek, medium-sized cat. And a grey tabby pelt and blue eyes.She also has a small horizontal scar on her nose.And the body structure of Icefeather is sleek, but a little bulky.</blockquote>Personality: <blockquote>Icefeather is a fierce, loyal, clever minded cat. But sometimes she can be very grumpy and touchy. Also she is sometimes stubborn and she never gives up. And, and belives in very strongly in what is right.</blockquote>History: <blockquote>Icefeather was originally born in Thunderclan. And as a kit her name was originally echokit. but the night after, she got a cold . Therefore they thought she was cursed.So, Icekit ran away from Thunderclan when she was 7 moons old thinking that If she ran away, her cold will not spread among her clanmates. . Therefore,she ran to the river to get far from the clans.. 3 moons later, a tom and a she-cat found echokit by the river. Brightpelt and Sparrowtalon, the tom and the She-cat, also took her in to live in snowclan. Soon enough, Brightpelt and Sparrowtalon took Icekit to the gathering. There, the clans found out and understood the lost kit's escape and renamed her Icekit, for her cold when she was a kit.. for the clan did not see Icekit as a weakness, but a strength. Soon, Icekit became an apprentce, then a strong warrior. Icepaw's warrior name was Icefeather.From that moment, Icefeather no longer felt like a weakness to her clan, but a strength.</blockquote>Roleplay Sample: <blockquote>I am not, and never was, a weakness to my clan, but a strength. Icefeather thought to her self. Suddenly, she remembered that Sparrowtalon had asked her to go on a hunting patrol. Excitedly, she bounded up the slope and headed to the forest. This is my first hunting patrol! she thought.Almost immediately, she spotted a mouse scuffling under the ferns. without thinking, she lept at it, impatient to feel the satifaction of sinking her claws into the limp body. Suddenly, Without warning, a alarm call of a crow sounded through the forest as the mouse ran into it's hole. "Mousedung!" she spat, as she lashed her tail frustratedly. "It's my first hunt as a warrior, and I messed up!" As she returned to camp, she was aware of the hopeful faces and tried to not meet her clan mate's gaze. Sighing, she headed over to her nest and curled up as she let the darkness swept over her like a raven's wing.</blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote>Dear Staff,
    I've seen all ou r work, and WOW! I'VE SEEN YOU WORK VERY HARD! WHAT I WANT TO SAY IS.......... THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
    sincerely,

    SPL2582/Icefeather
    P.S please check and approve as soon as you can! no pressure!</blockquote>

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Icefeather ().

    Bios looks really good apart from the one thing. We don't allowe cats with 'powers' in the game - because if we allowed them everyone would have one and you'd wind up with eight hundred 'supercats' running around.


    It would be fine as a kit if she had some cold or flu that she could spread to others by touching them, infections do spread that way. She may have been thrown out of her birth clan because of that. But she wouldn't be able to keep it her whole life and infect every single cat I'm afraid, so that part will need to be changed is all :)

    Please do not double post, triple post, etc. Instead, just modify your first post using the 'Modify' button in the top right hand corner of the post. ;) We will get to your bio ASAP. :)


    I don't believe you can have any direct contact with clan leaders, deputies, or medicine cats - as people actually do RP them.

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Glowing..Mouse ().

    Hi Icefeather :) This is a beautiful bio and it's much improved. Just one thing - the leader of Thunderclan, who was Crystalstar at the time of her being a kit, would've never kicked a kit out of camp for any reason. I think you should just simplify it a little and have it that she just got lost out there or something. The snowclan cats could've renamed her per her request even.

    Okay- and thank you groovystar! I will do it right now. 5 minutes later... Groovystar/ I see you are online. please check my bio!

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Icefeather ().

    A kit doesn't learn hunting skills until six moons, so it would be dificult to survive for three moons as a kit. Change that, and it should be good. :)

    Please be patient; someone will always get to your bio eventually. :)


    And this is approved. :D