Ok guys this is of my made up charrie Stormstrike of Stormclan.so all of this ish for Erin Hunter to read and others but mosty Erin Hunter...Ok story time lol...
The charries and looks:
Spottedstar is a light brown she cat with a white underbelly and dark brown spots.
Skytalon is a handsome black tom with a light grey underbelly with dark grey tabby spots and shining frost blue eyes.
Flowerpetal is a long furred calico she cat.green eyes med cat
WARRIORS:::
Lionpelt is a short furred golden tom with a lighter under belly and blue eyes
Starshine is a pretty she cat with yellow/tan fur with specks of brighter tan/yellow
Braveheart is a brown tom amber eyes
Featherwing is a pretty she cat with white fur and blue eyes
Sharpclaw is a ornge tabby with a black underbelly amber eyes.
APPRENTICES:
Jaypaw is a grey/blue tom with darker tabby marks and jay blue eyes (not blind and will have diff name from Jayfeather he will be Jaywing)
Volepaw is a light brown she cat.green eyes
Scarletpaw is a scarlet she cat blue eyes and black paws.
QUEENS:
Speckleleg is a white she cat with brown speckles on her legs (mother to Amberkit and Windkit~mate is Braveheart)
Lilacpelt is a Tortie she cat blue eyes (expecting kits soon mate is Sharpclaw)
Loners:
Storm is a beautiful young she cat with tanish fur and grey underfur and brown tabby markings amber sparkling eyes
Chapters:14(maybe more)
Chapter done:1 of 14
Prologue:
Spottedstar stared into the sky."Starclan speak to me...i must know...,"
Skytalon a new warrior padded next to her."Is everything ok?"
"Yes Skytalon.,"she said as wind pulsed around them."Go to your nest you need rest tonight.,"
"Yes Spottedstar..,"he mewed padding into the warriors den.
She walked into her den sighing."Ohh Starclan..,"she murmured.
A storm will strike within your clan with power.A new prophecy will begin!
Spottedstar looked down.,"What does this mean Starclan!Tell me!,"she said screeching a bit.
A Storm will strike
Chapter 1
~Loners and kittypet's~
Storm a loner she-cat sat down mewing at a Twoleg nest.
"Ugh no use ill have to go hunt.,"she murmured leaving.She pounced into the forest.She sniffed the air."Mice!Ohh yea!,"she said walking around following the scents.She crouched low.She sped as fast as she could but then she mice fled."What!There were no sticks in the way!,"she grunted.Spottedstar steped out from the shrubs."Why are you in Stormclan territory!?,"she hissed."Ohhh your the cats trying to invade where my cave is!Ohh im Storm.,"she mewed ignoring the hostility."Hmmm clever one arnt you?Follow me if you would like to join my clan...Storm,"she said.Spottedstar walked trough shrubs and bushes.Storm followed jumping over bushed and dodging rabbit holes.Spottedstar was surprised.
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When they got to camp Spottedstar called a meeting and anounced the arrival of Storm."The deputy Skytalon and Storm shall battle to see who her mentor is.And no roughness such as fatal wounds.,"she mewed
Will type more later :3 aint it agonizing!!!