Cat's Name: Streampaw
Cat's Age: 8 moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: Riverclan
Position: Apprentice
Appearance: <blockquote>I am a sleek silver pelt with light grey streaks. I have blue eyes. My body is lean, with an average build. I have no scars.</blockquote>Personality: <blockquote>I am kind and loving with a fire for helping cats in need. I am always focused and on task when I am doing whatever my mentor assigns me. I will fight to my last breath to defeat my clan. I will do what I am asked without question.</blockquote>History: <blockquote>
My mother and father were both Riverclan cats who died in a battle with rouges. The rouges were trying to invade Riverclan territory when my mother and father were on patrol. They fought the rouges off but never made it back to camp. Everyone says that they were great warriors and loved me dearly. When my mother never made it back, I was feed by a queen who had milk to spare. I was the only one in my litter, so I had to make friend with the other kits in the nursery. </blockquote>Roleplay Sample: <blockquote>Streampaw ran across the camp to the apprentices den, excited to finally get to sleep there after 6 moons of waiting in the nursery. He was sad that his freinds back in the nursery could not join him, but he got over it when he got to the den.</blockquote>Comments/Other: <blockquote>I was wondering if i could be a medicine cat's apprentice. I have a good knowledge of all the herbs used to heal sick or wounded cats. It would be greatly appreciated if you let me play</blockquote>
Streampelt - Riverclan
- tanglenose
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Hi there, welcome to the forum :)
One more sentence needed in personality, and 3 more needed in history.
You cannot apply for a medicine cat apprentice position in a bio. They are selected in character.
The rest of the bio is fine, just add those sentences and we will take another look :)
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Ok sorry

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PERSONALITY
I am kind and loving with a fire for helping cats in need. I am always focused and on task when I am doing whatever my mentor assigns me. I will fight to my last breath to defeat my clan. I will do what I am asked without question.
HISTORY
My mother and father were both Riverclan cats who died in a battle with rouges. The rouges were trying to invade Riverclan territory when my mother and father were on patrol. They fought the rouges off but never made it back to camp. Everyone says that they were great warriors and loved me dearly. When my mother never made it back, I was feed by a queen who had milk to spare. I was the only one in my litter, so I had to make friend with the other kits in the nursery.
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Please do not double post. It is against our rules! If you need to change the personality or history, modify your main bio post!
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Sorry, I forgot :(
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It's okay - we all make mistakes. :)
Approved! Wonderful. ^^