Dawnfeather of ThunderClan

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  • Character Name: Dawnfeather


    Character Age: 14 moons


    Gender: she-cat


    Alliance: ThunderClan


    Rank: Warrior


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): [size=1em]Dawnfeather's pelt is like the golden sky of the dawn covered with a thin mist or fog. Her eyes are the color of the deeps of the salty ocean water. She is rather thin. Her legs are short compared to the length of her body. Her long fluffy tail always has a little bit of a curl at the end.[/size]
    [size=1em]Agile- She can weave in and out of bushes without making a sound. Her long slender body helps her with her ability to sneak through the tangled branches.[/size]
    [size=1em]Fast- Dawnfeather is pretty fast. Probably not the fastest cat in the Clan, but possibly one of them.[/size]


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
    Quiet- Dawnfeather is more of a follower than a leader. She tends to stay in the background instead of voicing her thoughts to others. Most of her free time is spent by herself or with very close friends.
    Brave- Although she is one of the more subdued cats, she is very courageous. She would do anything and everything for the wonderful ThunderClan that she loves. Usually, her bravery only comes to her when she really needs it.
    Loyal- Loyal to the end. Dawnfeather never goes back on her word and never breaks a promise she's made. Her paws are set firmly in ThunderClan and she would die before she left the Clan.
    At times, Stubborn- She sticks to what she believes when she's just positive she's right. She won't give in to anything when she believes a certain thing.---Likes (at least 3): Being alone, observing, following
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): Being in the spotlight, too much criticism, leading
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Quiet, loyal, quick
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): Follower, doesn't contribute thoughts etc to the Clan that much, stubborn


    History (8 or more sentences): [size=1em]As a kit, Dawnfeather lost most her littermates to greencough. She didn't remember them that much either. She only found out because her mother told her. The only other survivor of the disease was her brother, Jaypelt. They grew up together and were very close to each other. As her days as an apprentice, she learned quickly what and what not to do, the do's and don't's. She quickly settled in the background of the Clan, observing more than partaking in the sharing of tongues. She listened to conversations as no one would suspect her of being too mischievous and spreading rumors, which she didn't.[/size]
    [size=1em]Staying in the background, her life as a full warrior began only a couple moons ago, she has a couple more friends who she keeps at arm's length. She still prefers to go unnoticed than to be in the spotlight.[/size]


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Dawnfeather padded through the ThunderClan camp, eyeing the fresh-kill pile. It was rather empty today, and the hunting party still hadn't come back yet. She paced back and forth, sending puffs of dust to the air, pierced with the golden rays of sunlight. She glanced upwards to the canopy, watching the branches swaying in the gentle breeze. A couple of leaves loosened their grip on the tree and gracefully fell to the forest floor. Other than the fresh-kill pile being less than large, the day was oh so perfect.


    Comments (optional):


  • Hi, I'm Belmont. Your sentences are very short/choppy. You will need to lengthen them. :) As well, your RP sample too short. That needs to be longer, also. :)
    Edit and bump!