Furyclaw of RiverClan

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  • Character Name: Furyclaw


    Character Age: 13 Moons


    Gender: Tom


    Alliance: No one


    Rank: Warrior


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): He has very dark tabby fur and dark green eyes. He is long haired. Furyclaw's fur was clawed off at the tip of his tail. His claws are very sharp but short. Furyclaw is small but strong. He has a notch in his ear and a scar on his right hind leg.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Furyclaw is easily angered. He is popular in his clan. Furyclaw is even known somewhat well in other clans for his fighting skills. However, he doesn't want to be known as he likes to be alone. Furyclaw breaks the warrior code every once in a while. He doesn't believe in StarClan, even though they have visited him once.


    ---Likes (at least 3): Fighting, Ambushing, Hunting, Eating Thrushes, Being alone
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): Other Clans, Gatherings, Annoying Apprentices/Kits
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Good at fighting, Good at hiding, Almost invisible in the night
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): Can't swim well, Not very fast, Dark pelt does not go well with RiverClan territory


    History (8 or more sentences): Furyclaw was born a loner. His parents died shortly after he was born, but he has survived my himself known as Fury until he was 4 moons old. By then, a RiverClan warrior found him and brought him into the clan. That warrior saw great strength in that little kit. Furyclaw had one brother, Flame. Fury and Flame traveled and survived together. Flame died from falling off of a tree that the two kits had to climb up to escape from some foxes. That's about as cruel as you could get with a death.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
    "Hey...!" Flame exclaimed as Fury snatched the mouse he was eating away. "That's my mouse!" "If you want it, ca-" Fury cut off. "What is it?" Flame asked. Is there something wrong? "Up this tree!" Fury yowled. He dashed up a tree quickly and hid behind some leaves. Fur was bristling and teeth were bared. Heart thumping, Flame half jumped and half climbed up the tree and pressed next to Fury. "What's-" Flame started. "Foxes!" Fury hissed.


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