Who needs a pretty red tabby she-cat mate from SnowClan?

"Hey! Your a medicine cat apprentice! Not a warrior apprentice! You need to go heal cats instead of causing more trouble!" Amberwaves said quite kindly. The didn't notice the brown tom as he crept up and then snapped his jaws around Lionwing's tail. "Lionwing! NO!" She cried to her nephew then killled the brown tom with a savage warrior blow. "Are you OK dear?!"

One shriek came from Lionwing, and he was not moving.(Actually....I want him to be on the verge of death and they take him back to camp.) "NO!" Amberwaves an Goldenheart yowled and slashed the BloodClanner dead.
"Hurry Rainbreeze! I think I see Stingpaw!" Dawnpelt yowled. Stingpaw was not moving. "Oh, no! Not Stingpaw!" She whispered, tears escaping her eyes.

The gray bloodclanner, whose eyes had just been victorious, were now fearful as he fell down the steep hill. His neck broke, killing him instantly. The mates looked at each other and picked up Stingpaw by his scruff and met Hailstar's eye. She saw him, and let out a wail, her eyes glazed with pain, for he had been her second son. But she nodded nonetheless, signalling them to take his body to camp. Soon, Amberwaves and Goldenheart brought Lionwing's body also. They quickly laid his body down and ran back to battle. The two mates however, laid him down and touched their pink noses to his quickly heat escaping pelt. "We'll miss you friend." They said, and ran back to battle with misty eyes. A black and white BloodClanner she-cat with iris colored eyes tackled Dawnpelt. "Who...are...you!" She gasped from unerneath the BloodClan she-cat. The cat smiled crulley. "I'm leader of this clan, and I'm known as Iris....the killer!" She laughed then readied dog teeth lined claws with a vengous covered grin. "This is for Ash!" She snarled. "Your father has caused your own death, because my mother swore his bloodline would die!"

Wait, so if your mate was about to be killed....YOU WOULD SIGH! And My avatar is what Dawnpelt looks like. P.S, how did Stingpaw come back to life 0-O
Dawnpelt pretended to faint. "Ugh! I don't have time for this! I'll get your kits though!" She yowled and then ran away. Dawnpelt 'Woke up' "You Ok?" She asked Rainbreeze. "You don't love me anymore? Do you?" She asked.

"Shhh, little one...." Purred the tortiseshell with warm amber eyes . "You need rest. "All of you do." She said, finishing rubbing in herbs of all 3 of the apprentices pelt's.Beepaw looked around and saw starry cats. "I'm in...*yawn* StarClan.....arn't I?" She asked. "Not quite, you need to fight." She said. "But it's so......so peaceful and quiet here." Beepaw debated quietly. "Come on little ones! You need to follow the light-" And everything was black.

WAT! NO NOT STINGPAW! As if dying wasn't enough!

Dawnpelt sighed. "I guess I'm just worried..... about Stingpaw, and Lionwing." "I'm sorry Dawnpelt.... this news will probably be worse for you then....." Greeneyes said with tears in her eyes. "Beetail is missing." (Beetail is her sister who will return.And Greeneyes is her aunt, her mother and father now live with the Tribe of Burning Eclipse)
"Come this way kits." The gray tom whom had killed him said gruffly to Stingpaw and another kit who looked just as terrified. "Where.....where are you....ttaking us?" The kit whimpered. "Shut your jaws!" He said, giving a heavy blow to the kit, who whimpered and didn't move. "Weakling." He growled and walked on. "The kit eventually got up, shaking and confused. A huge dark brown tabby with burning amber eyes leapt onto a border and yowled. "Welcome to the Dark Forest!"
Her family
Golden drops of light: Mother, White cat w/ same green eyes
Lion that roars at dawn: Father,incredably pale, almost white orange tabby w/ incredibly bright orange/yellow eyes.
Greeneyes: Aunt, Silver tabby w/ green eyes.
Beetail: Sister, Orange tabby she-cat w/ orange eyes with darker tabby lines and white tip of tail.
Goldenheart: Secretly one of her many cousins including Amberwaves

Dawnpelt began to cry. She felt miserable. She thought he wanted to leave her. Her mother was gone and so was her father. Her sister was missing and her clan fighting bloodthirsty fox-hearts. She needed him. "Rainbreeze, wait!" She called.
(Which tom? Tigerclaw*I don't think he deserves a leader's name* Or the tom that murdered him?)

"Rainbreeze!?" She began to sob. "Oh, I'm such a worrier! I wish things could have been the same as this morning!" (*Mischevious grin* Can we do a time travel? Just once?)
"Wait....wha?" The tom said as Stingpaw tackled here. The tom began bleeding heavily from his left shoulder, all the while being watched by the other tom, and a similar dark brown tom with ice-blue eyes. The amber-eyed tom walked up. "Except for you ." And he made the tear bigger with a front claw that was like a talon. He dissappeared into dust. The amber-eyed tom walked up to Springpaw with a new intrest. "What is your name....little warrior?"

Dawnpelt walked in the clearing, her tearstained face alit with tears. She spotted Rainbreeze and Lightingtail. Then more tears streamed down her face. I do wish he loved me.

She walked up to Rainbreeze and said. "Can I talk to you for a bit?"

Sorry! I get it now! Begining of day.... NOW! Is Stingpaw my apprentice?
When they walked out of camp, she said. "I gotta tell you something...."

"Yes." She said, and began to blush. "Why him! " The tom's exclaimed. "Because-" She said. "Because he is handsome, friendly, kind and trusting. I could trust him for my life if it depended on it. I love him because my heart tells me so! Do you feel the same for me, Rainbreeze?"