Muddypaw requires a mentor {Open}

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    Muddypaw, a solid chocolate she-cat with bright blue eyes, wandered around aimlessly in BloodClan territory. She was young and still just an apprentice but she had no mentor to train her. She had not been part of BloodClan long but she wanted to be trained as soon as possible. She noticed a group of warriors and sat near them in hope they would train her. "Hello..."

    Bramblewhisker , a MainCoon cat ( A tabby) With green-yellow eyes , scented a cat....Still the age of an apprintice. "Who's there?" He looked down. "Oh...hello."

    Muddypaw edged forward eagerly, her blue eyes wide with suppressed energy. "I'm Muddypaw, who are you?" She mewed in reply, her chocolate fur flowing in ripples as the wind passed by them.

    The cat looked at her. "I am BramblewHISKER ,young one."

    Bramble whisker thought...
    "Of corse. I'll be more than glad , to trian you,Muddypaw." He meowed.

    "Well...First we might need to pratice hunting." Bramblewhisker said.
    Finaly! an apprintice!

    "Keep your tail striat, and not to let it drag, nor, stick up to high. Keep low , aginst the ground and stalk silently. Before you do that taste the air, so you can find your prey, and to make sure that your prey wont smell you first. Watch out for twigs and leaves. You must be silent is you wish to catch your prey.
    Pounce with your hind legs , and bite its neck,Then you give thanks to StarClan...Understood?"

    Muddypaw had her ears pricked forward as she listened to the instructions she was given. "Okay, I think I get it. Where should we hunt so I can give it a go?"

    "Lets try the forest , near camp." He said leading the way.

    Once in the forest , Bramblewhiker stoped. "Now you can show me that you were lissing." He siad , with slight mock in his voice.

    Muddypaw paused and nodded her head. She really wanted to prove herself as a true BloodClan warrior. She listened to her surroundings and sniffed the air carefully. She picked up the scent of a mouse and lowered herself down and stalked through the undergrowth carefully towards the small animal. It was jumping through the leaf-litter then stopped to eat a berry. Muddypaw got closer and closer... the excitement overwhelmed her and caused a low growl to ripple through her throat and the mouse took off.

    Bramblewhisker shook his head. "You were doing , so verry well...But," He said. 'You got a little to excited. The low growl you made , was loud enough for that mouse to hear." He padded up tp Muddypaw. "Remeber,Mice will hear you before they smell you. Rabbits and other prey , might smell you first...Remember that." He said.

    "Dont worry , Muddypaw. You'll get the next one. Im sure of it." He said trying to lift her spirits.

    Muddypaw nodded, brightening up a little. She disappeared again into the forest and searched around for another victim. She spotted a vole and tried again, this time controlling her excitement. She jumped on it and killed it swiftly.

    "That was great!" Bramblewhisker meowed. 'A job well one."
    This apprintice shows promise. Rare , but good.
    Bramblewhisker said. "Would you like to hunt some more , or take this back to camp?"