Ares of the new skull(Wip)

Character Name:
Ares
Character Age:
40
Gender:
tom
Alliance:
The New Skull
Rank:
Skull->->Ture skull
Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Ares is a dark ginger caracal. His fur is short, and his whiskers aren't munch longer. His extremely muscular legs, and his broad shoulders are beneficial in battle. Ares is slower then a normal cat due to his bulk. A thin black line surrounds his dark blue eyes. his fades to white around his shoulders, and tail while his muzzle fades to a black. his claws, nose, and pad are all so black. His black claws are a good 2 inches that he sharpens daily. His pads are scared are hard, and he doesn't clean them all that often. his black nose has a large scar going vertical through it. The cut that caused the scar cause ares to lose his sense of smell, and ares has had a hard time hunting ever sense. Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
Ares is very hard working he doesn't like to see guards slacking, or not giving their all. He will not tolerate, any disoboeance from the she-cats or toms.
---Likes (at least 3):Voles, sumer, his kits
--- Dislikes (at least 3):boneclan, cold weather,and slackers
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): ability to fight and speak fox
---Weaknesses (At least 3): his quick tempter often gets him into trouble
History (8 or more sentences):
Ares' kithood was simple he was born while scythe's rain was still early. he was a runt of the litter he was pushed around quite a lot. he was very carefree, and relaxed when he was younger. When he was a future he began he become a little more stern, and focused. He loved to learn, and fight. All ares every wanted to do was one day lead skull alone side his great leader scythe,and that became his only goal. He worked day, and night to achieve his goal he hasn't just yet. After a long time he met his warrant dawn and had two litters. Flame, viper, and sunset were the in the first litter. bone, tundra, lithe, rune, and warcraft were the second litter bone, and tundra would die by murder the same day not even a year after their birth. Later ares fell deeply in love with a dirt named angel. she would then bare his third litter of four. each of these kits would go their separate ways, and would not hold a high place in ares memory for quite a while.
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