Shecat on territory! thunderclan cats needed!

INTRUDER! Fireclaw yowled as she spotted the she cat calling for help, untill he realized she was badly unjured. "Are you from ThunderClan?" she asks

"Now now, what's all this racket?" A voice called out from the shadows of the undergrowth. The foliage trembled and a ginger and white tabby tom stepped clear of the ferns, green eyes sharp and intent, studiously examining both cats. "What's going on here?" He asked, spotting the injured she-cat. It was Shimmerstrike, the senior warrior of ThunderClan.

"Oh dear." He mewed grimly, spotting the crimson that stained the she-cats pelt. Sighing, he hurried over to her and sniffed, but he knew nothing about healing. He was a warrior, not a Medicine cat, and a very respected one at that. Flicking his tail, he examined her wounds, and figured they were severe enough for the Medicine Cat to have to deal with.

"Who did this to you?" He asked in a calm tone, sitting down and licking a paw boredly. He wanted to know if she was the only intruder, or if their were more. He wanted to know if their was any threats to his clan and its members. Despite his cool manner, he would interrogate her if the need arose.

"A dog?" Shimmerstrike frowned. If it was still on the territory, it needed to be chased away. He had some experiance with dogs, but not enough to challenge a large one without the aid of his fellow Thunderclan warriors. Raisinng his muzzle, he sniffed, but could discern no fresh scents of dog, other then that which clung stubbornly to the she-cats pelt.

"Where is this dog, where has it gone?" He asked in a cool tone, placing his damp forepaw back on the cool, hard ground, staring at the she-cat intently. He wondered who she was and where she came from. Under all that dog scent he couldnt pick out whether she was a clan cat or a lonner. Who was she? Was she willing to join ThunderClan or would she leave once she was healed? He wasn't frantic to find out the answers to his questions. He knew all would be revealed soon enough.

Killed it? Suddenly, he was no longer worried. Obviously, it was a small dog. It was the large ones he worried about. He was tempted to ask her if that was the only dog she had saw, but common sense told him it was. Otherwise, her wounds would be much more severe.

"Sorry, we did not introduce ourselves. We are Thunderclan warriors. I am Shimmerstrike, and this other tom here is Fireclaw. You my friend, are intruding, but not without cause. You need help, after all. Now, before Fireclaw here escorts you to camp, as I have hunting to do just as you have wounds that need to be healed, I would like you to tell me exactly who you are." He meowed in a gentle, yet superior tone. He wasn't asking her to tell them who she was, he was ordering her.

"Well Moonclaw, Fireclaw will be escorting you to camp now for healing. You may leave when you please. If you wish to stay, inform our leader." He mewed, turning and stalking back off into the depths of the forest.

Firepaw (ps I am not Fireclaw yet!) nodded, "Follow me!" she chirped as she turned tail and raced through the forest. "Hopefully our leader accepts you! And then I can introduce you to my friends and my mentor!" Firepaw kept glancing behind her to make sure the injured she-cat was keeping up. "Our medicine cat should take a look at you." she meowed as they approached the entrance to camp. "Welcome to ThunderClan!" she said as they emerged into the clearing, surrounded by dozens of cats.

She should be here soon!" Firepaw answered. "The medicine cat is the one who knows everything about wounds, and heals them. She also has a special link with our warrior ancestors!" she meewed

" I wonder if my parents live there," Firepaw added, " I never met them, they abandoned me as a kit. I'm new in ThunderClan too." she sighed. "but i've already got friends and even a mentor, Moonfeather! She's really cool and she said my hunting crouch was great!" Seeing the confused look on the she-cats face she replied " Apparently you don't know who or what our warrior ancestors are. Well whenever you die you go to StarClan, which is a Clan that lives in the stars. They have tons of prey and no leaf-bare. Well, at least thats what oneear told me, one of the elders. He also said there were no ticks in nests. Oh yeah, and if your mean you go to the darkforest, where there are ticks. I prefer StarClan!" she meowed enthusiastically.

"Don't worry about them." Firepaw nodded" Thy did that to me too when i first came here then the second you are announced ThunderCLan, they smile and congradualate you. There testing your determination." she answered

occ: what avatar thingy? the profile pic? lets skip to the bit after the med cat fixes her wounds...

ic: "There!" Firepaw exclaimed. "Now we'll see if you get accepted!"