Duskpaw needs a mentor!

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    Duskpaw paced around Thunderclan wondering if anyone would ask to be her mentor...

    The post was edited 1 time, last by DAWNFURY ().

    Bloodstrike walked up to duskpaw and said "do you need a mentor"

    "Yeah! I do!" Duskpaw said excitedly."Do you want to be my mentor?"

    "Yes" he nodded with a smile. "Do you want to start now?"He asked.


    Occ: is duskpaw a girl or a boy
    Bloodstrike
    Tom
    Thunderclan
    Bloodstrike is kind and also strict.

    "Yeah!"
    OOC:Duskpaw is a she-cat
    Thunderclan
    She is very playful and energetic, and is kind of a trouble maker.

    "How about hunting" he suggested

    "That would br great!" Duskpaw said excitidly

    "Have you learned the hunters crouch"

    "Noooo...." Duskpaw said shyly

    "Do this" bloodstrike said crouching low "don't touch your tail to the ground but do keep your tail low"

    Duskpaw copied the crouch a couple times. "Where are we gonna' hunt?" Duskpaw said excidley.

    "in the ferns Duskpaw" he purred "if you can manage to stay quiet"

    Duskpaw raced over to the ferns and crouched low to the ground. "is this quite enough?" Duskpaw asked curiously. She heard a mouse rustling in the leaves, she pricked her ears and pounced on the kill. She bit its neck and sped toward Bloodstrike and dopped her kill proudly and waited for him to say something.

    he purred in amusment [size=7]great [/size][size=2]he meowed[/size]

    Duskpaw purred exitedly and hopped around in happiness. She went back into the ferns and started to hunt again.

    He smiled.

    Duskpaw saw a sparrow silently sitting on a branch. Duskpaw knew that she propably wouldn't make the kill but she was very determined. She scrambled up and onto the tree. When Duskpaw attempted to pounce she forgot that she was in a tree and when she landed on the branch, it cracked. "Uh-Oh :o " Duskpaw looked down and jumped to the nearest branch...

    bloodstrike tried to grab her scruff.

    As soon as Duskpaw felt Bloodstrikes grasp on her scruff she sighed.
    "Sorry." Duskpaw whimpered. She obsereved her body and found a cut on her right pad from one of the small but sharp branches. Duskpaw started to lick it to prevent bleeding.

    he nodded "med cat" he said.