Character Name:Duskpaw
Character Age:6 moons
Gender:She-cat
Alliance:Clan-cat of Cragclan
Rank:Apprentice
Appearance (6 or more sentences):Duskpaw has a dark gray pelt and light gray ear-tips. She has beautiful ice-blue eyes and a black mask pattern on her face. She has a small body type with sleek and smooth dark gray fur. Duskpaw has white paws and a white tail-tip. She also has a light gray under belly, as well as black and light gray speckles on her back. She has long, sleek legs that have more black and gray speckles running down them.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Duskpaw has a very bubbly personality, and is always brightening other cat's days. She always carries a smile on her face and strives towards helping others. Duskpaw fights for what she loves without a second thought. She also always tries to prove herself to her mentor. Duskpaw has a strong spirit that never gives up hope. She has faith in both her, her clan, and her clan-mates.
---Likes (at least 3):Duskpaw enjoys vole, fighting for her clan, and running.
--- Dislikes (at least 3):She dislikes rudeness, blood, and water.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): She is excels at climbing, hunting, and running. Duskpaw is also fairly well at cheering others up.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Duskpaw cannot swim at all. She extremely fears bats. Her biggest nightmare is being alone.
History (8 or more sentences): When Duskpaw was born, her mother died while kitting. Her father blamed her and chased her out of her clan. She was left at another clan's border where they took her in. A queen adopted her and fed her until she was able to eat real meat. Duskpaw became tired of sitting with a fake mother, and decided to try and look for her real dad. On the way, she found herself crouching in the undergrowth starving. She scented the air, another cat? she wondered as she peered around the bush she was hiding behind. It was another cat! She wandered closer. As she scented the cat she thought, he doesn't smell like any other clan cat I've seen. She gazed into the tom's eyes. That was the day when Duskpaw was welcomed into her knew home and made an apprentice.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Duskpaw was crouching behind a boulder. She scented the air, noting to herself the wind direction. Squirrel! She thought as she began a perfect hunter's crouch. She peered around the large stone to see the squirrel chewing on a nut. She made a tremendous leap, and pounced onto the squirrel. She tried to sink her jaws into the juicy prey's neck. She smiled as the taste of the prey filled her mouth. Duskpaw smiled and bounded back to camp with the limp squirrel in her jaws.
Comments (optional): If i made a mistake i would really enjoy your input on what i should change. Duskpaw already has a mentor and is joining a clan soon after this is approved.