Redclaw BloodClan

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  • Character Name:Redclaw


    Character Age:13 moons


    Gender:Tom


    Alliance:BloodClan


    Rank:Warrior


    Appearance (6 or more sentences):Light gray fur,dark gray stripes.His front left paw is white with a sideways scar.The tip of his tail looks dark reddish.He has icy blue eyes with a tint of green.He also has a little splatter looking black mark on his lower right leg. His body is slim his fur is short and he has long whiskers.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):First of all Redclaw couldn't care less about being clean.Boy is he easily annoyed.Redclaw sometimes thinks of himself as a god stronger than LionClan and TigerClan combined.Lets get this straight Redclaw hates other cats.RedClaw isn't shy its just he stays sorta undercover.RedClaw follows the warrior code but he sometimes wonders why he dosn't break it all the time.last but not least sometimes REDCLAW IS A CRAZY KILLER.
    ---Likes (at least 3):Battle,Screams,Pain
    --- Dislikes (at least 3):Peace,Friendship,Happiness
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5):
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3):filling him with rage,a belly swipe


    History (8 or more sentences):As a kit he was made fun of.He hated life and eventually escaped the gentle cityfolk and moved into BloodClan.As Redkit he seemed to be king of the nursery and how he loved it.He felt like he was king of the world and started to get bossy.As a punishment he had to stay in the nursery for another moon.As a apprentice Redpaw loved battle training.But he hated cleaning out the elders den, sadly for Redpaw all this misbehaving made him do it A LOT.As a apprentice he also loved hunting and eating it fresh but most of the time he cant because of hungry kits or elders.Oh how proud he was oh himself sadly, nobody else was really that proud of him.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):Redclaw stared into the sky. Peaceful, he hated it."Why can't there be a battle now?" he thought. Then he could have his name come true. He took a breath and sighed, this was no fun


    Comments (optional):He's a scary guy
    I hope this is good

    The post was edited 1 time, last by ~CoolGirl1~ ().



  • This is good, but after your ". , ? !" etc... Could you please space like;; "Examplepaw looked at the ground, he didn't know what to do right now." not "Examplepaw looked at the ground,he didn't know what to do right now."

  • [justify]In addition, please lengthen your roleplay sample and your sentences. They are choppy at the moment. [/justify]