Character Name: Phoenix
Alias(es) Fire Bird
Character Age: Around 23 moons, unsure.
Gender: She-cat
Alliance: The Flames(mine)
Rank: Flame
Appearance (6 or more sentences):
Phoenix is named for her orange pelt. She is an orange she-cat with golden eyes. Her eyes have green flecks, and her pelt has black, almost invisible, flecks. Her nose is a nice pink color. Her whiskers are white and long. Her fur length is short, though after a nice long grooming she tends to puff up. She has the classic /\/\ on her forehead, but the rest of her body is solid. Phoenix's muscles are always showing, even when she sleeps or isn't flexing.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Phoenix is a very strong, brave she-cat with an attitude to win. She's smart and determined and very strong willed. Phoenix has the mind of a leader, though she is a little ambitious. When I say little I mean..she wants to win, not Tigerstar ambitious.(No offense to your Tigerstar fans out there!) She's fiery, like her name states, and will always take a fall for her Flamemates(like Clanmates), for she's loyal and kind as well.
---Likes (at least 3): Sunbathing, her Flamemates, winning, races.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): cold, water, losing, swimming.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): strong, fiery, nimble.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Water, allergic to wheat, Watershooters(Flame's word for Twolegs), and heights make her dizzy. Terrified of caves, the dark and sea animals.
History (8 or more sentences):
Birth. Phoenix was born sleeping, a weak little bundle of fur that could barely breath. Her parents, Tom and Sunny, mourned her as they thought she was dying. Well, she was, but luckily, and I mean luckily, another cat, who she later found out was her uncle, knew some basic breathing herbs and saved her. But, Uncle and Tom had made a deal: When Phoenix, at this time Lucile, was exactly 6 months, Uncle would take her away to his home, and Lucile would never see them again. Tom told Sunny and, when the day came for Phoenix to leave, cried. Phoenix left with Uncle and he taught the young she-cat many life lessons. Whenever Phoenix fell he would say: "Get up, you pathetic furball." And whenever she failed an assignment he would say: "Try again. Now!" But he praised her whenever she did something right, like: "Good. Now do it again!" Uncle worked Phoenix until her bones ached every day, catching their meals, racing, carrying heavy loads, and even chasing the neighborhood cats around when they went to Twolegplace. And, unlike the case of Thistleclaw and Tigerstar, Phoenix remained a beautiful and kind she-cat. Then one day, Uncle chased Phoenix away, called her some choice words, and Phoenix left, changing her name to the bird of flames.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
Phoenix looked around. No sign of him, she mused, sighing. She lifted her head and opening her mouth, she tasted the air. Suddenly a massive, dark figure loomed over her. "Good to see you," it laughed evilly. Pheonix froze, her fur sticking on end. She'd managed to stay away from him for three nights in a row, and now she was with him again. "Can't a cat get some peace around her?" she hissed, annoyed, the tom like a fly buzzing around her. The tom shook his head. "Uncles are meant to protect, not keep peace," he spat. Phoenix sighed and stood up, staring the cat in the face. "Most. But you're just an evil dead cat."
Comments (optional): This is my first advanced bio, actually my first bio on this site. Are there post requirements or something?