Private Tutoring!1 teacher needed!

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    Hello,I just got enabled to advanced yesterday and I'm not sure if I'm doing it right...
    I see other people's posts and notice,"They post like 10 paragraphs!"..."I only post 2!Is that enough?"
    I also need punctuation tutoring,does it have a space after the period/comma?like this?_Hi!
    And some description.
    Heres my example;


    Maya sat on the mossy bed,her mind swirling.'Was I really supposed to let him go?'She pondered sadly.A tear rolled down her eye as she stared ahead,eyes unmoving and unblinking.She rest a paw on her heart,'I-I loved him...'She thought,she was temped to end it and claw her neck,but she couldn't,she wouldn't leave her family alone.
    She sighed and put her paw down.Maya lay down and close her eyes.The darkness soon overcame her and she slept fitfully.

    Okay,anything that will help. :D

    Okay, is it okay if it's just one of my posts from another thread?:


    ic: She kneeled down next to the first grave, the name was still clear. Not as worn down as any of the other graves. Robert E. Glory the name was crisp and quick on the tongue. Easy to say, yet it sounded foreign and un-familiar. "Hey dad," she folded her legs neatly under her. "I told you I'll be back, I didn't die yet." Her laugh was one with no humor, only pain. Still shaky with tears. "You always hated that I was so involved with the war. Mom did too," There is death again. Changing the simplest words, making them catch in your throat, not wanting to say them, because it would be all to painful. To painful to admit that they were gone.

    I almost cried! I can relate to this in one way...
    Okay so... a space after a period/comma/or anything else, right? Like I've been doing this whole post.