one the wolf(im makeing this so i could join a pack)

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  • Character Name:One


    Character Age:28 moons(1 year 4 months)


    Gender:male


    Alliance:none


    Rank:delta


    Appearance (6 or more sentences):Blackish wolf.Amber eyes.Has 3 large scars down his left.white socks one three legs(not reals socks but like white down his legs :P).brownish tail.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
    ---Likes (at least 3):femles :D, other wolfs, prey/food
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): other males >:P,water,twolegs
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5):parents,mates
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3):his love for a rouge,lonelyness,starveation


    History (8 or more sentences):
    when one became a pup he was a abouisus,playful little thing.As he grew old enough his father killed his mother and kicked himout.For revenge he gathered some wolfs named fire and one named ice.Fire was murderd by his father in battle,and one was injured.now he walks alone.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
    One stumbled avross 3 bears."what do you whant",snarled one.Another one said,"what are you doing here", and the threrd just attacked.Know he was outmatched he ran away.
    Comments (optional):
    thankz and one is a wolf just so you know :D


  • Hi there!


    You need to:
    --Use proper grammar
    --Run this under a word document; there are some spelling mistakes that need to be corrected.
    --Put spaces between your commas, and sentences.
    --Add three sentences to History
    --Add a personality
    ---Add a sentence to Appearance
    --Make your sentences less choppy.


    C: