Character Name: Heronflight
Character Age: 14 moons
Gender: Female/She-cat
Alliance: WindClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): A gray tabby she-cat with very neat fur that doesn't ever seem to get disorganized. She has icy blue eyes that seem to intimidate her opponents when she looks at them directly and with anger. Her paws are a delicate white and she has a distinctive scar down her right side and that usually tells cats in her Clan that she shouldn't been messed with. Her tail has dark gray stripes that go down her back and her pelt is sleek so it doesn't create resistance to air and this helps her run very fast. Heronflight is actually a bit taller then most of the cats in her Clan. This she-cat also is very skinny and not plump because of how she wants to take care of her Clan first.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Heronflight is a quiet cat. She never likes to be disturbed when sleeping in her nest and never really shares prey with her Clanmates. She hates crowds and always loves to go to quiet places and gaze up in the sky. Heronflight isn't a complete loner though, she can be very humorous and is a great story teller, but when angered, everyone that's near her backs away and when she faces an opponent with this anger, they seem to flinch and run off without fighting. She loves kits and hopes to have some of her own though she struggles to find a mate because toms don't go near her because of her quiet, yet dangerous nature. She still needs to practice with socializing and to control her temper when she gets angered.
---Likes (at least 3): Kits, stargazing, being alone, and the feeling of running fast.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Being in noisy crowds, anybody that hurts her loved ones, and fussy elders.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Combat, intimidating opponents, hunting, running fast, and tracking cats down.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Socializing, controlling her anger, and climbing trees.
History (8 or more sentences): Heronflight is a Clan-born kit`though she is not a WindClan cat. She was born in ThunderClan but her father didn't want her to be ThunderClan so he brought Heronflight to WindClan where she was clueless of her true origins. While on the journey to WindClan, a ferocious badger attacked her father and was killed. Heronflight was helpless and the badger attacked her, thus having the scar down her side. Her demise was coming but only the timely arrival of a WindClan patrol saved her from meeting StarClan. In her apprentice time, her mentor was very hard with her and trained her everyday and hour to build up her skills, and from this tough training she was given her reputation as a hard, tough cat. Her early days of being a warrior were tough, she had to go through the hardship of being alone and getting the cold shoulder from her Clanmates but one cat changed that. A tom named Azurepelt stayed with her throughout the moons until his death. He was killed in a raid by hostile loners, she was devastated, but now she is a proud WindClan warrior, but she still doesn't know her true origins as being ThunderClan.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Heronflight chased down the intruder loner cats, she was furious because they deliberately stole prey that rightfully belonged to WindClan. She quickened her pace and caught up with one of the intruders and pounced on the silver tabby cat, her eyes burning with rage. "What're you doing stealing prey on WindClan territory loner?!" she growls fiercely, her unsheathed claws digging into the cat's pelt.
The intruder yowls in pain as he struggled under Heronflight's strong, powerful muscles. She saw the cat's companion bowl her away. She skidded across the grassy hills and scowled in anger, her chance to show these intruders that WindClan shouldn't be tampered with just ran off into the distance.
Comments (optional): This is my first advanced bio so I'm glad it came out good! 
I hope it'll be accepted!
