Moonpaw of CypressClan

This is an archived version of FeralFront. While you can surf through all the content that was ever created on FeralFront, no new content can be created.
If you'd like some free FeralFront memorabilia to look back on fondly, see this thread from Dynamo (if this message is still here, we still have memorabilia): https://feralfront.com/thread/2669184-free-feralfront-memorabilia/.
  • Character Name: Moonpaw


    Character Age: 7 moons


    Gender: she-cat


    Alliance: CypressClan.


    Rank: Apprentice


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): She is a pitch black she-cat that has a few speckles of grey in her. She also has a huge round greyish white spot on her back. Moonpaw has blazing copper eyes that always sparkle. She also has big pointy ears that have tufts of black fur on the top. Her whiskers are grey and short with a blackish tint to them. You can always tell her emotions from her eyes. Voice wise, she has a gravely voice, and sort of calming. She has a roundish nose, well as round of a nose a cat can get, that is black. Her fur is almost invisible at night because it is so black/dark. But thats a different story in the daylight. She always keeps her fur shiny so it glows in daylight.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): All she is, is nice. No matter what she will be nice to any cat , young or old. All except is that cat, killed, is obsessive or is disrespectful. So she is also crazy-like sometimes when she is being mean. She can get VERY bossy. When it comes to love... She has no clue even if she loves a tom in particular. She doesn't know she really likes him yet though. Conversations with her can become awkward sometimes because she is an awkward cat.
    Also, she puts her muzzle in things she doesn't need to hear/ see. She is clostrophobic, too and hates the feeling that the world is pressing around her. A lot of cats make her feel small and unwanted because she seems so bossy all the time. She will fight till the end for her clan, eve if it means she will die. If she thinks something is wrong, she will fix it. No matter what she will be loyal until the end. She is also courageous and logical.


    ---Likes (at least 3):To keep to herself, hunting, sun-bathing, warm days, Greenleaf, kits, having fun, playing, becoming a warrior, leading
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): unnecessary blood shed, sickness, vole meat, hatefulness, obsessive cats, meanness, being unfriendly, and bossyness(even though she is)
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Hunting, climbing, convincing, her couageousness
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): pity, death, pain, blood, taunting, mean cats, swimming


    History (8 or more sentences): She was kitted by a pool of water. The moon was full and reflected off of the water. Her mother decided to call her Moonkit beacuse of the way it 'spoke' to her. She was the only kit her mother had ever so she was very protective of her. But she grew up as happy as can be. Then her pelt suddely started to get a big light grey circle on her back an that was how she lived up to her name. Pretty soon after there was a battle and she wanted to fight alongside her clan. So she snuck out of camp to fight anyone who dared to threaten her clan. She found a big tom first he was over twice her size and looked vicious. He leaped at her with a killing look in his blue eyes. He didn't realize she was a kit until it was too late. Moonkit was pinned to the ground by the throat the next thing she knew. He was pinning her with his claws sheathed though. He growled to her, " Where is your camp?" She manage to choke out, " I'm not telling." His claws slid out and blood welled around Moonkits neck. She must tell him before he kills her! "Okay!" She choked out, even harder this time to mew. She led him to it but in her heart she knew it was wrong. She was betraying her own clan! But an ambush was waiting for the tom and the kit. He was then killed on the spot. Moonkit didn't understnd what was going on at all. Then a cat walked up to her. "I overheared your conversation." He moewed, "And I wanted to help you." An that day she was apprenticed with the name Moonpaw.


    Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): not my first


    Comments (optional): nope

    The post was edited 1 time, last by MissKia ().

  • Hi MissKia! Your bio looks great, except for one thing;


    could you make your sentences a little less choppy?

  • Ill try my best! and sorry for doing it i knew i shouldn't have.... :-\


    THERE! im finished

    The post was edited 1 time, last by MissKia ().



  • Sorry it took so long to get back to you on this!


    Have fun roleplaying~