Character Name: Bumble
Character Age: 13 moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: LONER
Rank: loner...
Appearance (6 or more sentences): A stocky-built cream tom. He has wavy dark cream stripes. Also, his stripes ripple down his long back. His tail is ringed with slightly lighter stripes than the ones on his back. He has some complex markings on his forehead and cheeks. But his face is just cream. He has yellow-green eyes that are always hard to tell what he is thinking. He also has broad shoulders. He is a long-furred cat. His eyes are also narrow and exotic. His ears are pointed and rather large. He always maintains his pelt. He never lets it have grime or bolod stay on it for long. Bumbles' fur glows in the sunshine. He has a smooth voice that gets him out of trouble a lot. His paws are white, too. His cream pelt makes him easy to spot. Oh and if you look at his history you will understand why he also has a limp in his back left leg.
[/Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Bumble has a very defined personality. He is crazy mad sometimes. And when he is he snaps like a twig. that rarley happens, though. He also can be very independant and mischeivious. Bumble is mean. He has few friends, and he wants to keep it that way. His mean side makes up most of him. He does have a soft side too. Some call him a softie for elders. Others for kits. So basicly he has a HUGE soft spot for old cats and young cats too. He also hates blood shed. That is a huge weakness. Sometimes he has good days and he is cheerful. But he also has bad or tired days when he snaps at everone. He has learned a bit of twoleg hand language and some words. (Not the complete language)
---Likes (at least 3): nice days, gatherings, other clans, and being bored
--- Dislikes (at least 3): sickness, leaf-fall, bad cays, being tired, and blood shed, and monsters
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): hunting, climbing, determination
---Weaknesses (At least 3): kits, elders, blood, nice cats
History (8 or more sentences): He was born in a twolegplace. He has never shared his secret with ANYONE. He was about 3 moons old. He was purring in his twoleg's lap. The twolegs name he beilieves is Mary but he can only sort of guess. So he was laying on Marys lap. All of the sudden the large female came in and told Mary something in a soft tone. Mary started crying and the tear drops landed on her head as she hugged Bumble. He was then fit into a cave with cold bars on one end and holes in the sides. Bumble noticed he was being picked up in the cave. He mewed out in fright. He heared his mothers soothing mew not far away. "You'll be safe soon little one. Goodbye, I will never see you again ,but always remember me." She mewed. So he was put in the belly of a monster the next thing he knew. He kept on mewing out in hope of someone hearing him. He felt the monter start to rumble. Bumble lurched as it started to move. 'He was being taken away!' He thought wildly. He didn't want to leave the comfort of his nest and home! He wasn't ready for all of this to happen! Before he knew it the monster had stopped and he was being taken out again. There was a strange building where he was carried into. He heard barking. He squirmed to the back of the cave thing. The dogs sounded close by. Pretty soon he was taken out of the cave and set onto a table. A nice female twoleg came out of a door and started to inspect him. She made a few comments on him and put him in a big room. One thing is there were many, MANY cats in that room. He was put into a cave that had more room. It had more holes, too. Three other kittens were in with him. From then on he played with them. They told him all about being adopted. Bumble hoped and prayed every day to be adopted. Two of the three cats were adopted by seemingly nice female twolegs. He was now 9 moons old. One day a strange man walked in. He padded over to the cage Bumble was in. He pointed to Bumble with his stubby pink finger. The lady pulled him out of the cave. She gave him to the man and he put him into another cave, but smaller. He put Bumble into a big monster and when he finally got him out he was in a horrible house there were tears in the sides and roof. Bumble heard mice all over the barn. He crouched in a not-so-good crouch. He slid forward. It almost came naturally. He saw 3 mice all in one spot. He leaped and landed on all of them. Bumble killed them quickly as the male twoleg came back in the barn. He was carrying a stick of some sort. As he came in he saw the cat and ran toward Bumble. The stick came crashing down on his back left leg. He yowled in pain but he just kept on running for a hole in the wall. He let out an enourmous leap and glided through the gaping hole. He had escaped! Now he lives as a loner as I said. (Is that enough for you?)
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