Just running

"Me neither............do you think we should leave if it dosen't leave?" She asked.
She had an earg to jump down but held it in. She climb a little higher and then stopped in a surprise.
"Hey....i think you should look at this" She said to Birchpaw.
She looked down and then back up to where she was looking. She looked closer and almost fell, What she saw was 10 more monsters getting rid of the grass and some of the trees.
"I hope we will be ok"Blackpaws thought to herself in worry.

"Well what should we do!"
Blackpaws never took her eyes off the monsters. She looked at the farthest one.
"I think that where the last one is where the edge of the thunderclan line is, if you haven't heard of that then it is then line that the cats watch for other clans and for the monsters they have made that line because that is the farthest that the monsters will go since right after that line of trees that is now gone is deep dark forest and you can't see 3paws in front of you"

'Hmm' Blackpaws shrugged her shoulders and then followed after bIrchpaw.
The very first jump she took adn she fell, right when she got up she remembered the food. She ran into the den then climbed the tree and jumped again and made it.
"Hey, do you think we will either find another place to stay, also i hope that is soon since i don't want to be carring this thing far?" She asked him.
"With distaste and dis-comfort, this thing better taste better when we eat the meat or else i am going to hid my head over a tree"Blackpaws thought to her self.

She shrugged her sholduers and they went on jumping from tree to tree like monkeys. Then finaly she stopped adn there where no trees left. They where to late and the monsters had taken down the path to saftey. Blackpaws look at Birchpaw in worrry then looked back.

"What is it?" Blackpaws asked him nervously.
She looked out and saw the monster too and decided to copy his face expression.
"Oh man what will happen when that thing crosses the line" Blackpaws thought to herself in pity.

Blackpaws nodded then went running. She heard Birchpaw right behinde her. She ran and turned her head to see that a monster was heading straight for them. Blackpaws wanted to yell run to Birchpaw but it was no use she was frozen where she stands.
"RUN!!!"

Blackpaws meowed as loud as she could then jumped in fear fo realizing how loud that was. Then she was running again. She haden't noticed that Birchpaw was way up in front of her. He must have ran when she said it. Then out of no where a monster turns and ii heading straight for Birchpaw.

She was running faster, faster then she ever had before to save a cat who she had liked to keep.
She was running almost there, finally she wass close enough to yell out.
"STOP!"
All she saw now was that the monster passed and she ddin't know what had happened to Birchpaw.
She ran over to where he was and aw him standing there frozen and curled. The monster had not hit him.

"Oh man are you ok!" Blackapws was in shock bt got the words out.
"That thing could have crushed you!"
She had not seen it cause of the trees but then it happened the monsters where passed the line.
It was a thunderclans cat's worst ngihtmare.

"Oh no"Wass all that she could say to herself.

(OTHER SCENE, NOTHNIG IMPORTANT)

When are we going home, when are we going back, are we ever going to get back. These are the questions i ask myself before a fight. Then as ia m on my last thought the doors open and the fight has begun. Now there is no time to think only fight. And as that thought left my miund i am running for the fight.

"That thing almost got you!" She said worringly
She couldn't help it she was worried about him no matter how hard she thought of to ot think about him it always came back.
"We should go worn the Thundclan leader then shouldn't we?" She asked in a question that she knew the answer to but wanted to hear what he said.

She nodded with him then she ran into the forest trying to make sure that the monsters weren't there first. She ran adn ran,
"Hmm, the thunderclan usually isn't this far?"
She whipped around to face Birchpaw.

(Just another non important scene)

Just as i am about to win something pounsis on my back everything has been taken away form me even my tail.

(Not important but i think that there should be something that mkes then run away from the thunderclan something that really scares them but not to much that we actually leave the thunder clan)