breathed so deep — open & drowning.

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  • daydreams made manifest dulled eyes of honey as they trailed from one end of what they could see of the river to the other. the river had become one of palepaw's favourite sights - not only for its sheer beauty, as a cerulean canvas dotted with the scintilla of pale light and paler spray - but simply for what it meant to her clan. it was the namesake of riverclan, after all. yet palepaw had to admit her fondness for the body of water was not entirely sincere; she had thought, as a riverclanner, she owed it to her clanmates to be as much like them as she could possibly be. and mastering the art of swimming was one of those things that would help her do just that.


    palepaw could swim - that much was true. she had taken it upon herself to learn the science behind it, and it had seemed something even a kit would know. to move through water, you had to move water. it was that simple, but when you were in the water it wasn't. a paradox, born of her own fear of the deep and what lurked in it - stygian creatures clinging to the shadows where they made their home, until serpentine limbs would snake, writhing, out, and up, and towards her and take her down, and make her drown.


    palepaw didn't mind water. but she didn't like the deep at all.


    so it was with trembling legs and round eyes the girl stood at the banks of that deep. it was a shame she was so afraid, for it was not only fear that widened those ochre eyes. that look in her eyes was a disjointed one, not quite as cohesive or organised or all that there as most looks were. and so alongside that fear was the suggestion of awe - not just the terror the seemingly bottomless body of water inspired, but a trace of reverence, of respect. wonder.


    palepaw slid into the water with a deftness unexpected of a girl so scared of what she was entering. as she swam, she forced herself not to dwell on the distance between her paws and the river floor, nor the distance between here and the camp - for what if she drowned, and there was no one here to save her? - instead deigning, albeit with difficulty, to envisage she was in a shallow stream, and she was a real riverclanner. that she had known how to swim for longer than the single moon she had.


    palepaw almost didn't realise when she started to drown.


    she couldn't breathe in. she knew that. there was nothing to breathe it but the arctic-raw water. but heartbeats passed, seconds passed, minutes passed, and she needed air. a fierce, fiery yet numbingly cold agony gripped her - her lungs, her heart, everything - her physicality, her mind. she had to breathe. already the blackness of pure nothingness was tugging at her, pulling hard as if it were a magnetic force that would snap her brittle bones, the fragile fragments of ivory that made up her frail little skeleton, before it would dare release her from its grasp. she very nearly succumbed to that blackness until, through some force she never knew she could exert, she surfaced. if only once, if only briefly.


    "help!" palepaw cried, before the water collapsed over her once more.

  • YOU CAN BE KING AGAIN


    Fallensky was a monster. A demon, a horrendous one. He had tossed kittens in the river because he had seen them as if they were unfit to live. But, he did not view everyone this way. There was a shred of decency left in the tuxedo tom. And, he had not very well known this Palepaw child, but he had been watching. Partially, to get respect from his Clanmates. Possibly to get the she-cat to join his side.


    He did not expect her to nearly die. He had watched her, and saw her head go under. His eyes widened with care, yes, actual care as he rushed forward to help her. The tom leaped into the water, checking for the height, before paddling on. Yeah, there was too much at stake here. His honeyed gaze focused on her, burning with a fierce determination to get her out, and get her out alive. He swam quickly, as quickly as he could, attempting to grasp her by the scruff. Even if it did not work, he would still call out to her, "Palepaw, you need to breathe and keep paddling, if you keep going under, let your body go to the surface!"

  • “oh great starclan!” Came her cry, really? Someone else almost drowning?? Pebble paw rushed to the side of the bank, watching Fallensky closely, she ran downstream, leaping in with a splash! and making sure to paddle. She was a strong swimmer, seeing as she was pure blood, she had the oily fur Riverclanners relied on to help with swimming, and the muscles in her legs were already developed from running. Swimming wasn’t that different, right? Just running... underwater. She stayed downstream, if the current sucked the apprentice down stream, Pebblepaw would be there to grab her. She was small, and would struggle with the weight, but wouldn’t let the girl die. Couldn’t let her denmate die. She thought of her mother when her siblings disappeared, grief-stricken, not speaking for days, surely this girl had a mom who would cry if she died. But that didn’t matter anyways, Pebblepaw would cry if she let a girl die on her watch.

    SOUNDING, DOWN THE MOUNTAIN RANGE, BEHIND BOTH OF MY EYES !tags




  • 「 adolescene — didn't make sense 」

    All the sudden the cats closest seemed to go into a panic, causing chamomilepaw to race over, her eyes wide. Okay, okay, think. Think think think.


    The pale yellow eyes belonging to the large feline scanned the area for a smooth patch for her to be dragged to, or perhaps swim to. She dare not leap in, for she hardly knew how to swim in the first place, and it would leave no one ready to run. She paced a bit, switching her weight between paws as she watched. This was okay, she'd helped with drowned cats before, she could.. she could do this until someone more qualified came along. "O-Okay, Palepaw, it's okay! Just.. Some one make sure she gets over here, I know how to help!" she called out. Oh, how weak she felt, watching the three bodies move within the flowing water, as if they themselves belonged to it.


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  • the water was bitingly cold but her lithe body felt as though it were alight with fire. the need that all animals had - the need for oxygen, precious oxygen - pushed at her weak lungs, pushed until she caved to the pressure to inhale, to exhale, to breathe again. and so she did. for the most wonderful of split-seconds, it felt as though the air was rushing in to where it belonged, as if she was on dry land once more and not drowning, drowning, drowning.


    a pair of jaws closed around the back of her neck. she did not immediately register the intent of this. though her limbs felt limp and her nerves numb, she kept flailing, blind panic taking over the common sense she had thought she had so much of. thanks to her rescuer, she was able to surface, her head emerging abruptly from the river's depths. the girl gasped for breath, her jaws grasping at the air, her lungs seizing well-needed oxygen with earnest.


    "tha -" she began to thank fallensky, before a sudden, sharp cough pushed the water from her lungs. her ochre eyes, though glassy, held the gratitude she had not yet verbalised. "thank... you," she tried again, a weak smile gracing her delicate features, her voice softened with appreciation.

  • YOU CAN BE KING AGAIN


    Fallensky has not paid much attention to his daughter or to Chamomilepaw. His ears flickered upon hearing Cham’s call, a sign that he heard her. But, she was flailing, still flailing. If Palepaw wanted to get out of this alive, she would need to stop being so scared! Eventually, her limbs went limp and he managed to drag her up to the surface. He watched her cough, though did not judge her and simply nodded to her thanks. The tuxedo tom would attempt to keep her in his jaws as he would try to bring her to shore.