"My Dear Sister..." {PRIVATE}

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  • The story of a forsaken twin seeking 'revenge' on the surviving sibling.


    Paige {My Character} is either living with friends or living with her great-aunt and great-uncle (Who are based off of Muriel & Eustace from Courage The Cowardly Dog, respectively).


    On top of the titular monster/ghost twin, Melanie, you'll also be playing NPCs/side characters.



    Melanie has more monstrous features, but looks almost the same.


    JET !!  

  • oooo hell yes,, I'm so up for this plot tbh?? I'd also def be willing to write whatever npc / side characters needed! <3

  • I'm definetly up for that!!! the relatives especially sound very interesting!! i'd be happy to write them!!

  • Oo that sounds interesting!! However you'd like to start from there I'll hop right in!

  • Paige couldn't move. She couldn't do anything but stare up at the ceiling. Was she awake? Asleep? Her brain couldn't tell. The pajama-clad blonde had been trying her hardest to get some shut-eye. Especially since during the last few days, she had difficulty doing so. With problems ranging from restless to incomprehensible nightmares.


  • Paige. She'd always been so pretty, nearly without trying. Whatever figure it is that sits at her desk doesn't seem to mind the girl being awake. It had been aware it was the cause of these nightmares, yet continued to nearly torture Paige away from her much needed rest. This creature has a name - had, perhaps - Melanie. She'd nearly be a copy of the other, had it not been for the horrendous features that graced her own, spectral face. Why was she here again? Even she herself tended to forget. Their relatives were nearly cruel enough to Paige, but she felt like she had to add her own touch. Ghostly hand on her chin, she watches curiously as the girl stares at the ceiling, nearly offering a laugh. Perhaps she's wondering? Who was Melanie to know? Twin insticts hadn't blessed her.

  • C'mon, move! MOVE!


    Paige continued to turn her head. Or at the very least try to. But to no avail. She continued her desperate thrashing, only for it to stop when she caught a quick look at her desk. Where a lone figure sat. Now, Paige made sure to keep her door and window locked tight. No one could get in without busting one of them open.


    To top off the creepiness factor: The figure looked...Familiar...

  • Though refraining from uttering a word, the ghostly intruder wiggles her fingers in greeting. Though it was a seemingly childish action, Melanie found it to be rather amusing. She felt spoken words would ruin the magic between them. Paige looked frightened enough to begin with. The shadowy figure doesn't lunge for her, or even make a move from the girl's desk. Rather simply, she spins the chair instead. She offers a laugh that would send a shutter down anyones spine. Oh, Paige.

  • Paige's eyes went wide when the mystery person wiggled their fingers. At her. They effing saw her! This...This was bad. And when the chair spun around in her direction, followed by a chilling laugh, she desperately tried to tell herself this was a nightmare. Nothing more, nothing less. M-Maybe she'd just fallen asleep and thought this was sleep paralysis...Yeah!


    "Please be a dream, please be a dream, please be a dream..."

  • Ah, Melanie could follow that lead. The semi - girly figure puts a finger to her busted lips, head bobbing in response. If she wanted to continue to plague Paige's peaceful dreams, she'd have to keep a low profile. If their relatives hear some sort of screaming, she'd never get her rightfully deserved revenge. Was that what it was? Perhaps it was redemption. ❛ shh! it won't be a dream if they hear you!

  • Paige disobeyed that little request. She let out a wail with the intent of getting somebody...ANYBODY up. Or maybe to rouse herself back to reality, if the dream theory was true. If it wasn't: She might as well hope for that rescue. Best case scenario was her Great Aunt waking up and coming. Worst case scenario: Her Great Uncle.


    (She either gets her sweet-yet-sorta naive Great Aunt or her grouchy-greedy-just-awful Great Uncle. Or both.)

  • [mmMM i love them both already fhjbekf sorry paige she gets both]


    Melanie cringes visibly at the girl's screech. Such things shouldn't affect her, and yet... Her busted lips twist into some sort of devious sneer, fading away before the blink of an eye, vanished without a trace. Not many things could anger the ghostly girl, but the thought of their relatives busting in roused it. She'd be back, Paige could count on it. She'd never go.


    Much in Paige's fortune, a soft knock sounds at her bedroom door. Paige, honey! ❜ The voice of her great aunt can be heard on the other side, her grumbling great uncle's own voice echoing from down the hall. As usual, the man was whining to go back to bed. ❛ are you alright in there, dear? I thought I heard you yell! we just wanted to make sure you weren't having another dream!

  • In a flash, Paige regained her mobility. She could move everything now. Her arms, her legs...Everything! She heard two voices outside of her door. One belonged to her Aunt, the other...Yeah. It was him. "Y-Yeah! But...I think someone got in. Or I just dreamed it." the blonde called back. How much of that had been reality? Hard to tell.

  • Once Paige utters the words, her great uncle is off to go look about the house at his wife's command. oh, honey! that's horrible! ❜ The woman insists, frowning at the wooden door. ❛ your uncle will make sure no one's in the house, alright? don't worry about it, dear! you need your sleep!Even she knew Paige hadn't gotten much rest recently. Something like this would only make it worse for the girl.

  • "Thank you, Auntie."


    Paige pulled the blankets over herself and shut her eyes. This time, she would sleep. She wasn't about to let sleep deprivation get to her. That girl? Probably a nightmare. Like she had theorized earlier. A good night's rest would fix everything. Right...?


    (The next morning, at breakfast, the night's events are discussed. Whereas the aunt offers support and concern, the uncle gripes and implies Paige is crazy.)

  • did you get any sleep after last night, dear? ❜ Her aunt questions, pointing a fork to the girl's plate of food when she wanders from her room. Her uncle says nothing at first, offering her a grunt as his eyes skim the daily newspaper. ❛ we didn't find anything, so you don't have to worry about that. probably just some pesky nightmare.❜ Now, her great uncle speaks up.


    you think yer' head ain't screwed on right or somethin', Paige?


    oh, shush! let her eat her breakfast in peace! ignore his rambling, come eat, honey.

  • The rest of the night had gone smoothly. Paige had managed to fall asleep; With a lingering feel of paranoia. Like she thought that ghost girl would return. Still clad in her pajamas, the half-asleep blonde had taken her seat at the kitchen table. "Good enough." she answered her Aunt with a tiny, reassuring smile.


    And then her uncle added his two-cents. Which left the blonde scowling to herself. Scowling at him just wasted energy. She began to eat and attempted to ignore him.

  • good! i'm glad you got any, dear! ❜ Her aunt balances out her uncle's nasty words, the man in question sparing them both glares. Nearly threateningly, she steals a piece of bacon from his plate. if you want, honey, we can go to a doctor about this. I know it's been hard for you. ❜ Something is grumbled from her uncle's half the table, another glare sent his way. ❛ you're not helping her, so shush.