First off, the Clan of the Falls does not believe in Starclan and the Dark Forest. I have a tab about their beliefs in the first post (unless the code got messed again and I have to fix it). Second off, Ambergaze's name violates the naming rules. And third, while I don't expect anyone to know this, Smallstar died a very long time ago, when Greyfrost was young.
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oh right, I'll change those things then :)
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Though did check how old Lochstar is, and if I were to compare it to when Shadowthorn was born, then she would be too young to have been leader then, so decided to see who was the last leader before Lochstar, and the last name was Smallstar ^^'
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That's understandable. I didn't expect anyone to know that (though I might want to write that somewhere).
If anybody, it might have been a young, freshly-apointed Floodstar. I place him to 6 or 7 years old (Near end of his prime) when he died, and he died at the start of the Rp, so either 72 or 84 moons. It should be possible that it had been Floodstar, if that helps
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okay, I'll change it to Floodstar then :)
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Shadowthorn
Past names: Shadowkit, Shadowpaw
Future names: none (unless he's chosen as a deputy, later on into the roleplay, if the deputy dies, or if the leaders in on her last life, and he's chosen as the next deputy, by the new clan leader) Then he'll be Shadowstar when he becomes leader
User's name: Wavernoid
Rank: warrior(been a warrior for 5 moons)
Age: 21 moons
Gender: Male
Short Description: Shadowthorn is a black-long haired norwegian tom, with yellow eyes
Personality: Shadowthorn is an easy-going tom-cat, when it comes to newcomers, or newly made apprentices, yet from time to time he can be pretty carefree, though stays loyal to his clan, and tries his best to follow the warrior code, which was the reason, he first became a warrior when he was 16 moons, though he cares for his clan, and will always care for the clan
Likes:
to hunt on his own
Peaceful nights
Dislikes:
Snow
Starclan(read history/and Rp sample to know the reasons)
Strengths:
from the age of 40-50)Confrontation
Fighting
Weaknesses:
Humor
Patience
History:
Rp sample:
Shadowpaw looked at his father, lying on the ground, there were no blood, and the medicine cat had told his mother, that there were no signs of something that could kill him, and he was still healthy enough to stay as a warrior for maybe 30 more moons, Shadowpaw nudged his father "Please don't leave" he cried with a low tone, his father looked up "I'm sorry Shadowpaw, but I think I just need to be with other warriors in Starclan, so I asked Starclan, to let me join them" he meowed, and comforted his young son "I know it's hard to understand, but believe, that sometimes, things like these, all has a good reason for it to happen" he explained, as he closed his eyes, and stopped breathing, he was dead, and was taken to Starclan, by a cat who had been in Starclan for quite a while, Shadowpaw looked at his father's dead body, and cried even more "Please... PLEASE DON'T LEAVE!" he cried, and felt his mother's tail on his shoulder "I know it's hard, but I'm still here" she meowed, before having her tail pulled away by her son, who looked at her with anger in his eyes "He was still strong enough! He shouldn't die!.... Not.... Now!" he cried, as he left the medicine den, and out of the camp, before anyone could stop him, not far after, Shadowpaw couldn't remember where he was, he looked around, beginning to panic, before hearing a voice to his left "Lost, and hurt are we?" a black figure asked him, he blinked one time, and the black figure was in front of him, he backed away, and looked at the black figure more clearly, it was clear that it was an one of those evil dead cats, he then looked down "Yeah... those ancestors, who did amazing things, when they were alive, decided to accept, that my father, who was strong and healthy, and didn't have any reason to leave, wanted to join them" he explained, and felt a paw from the dark ancestor cat on his shoulder, "If you train in with me, during your sleep, or perhaps when you have the time during the day, I'm sure your father can see, how wrong he was, to leave you, and in a few moments after you became an apprentice, what an evil father, who is allowed to join the so called good ancestors, then again, they never seem to see the cats like me's pain and sorrow, as well as regret" The dark ancestor cat meowed, Shadowpaw looked at the Dark dark cat "Well... I..." he paused, and took a deep breath "Can I think.... About the offer?" he asked, the Dark Forest cat nodded "Of course, you have until next High Moon" The Dark ancestor cat meowed, before disappearing into the shadows
Family: Ambergaze(mother)(unkown siblings + Half-siblings from the age of 40-50)
Crush/Mate: open/open
Other: 10/10 Black, Yellow
Darkpelt
Past names: Darkkit, Darkpaw
Future names: none
User's name: Wavernoid
Rank: Elder
Age: 90 moons old
Gender: female
Short Description: Ambergaze is a dark grey norwegian cat, with amber eyes
Personality: Ambergaze is a cat, who loves to cheer up the younger cats, and even the other elders, in her youth, she was a strong and clever cat, yet her strength has begun to fade, she's still determined, to protect her clan, when needed, she loves telling stories about different warriors
Likes:
to tell stories
Cheer others up
Dislikes:
Thunder
Cats who always fight each other, for some reason
Strengths:
Endurance
Strength
Weaknesses:
Tactics
Speed
History: Ambergaze was born to a dark tabby cat, who died at birth, Ambergaze has always been determined through her life, though she have broken the warrior code once, by mating with a cat outside the clans and regretted it, and decided to give the kits to her mate, from outside the clans at 69 moons, she got Shadowkit, and hoped that she would be happy, as her other kits, had decided to leave the clans, that Shadowkit would stay in the clan, and that her new mate, in the clan, would be there for him, in most of Shadowkit's life, yet that didn't happened, ever since her mate died, Shadowkit now Shadowthorn, had always acted differently, towards her
Rp sample: (follow up to the other RP sample, in Shadowthorn's form)
Ambergaze sighed, what had she done wrong? She just wanted to comfort him, yet he became distant, to quickly, and she just wanted to be strong for the both of them, she looked at the Medicine cat, who had been outside after Shadowpaw ran out of the camp, and had offered Ambergaze something to eat, yet Ambergaze just pushed the prey away with her paw "I know I should get something to eat, but I guess I'm not hungry, and since my mate is gone, and Shadowpaw probably doesn't want to talk to me, and the fact that I'm almost 70 moons, then I guess I should tell Floodstar, that I would be retiring to the elder den" she meowed, as she went over to talk to Floodstar, and told Floodstar, that she would be retiring to the elder den, which Floodstar accepted
Family: Shadowthorn(son) Unkown kits from the age of 40-50
Crush/Mate: too old/1 mate outside the clan(unkown probably deceased) 2 mates within the clan (both deceased)
Other: 10/10 Dark Grey, Amber
all done :)
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I feel legitimately bad about this, and I'm really sorry to ask you again, but can you revise Shadowthorn's history?
Everything else about your forms is fine, expect that it still doesn't fully follow the beliefs of the clan.
I have two things I want suggest to you, but of course, you don't have to follow them. I just want to help because that's the only thing that's really stopping me from accepting them and I feel terrible about it
1. If you want to keep it so that Shadowthorn came into contact with the Spirit of a bad cat, maybe you could make it so that Darkpelt was born in a different clan that believed in Starclan, and came here? That way, it would make more sense as to why there would be a Dark Forest cat talking with Shadowpaw.
2. If you want them to be clan-born, you could possibly make the dark cat, be an actual living cat who really hates the Clan of the Falls.
I have a feeling that some of this was because the first post about the clan was not exactly clear. When I have time, I will see what I can do to make this clearer for everyone.
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(nr. 2 sounds nice, I'll change the rp sample to that)
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Shadowthorn
Past names: Shadowkit, Shadowpaw
Future names: none (unless he's chosen as a deputy, later on into the roleplay, if the deputy dies, or if the leaders in on her last life, and he's chosen as the next deputy, by the new clan leader) Then he'll be Shadowstar when he becomes leader
User's name: Wavernoid
Rank: warrior(been a warrior for 5 moons)
Age: 21 moons
Gender: Male
Short Description: Shadowthorn is a black-long haired norwegian tom, with yellow eyes
Personality: Shadowthorn is an easy-going tom-cat, when it comes to newcomers, or newly made apprentices, yet from time to time he can be pretty carefree, though stays loyal to his clan, and tries his best to follow the warrior code, which was the reason, he first became a warrior when he was 16 moons, though he cares for his clan, and will always care for the clan
Likes:
to hunt on his own
Peaceful nights
Dislikes:
Snow
Starclan(read history/and Rp sample to know the reasons)
Strengths:
from the age of 40-50)Confrontation
Fighting
Weaknesses:
Humor
Patience
History:
Shadowkit was born in the clan of the fallen, and lost his father not long after his apprentice ceremony, he then had run off, and met a mysterious cat, who had an ancestor from the clan, the cat had offered to train him, at the old camp, and he has never told it to anyone, other than those he knows he can trust, and those who betrayed him, was killed not long after, he had told Lochstar, that it was just some joke, they tried to make up, to make him look bad
Rp sample:
Shadowpaw looked at his father, lying on the ground, there were no blood, and the medicine cat had told his mother, that there were no signs of something that could kill him, and he was still healthy enough to stay as a warrior for maybe 30 more moons, Shadowpaw nudged his father "Please don't leave" he cried with a low tone, his father looked up "I'm sorry Shadowpaw, but I think I just need to be with other warriors in the afterlife, I asked them to let me join them" he meowed, and comforted his young son "I know it's hard to understand, but believe, that sometimes, things like these, all has a good reason for it to happen" he explained, as he closed his eyes, and stopped breathing, he was dead, and was taken to Starclan, by a cat who had been in Starclan for quite a while, Shadowpaw looked at his father's dead body, and cried even more "Please... PLEASE DON'T LEAVE!" he cried, and felt his mother's tail on his shoulder "I know it's hard, but I'm still here" she meowed, before having her tail pulled away by her son, who looked at her with anger in his eyes "He was still strong enough! He shouldn't die!.... Not.... Now!" he cried, as he left the medicine den, and out of the camp, before anyone could stop him, not far after, Shadowpaw couldn't remember where he was, he looked around, beginning to panic, before hearing a voice to his left "Lost, and hurt are we?" a black figure asked him, he blinked one time, and the black figure was in front of him, he backed away, and looked at the black figure more clearly, he didn't knew the cat at all, so he stood ready to attack, but the cat didn't seemed to want to fight him "Easy there young one, I wouldn't attack someone who have lost someone dear to them, and not getting listened to at all" the cat meowed, Shadowpaw looked in confusement "But, you're not from the clan, and you're in the fallen clan territory" he meowed, the cat sat down "True, but I did have an ancestor here in the clan, but his ways of wanting to lead the clan, wasn't how Rainstar wanted rule the clan, so he was exiled from the clan, and I must admit, your appearance reminds me of him a little bit, and that tragic story of losing someone dear, is a bit similar too, so if you want the clan to listen to you more often, and don't say that some dead cats, only does what's best for someone, even if it hurts others, then come to the old clan camp in the next high moon" the cat meowed, before getting up and left Shadowpaw, who was found by a patrol, not much later than the cat had left
Family: Ambergaze(mother)(unkown siblings + Half-siblings from the age of 40-50)
Crush/Mate: open/open
Other: 10/10 Black, Yellow
Darkpelt
Past names: Darkkit, Darkpaw
Future names: none
User's name: Wavernoid
Rank: Elder
Age: 90 moons old
Gender: female
Short Description: Ambergaze is a dark grey norwegian cat, with amber eyes
Personality: Ambergaze is a cat, who loves to cheer up the younger cats, and even the other elders, in her youth, she was a strong and clever cat, yet her strength has begun to fade, she's still determined, to protect her clan, when needed, she loves telling stories about different warriors
Likes:
to tell stories
Cheer others up
Dislikes:
Thunder
Cats who always fight each other, for some reason
Strengths:
Endurance
Strength
Weaknesses:
Tactics
Speed
History: Ambergaze was born to a dark tabby cat, who died at birth, Ambergaze has always been determined through her life, though she have broken the warrior code once, by mating with a cat outside the clans and regretted it, and decided to give the kits to her mate, from outside the clans at 69 moons, she got Shadowkit, and hoped that she would be happy, as her other kits, had decided to leave the clans, that Shadowkit would stay in the clan, and that her new mate, in the clan, would be there for him, in most of Shadowkit's life, yet that didn't happened, ever since her mate died, Shadowkit now Shadowthorn, had always acted differently, towards her
Rp sample: (follow up to the other RP sample, in Shadowthorn's form)
Ambergaze sighed, what had she done wrong? She just wanted to comfort him, yet he became distant, to quickly, and she just wanted to be strong for the both of them, she looked at the Medicine cat, who had been outside after Shadowpaw ran out of the camp, and had offered Ambergaze something to eat, yet Ambergaze just pushed the prey away with her paw "I know I should get something to eat, but I guess I'm not hungry, and since my mate is gone, and Shadowpaw probably doesn't want to talk to me, and the fact that I'm almost 70 moons, then I guess I should tell Floodstar, that I would be retiring to the elder den" she meowed, as she went over to talk to Floodstar, and told Floodstar, that she would be retiring to the elder den, which Floodstar accepted
Family: Shadowthorn(son) Unkown kits from the age of 40-50
Crush/Mate: too old/1 mate outside the clan(unkown probably deceased) 2 mates within the clan (both deceased)
Other: 10/10 Dark Grey, Amber
Welp, I don't know how many times I've edited it, but I guess I'm finally 100% done with the forms

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It's okay, It haven't been a long day anyway, but mistakes happens
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Alright, due to the sheer amount of cats who I've had to either purge from the clan or who left, I need to fix apprentices. If you want your cat to mentor a certain cat, tell me since it makes my life 10x easier.
Also Abyssal.Jynxx I think I will have two medicine cats.
And if guys could possibly delete posts that are not your forms themselves, that'd be nice
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Willowfrost
Past names: Willowkit,Willowpaw
Future names:N/A
User's name: StellarJynxx
Rank: Medicine Cat # 2
Age: 17 moons
Gender: Female
Short Description: Sort of small,silver and short haired tabby she cat with azure eyes.
Personality:Willowfrost is sweet,caring and gentle towards her clanmates. She is often seen as mother like in her ways,even though she has never been one.She often tends to scold harshly when a cat get's injured,but that is only because she cares so much.
Likes: Caring for her clan mates and watching kits
Dislikes: Grumpy or arrogant toms that aren't in the elders den
Strengths: Herbs and climbing
Weaknesses: Her patience with toms.
History: She was born in a clan called HollowClan. It was a clan that made their homes in hollow trees in a swamp. Her mother was a medicine cat who had forbidden kits with a cat from another clan. Her mother's name was Ebonytail and her father's name was Jetstride. Her mother grew sick after her father got hit by a monster on a thunder path and was too sad and sick to heal herself. Her mother ended up dropping her off in this Clans territory and Willowkit was found.
Rp sample: Sage Wick threaded the beads carefully in her soft,long,silky hair. Each time he weaved a golden tendril over another,the sweet fragrance hit his nose. Rosemary,sage and a hint of ecstasy. He knew she was beautiful in every way,and he knew he loved her. One thing he also knew,is that she could never be his,he was but yet a poor servant. Never to be fit or qualified for the princess of Amvodyay.
Family: Mother,Ebonytail(deceased) Father,Jetstream (deceased)
Crush/Mate: N/A
Other: every day I can after school so 8/10?
Lynxclaw
Past names:Silence,Lynxpaw
Future names: N/A
User's name:StellarJynxx
Rank: Warrior
Age:22 moons
Gender: Male
Short Description: Light silver tabby tom with a large frame and green eyes
Personality: He can be often quiet and observant. He rarely speaks up but when he does everyone hears. He is a gentle giant but you don'twant to face him in battle.
Likes: basking in the sun
Dislikes: the taste of frog
Strengths: fishing and fighting
Weaknesses: he is not so good at speed, he is more strength
History:He actually grew up with the name Silence,with a rough band of street cats. Once though,he challeged their leader,Scorn,when he was 7 moons old. Scorn almost lost but cheated by tricking him and knocking him into a open manhole. The current in the man hole dumped him into a stream and eventually he found the clan.
Rp sample: See Willowfrost
Family: N/A
Crush/Mate: open
Other:See Willowfrost
Current Name Solarblaze
Past names: Solarpaw
Future names:
User's name: StellarJynxx
Rank: Warrior
Age: 26 moons
Gender: Male
Short Description: Light golden tabby with orange eyes
Personality: Solarblaze is perceptive and precise. He is also caring, jokeful and confident, but they're often slightly tainted by a mindset of being disorderly as well. He can be a little conceited.
Likes: Sunshine and grooming himselfDislikes: too much cold,wet and dark
Strengths: Speed,observing
Weaknesses: Close quarters with someone much bigger
History: He was born in the clan,his father's name was Blazefang and his mother was Moondusk. They both died on battle,but not the same one.
Rp sample: See Willowfrost
Family: N/A (Open)
Crush/Mate:(Open)
Other: See Willowfrost
ALL DONE! Lynxclaw and Solarblaze are open to mentor. Any cats wanna plot with mine,fel free to pm me!
ALL MY FORMS ARE COMPLETE,I AM OPEN TO MAKE ONE MORE CAT,SO IF WE NEED ANYTHING,JUST LET ME KNOW...oops all caps
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Could you possibly make a messenger?
We desperately need more of them, and I think I should just remove Max's Cats since they have not been active. I'd make one myself, but I already have Darkpaw, and that'd be weird.
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I could make a messenger, yes. I'm put her form in this post and make her Solarblaze's (is Solarblaze accepted?)sister.
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Sounds good, and yes, Solarblaze is accepted
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TrashPuppy does this mean, that there will be two medicine cat apprentices as well? If so, then can Owlpaw be put as a medicine cat apprentice as well?
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okay, and that's okay
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TrashPuppy I'm not the one who roleplay Solarblaze it's actually StellaJynxx just to let you know
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I'm gunna add another character or two :)
Sheerkit | Sheerpaw | Sheerpoppy

Past names: Sheerkit
Future names: Sheerpoppy
User's name: Misha Collins
Rank: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Age: 11 moons
Gender: Tom
Short Description: A dark brown tabby tom with a slight limp
Personality: Sheerpaw is quite an eager apprentice. The small tom staggers a little as he works but he is very quick and he is very focused. The tom sometimes gets too focused though, causing him to not notice another cat trying to make conversation. The tom loves to roam the camp and territory and he loves to help his clanmates in any way he can. If there was anything his clanmate needs to talk about, Sheerpaw listens.
Likes: roaming, herbs, playing with the kits, being invited to a small hunt
Dislikes: his limp, being stuck in one spot all the time, not hunting
Strengths: gathering herbs, roaming the territory silently (even with his limp)
Weaknesses: fighting, his limp, he acts like a kit at times
History: Sheerpaw was originally a rogue who had been found in the clan's territory trying to escape his tribe's murder. He was part of a tribe that went by the name Tribe of Tall Mountains and he had been given the name at the time Sheer of the Cliffs (Sheer). The small tom had witnessed a mountain lion enter the camp and he had escaped before the mountain lion finished the genocide. Sheerpaw had been found by a young queen who'd seen how malnourished the tom was. She led him back to the camp and had chatted with the clan leader about letting the tribe apprentice stay. The young apprentice was led to the medicine cat den where his hind paw was treated and he was fed properly.
Rp sample: I've added before.
Family:
Rabbit of the Hills (Mother),Hawk diving to River (Father),Sage that has Fallen (Sister)Crush/Mate: open for plotting
Other: i'm usually pretty active on the weekends but during the weekdays I try to post as well.
Honeykit | Honeypaw | Honeynose
Past names: Honeykit, Honeypaw
Future names:
User's name: Misha Collins
Rank: Warrior
Age: 38 moons
Gender: Tom
Short Description: A honey-shaded Maine Coon tom
Personality: Honeynose is a cautious feline. He takes everything into account before making a move. He tends to be a little quiet but once a feline gets to know him he can be a very happy and friendly tom.
Likes: hunting, exploring, adrenaline, starry nights, leaf-bare
Dislikes: arrogant felines, new-leaf, cloudy days
Strengths: fighting, hunting, observant, intellegent
Weaknesses: stubborn, lighter pelt, clumsy
History: Honeynose grew up with his fair share of fights and hunting. Normal day to day life. One time he had fallen in love with a medicine cat of another but the she-cat had been murdered not long after they'd begun a relationship. As a result, the tom finds it hard to fall in love anymore.
Rp sample: I've added before.
Family:
Vineheart (Mother), Goosepaw (Brother)Crush/Mate: Lochstar
Other:


