Gracefur of Sunclan (Advanced)

Character Name: Gracefur
Character Age: 20 moons
Gender: she-cat
Alliance: Sunclan
Rank: warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): She is a short furred that is night sky black. She has spotches of white on her also. She is very slender, and long legged, but isn't as tall as most. Her figure is small, but slender. She has a long neck, but not much long as the average. She is a very sily coated cat with gourgeous coloring. She has light hazel colored eyes that look amazing in the first glisp of dawn.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): She is very kind, and sweet, but when you mess with her clanmates that's a different story, but she would never kill anyone. She is a very kind hearted she-cat, but has a temper on her. She always stays by the warrior code, and always follows every command. She will try her hardest to please her fellow clanmates, and will be good to them with every spark of kindness. She is very kind, and sweet and will try to stay that way even though her past wasn't the best. She loves everything about life, and will try everything in her to make others better. She was born a caring cat, and will always stay that way.
---Likes (at least 3):
She loves to climb, and is great at it.
She loves to play, and run around
She loves her life which is the greatest of them all
--- Dislikes (at least 3):
She hates fighting.
She hates when people are mean
She doesn't like dogs.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):
Climbing.
---Weaknesses (At least 3):
Swiming, Hunting, and fighting.
History (8 or more sentences): She was born into a group of evil rouges, when she was four months old. After trying to escape them she finally did. After they tried to raise her to be evil. When she ran they chased her forever trying to get her back, but she was too swift for them. She finally escaped them forever, and ended up in Sunclan territory. Her scars are still left in her heart, and some physically on her pelt. They have never gona away, but she will let the future be her guide instead of her dreadful past.
Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Gracefur traveled through the forest feeling the warm sun hit her fur. She lowered herself as something approached her. She lept into the bush feeling the brissels graze her pelt, but then she realized that it was nothign to be alarmed of. It was just a rabbit hopping about. Then she pricked her ears as she knew her clan had been low on delicious prey. She crouched lower to the ground as the rabbit slowly hopped about not knowing of what was lurking in the bush. Gracefur lept out her claws sprang, but she was to late. The rabbit hopped away in terror, but Gracefur pouted in pain. She had always wanted to be a great hunter, but nothing had taught her the right way of hunting. She laid there on the grass, and then heard a brush against a bush. She turned around, and saw two cat figures standing there watching her, and laughed. She then gasped at the sight of the dark colored rouges. They were the ones who took her away from her family, and tried to turn her evil. "Hello Gracefur." They said as they approached laughing. Gracefur's fur prickled a little with tension in her fur. She glisped at the two males, and realized that they had been watching her.. Would this be the end for her?
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I modified it a little bit, but my computer is keep on blacking out because it's a longer post. I hope that is good enough, and thank you for the compliment. :)