but she's lookin' at you -- waterstorm

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    // @Waterstorm


    -- paris had wandered too far from stormclan territory. again. not that he had much of a problem with that - he loved to explore, to visit new places and meet new people. he'd never really remember them, though. heck, he'd already forgotten most of the names he had heard upon joining stormclan.


    this time he had come across a vast land that had way too much water. great, now his paws would get wet and he'd have to clean them again. paris warily trotted through the lands, his knowledge not great enough for him to realize he was trespassing. occasionally he tried to fly, leaping into the air and frantically shaking his wings up and down, but it always ended with him on the ground, tears in his eyes. he cried easily, much to his embarrassment and annoyance. regardless, the small pup would continue, wiping the water from his eyes and scanning the area around him.


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  • She noticed the pup off in the distance while munching on a small fish. This small creature was trying to fly with her wings but every time, she fell and got tears in her eyes. Waterstorm, a winged creature herself, knew the struggle of learning to fly and this trespassing pup didn't seem to realize what he was doing. Waterstorm quickly flew over to him and asked a simple question, "What are you doing on Riverclan territory? And, if you want to fly, don't spazz your wings, you're not an insect. What you need to do is swish them with care and finesse." she added. Waterstorm was very curious as she was a new member of Riverclan and this was her first trespasser.


  • -- paris hadn't even heard anyone approach until he heard a soft female voice to his right. He let out a small yelp, jumping backwards and spreading his wings instinctively. which was silly, since he didn't know how to fly. when his heart slowed to it's normal pace, he lowered his wings and narrowed his eyes at the blue feline, his gaze wary.
    "who're you?" he asked, and then, "riverclan?" he had heard of sunclan, and of stormclan (of course, he lived there), but never of a riverclan. the name made sense, now that he thought about it. as the feline explained the 'proper' way to fly, the pup let out an annoyed sigh. he hated being told what to do, especially by people who weren't superior to him. well, nobody was superior to him, but some people thought they were. and apparently got a lot of respect for it. like blazestar. he didn't know what 'spazz' or 'finesse' meant, but the doubted it mattered. he could infer what they meant, anyway. "i wasn't 'spazzing' my wings, by the way. rude."


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  • "Well, I wasn't trying to be rude but flapping your wings aimlessly isn't going to get you anywhere. I can show you one of the best ways to do it if you would like." The tone of voice in the pup irked her and she had had to keep her paws rooted to the ground when he said "Riverclan?" Waterstorm knew this would have happened but she didn't realize what it would actually be like. "Riverclan is a proclan group who hunts fish instead of those weird other creatures that can't breathe underwater. We are a peacful lan but not one to mess with in the event of war."She added that extra bit just to get the point across that this pup shouldn't be rude on her turf.

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    -- paris narrowed his eyes at the feline. she thought she was better than him at flying!
    "i wasn't trying to fly, idiot," he lied, "i was just...practicing something." he listened to her explanation, once again not quite understanding some of the things she said. and, even if he knew that waterstorm didn't want him to be rude, he most likely would care in the slightest. he might not ever see her again, so why should it matter how nice he was? "why should I tell you where i'm from? any cat with a half-decent nose would already know." of course, he had no clue he was in riverclan until she told him, which meant he didn't have a 'half-decent nose' either. but whatever.


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  • "I know you're lying to me and my nose detcts a whiff of Stormclan, eh?" She said with a hint of a laugh. "So what is it that you are practicing, Mr. Half-decent nose?" She said sarcastically. She knew that he was trying to fly and that he was trying to act tough but she didn't want to be too mean. This pup had cried every time he tried to get in the air.


  • -- paris scowled at the feline, tears forming in his eyes again.
    "it's none of your business!" he cried at her, then let out a small sob. why was he even crying? he had lied and waterstorm knew. he lowered his head, partially in shame. "who are you, anyway...?" he asked quietly, staring at the ground.


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  • "I'm Waterstorm, new member of Riverclan and an ex-rogue." The pup was starting to cry and Waterstorm couldn't help but try and comfort the pup. "You'll eventually get the hang of flying and don't worry, we have no reason to hurt you, you have not done anything bad." she said, trying to help calm him. He wasn't crying but there were definite tears in his eyes.


  • -- paris continued to look at his paws, the tears from his eyes eventually forming little puddle ofn the ground.
    "i-i'm sorry for yelling," he replied between sobs, "i'm p-paris."


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  • "Hello Paris, oh and let me help you with that." nodding towards the puddle of tears. In a quick swish of her tail, the puddle was gone and Paris was no longer crying.


  • -- paris' shame quickly turned to awe as the puddles of water at his paws vanished with the sweep of waterstorm's tail.
    "woah!" he cried, staring at the spot in the grass where his tears used to be, "that's so cool!" he had no powers other than his wings, but was always fascinated by other's powers.


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  • "I know, but the problem is that I got it from living by a human waste site for a year." she was always ashamed to tell people that because some of them thought she was a mutant who would make everyone sick and die. "I was born a normal cat but living there turned my fur blue and gave me these powers. I can also breathe underwater so that's a plus too." she had just told her entire life story in about 2 seconds. "And I can promise you that you can learn to fly easily as long as you can learn to take others advice." This had to have been the most wise and insightful thing she had ever said but suddenly she had remembered her sister who was the one that gave her that advice in the first place. "When I was living at that waste site, I was with my sister and when she had learned to fly but I was still in your place, she gave me those exact words of encouragement." She had just realized how stubborn she was as a kit and Paris was up there with her. "I guess we're both curmudgeons then!" she said laughing to herself. she learned that word from one of the humans by her den area at the waste site.

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    -- paris had quickly turned from a grumpy and antisocial pup to a curious and awestruck one.
    "that's so cool!" he cried, beaming, "what's a waste site? and what does curmudgeon mean?" it sounded like a kind of reptile. was it?


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  • "A curmudgeon is a stubborn and grumpy elder and a waste site is where those humans dump their bad stuff that comes out of the places that look like someone plopped down a couple gigantic tubes. They really are terrible places but that gave my sister and I our powers. I'm not entirely sure what happened to my other sister though..." She really didn't know what had happened to Seasquall as they had separated right after agreeing on names. "She seemed the Stormclan type so if a blue and purple feline with wings and my powers comes trotting into your territory, meet me back here. This is my little patrol area." She really did hope that Seasquall had found her way to a clan or some type of safe area. Heck, Waterstorm didn't even know if she was still alive!


  • -- paris' ears flattened against his head at waterstorm's explanation of a the waste site.
    "that sounds scary," he admitted with a frown, "i'll come here and call out to you if your sister joins. what's her name?"


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  • -- paris smiled up at her, turning to leave.
    "yer welcome! bye, ma'am!" he called, already trotting away.


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  • Waterstorm had waited a couple days with no sign of Paris but she stilled hoped and patrolled her little area that wasn't really territory but kinda was in hopes that Paris would return with news about her sister.