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Death leaned down, his hood almost brushing Evangeline's face. "You do not fear death young one? Your time passed so quickly for you, yet you still want to go back. Why would I grant you that honor?" He asked, his voice seemed to resound all around the two as he spoke. He had to admit, this soul fascinated him. Few dared to even look his way let alone speak to him.

"A deal? What could you offer to me mortal? You have nothing I want." Death almost laughed in the girl's face. He never made deals, no one dealt with death. She was certainly an interesting one, he'd have to keep an eye on her.

Her offer made Death pause. A living human under his will? The concept was...tantalizing. However, there was one thing he needed. "Your deal pleases me Evangeline. I will send you back to your world, though I will take a piece of your soul. Through it I can speak with you directly and even control you. It will allow me to enter your realm as well. Do you agree to my terms?"

Death chuckled to himself. This girl had no idea what he had planned for her. He reached out his hand to Evangeline. "Take my hand young one, it's time for you to return to your world. I have work for you to begin." He said, inwardly smirking at his plan. Finally he could return to the mortal world!

The reality around the pair seemed to bend then reform into various shapes and colors. Traveling dimensions was so calming to Death. He never did it often enough. He was ready though, undoubtedly the mortal world had changed since he last walked upon it. He prepared himself for anything as the travel ended and he stepped out of the portal right next to Evangeline's body.

Death observed Evangeline as she woke from her 'sleep.' He chuckled to himself before he made a startling revelation he looked at himself in confusion. His cloak hung loosely on his body as he observed human hands, HIS hands, poke out from the sleeves of the cloak. "Hm, a side effect of the soul perhaps?" He muttered to himself as he examined his right hand. He also noted he had a mouth now, thankfully his voice was almost the same.

"The human aspect is the only part that surprises me." Death replied, watching his pale hand move and flex. "Is there a mirror here? I'm curious what I look like in this form." He asked, glancing at Evangeline. Indeed this outcome was most unexpected. He never thought a small piece of a mortal soul would cause such a change. It fascinated him to be honest.

Death looked in the mirror curiously. His face matched his hands' unnatural paleness. Short midnight black hair covered his heads, only a few centimeters above his eyes. He certainly wasn't fully human, his dark grey eyes glowed slighlty as he stared at himself. "Not bad I suppose." He said, watching his mouth move as he spoke. "This will certainly take some getting used to." He added, glancing around the white hospital room. "Your body was still here, not much time has passed then." He said after a moment of thought. Death looked over at Evangeline. "How does it feel? Being alive again?" He asked curiously.

"Perhaps. I admit I am unfamiliar with modern medical practices. Although I doubt they would have left your body if they had discovered it." Death replied, glancing through the window of the room out into the parking lot at the night sky. "It's likely the staff haven't checked on you yet." He added hopefully, looking down at the metal boxes with scrutiny. What even were those? His thoughts were halted as he heard the door being unlocked. He quickly hid in the bathroom of the room as the door to the room opened.

The old nurse seemed surprised that Evangeline was awake. She smiled comfortingly as she walked to Evangeline's bed. "I didn't think you'd be awake dear. Your family is still asleep in the waiting room. How are you feeling, do you need anything?" The nurse asked as she checked the various equipment and machines surrounding the bed.

Death peeked at the nurse from a crack in the doorway. Atleast it seemed they didn't know Evangeline had died. It made things much easier. However he was still stuck in this tiny room until the nurse left.