Same here, I don't think I could add any advice. Though I will if I think of it~
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thanks to those who tracked/WIP'ed.
@chat café Morgan is accepted now.Also, for your 2nd character's dragon, blue would be fine, but instead of purple, you could make them some mix of blue and green? This would be fine
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If you were going to choose a picture from the ones you posted, use the last one. ^^
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*smol bump*
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*slumps over* I've finished! please let me know if i've done anything wrong.
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[center]ALENA ✘ ILIAD ✘ AZAR

FULL NAME ★ Alena Iliad Azar (ah•leh•na; ill•e•ad; a•zar)
SEX ★ Female
GENDER ★ FemalePERSONALITY ★ Alena is sweet-natured elf, friendly, calm & able to keep her head under tense & stressful situations. She doesn't talk much but is always willing to engage in conversation with anyone. She's clever & observant, relying on her wit & strategy to get through most things. Though she may be sweet she hides a fiercely defiant, protective & ruthless personality as well. She can be ruthless in & out of battle believing wholeheartedly in the cause she's fighting for but will always listen to both sides of a story before deciding anything. She capable of being snarky as well, but sometimes jokes will fly right over her head & will take them literally causing rather awkward situations. She has trouble dealing with situations that are heavy with emotion as she can be rather blunt & prefers logical decisions rather then emotional ones. Alena is an eager listener, always willing to listen to a friend, or even a stranger, & offer advice, but as she believes that being straight forward & honest is the best strategy her advice is not always meet with welcoming arms.
STRENGTHS ★ strategy, swordplay, adaptable, archery, excellent memory.
WEAKNESSES ★ working with feelings, blunt, hand-to-hand combat.HISTORY ★ Alena & Vincent were foundling babies, twins, abandoned by their mother at a church. Supposedly, because she could not raise them or they had been conceived illegitimately, out of wedlock. Alena & Vincent grew up under the watchful eyes of the church, which was unusual as the church hardly kept foundling children for long. They would usually turn them over to the local orphanage within a few months, but the twins reacted unfavorably in the orphanage & unnerved the other staff members & children. They had been sent back within a fortnight, so the church members helped raise them, giving them basic school lessons along with religious studies. Though neither of them still practice today. They both took quick to learning absorbing all the information they could get, becoming bright young elves as they grew older. Soon the church had nothing left to teach them & set them loose on the small town they lived in to learn from the people. Even though raised with only the church members & his sister for company Vincent had no trouble connecting with outsiders, proving himself to be jovial & charming young man. Alena seemed to have missed out on that trait & only seemed to make people uncomfortable with her questions, blunt sayings & reserved attitude. And though they shared very little traits they were still tight-knit & shared a similar dream: to enlist in the Imperial Army. As soon as they could they headed for the Elven City to enlist & trained hard together for many months. When they proved to be compatible with dragons they were each given an egg & when they had formed bonds they were moved to the Dragotrian Team.
FAMILY ★ Vincent Azar -brotherSEXUALITY ★ demisexual
LOVE INTEREST ★ open
CRUSH ★ openDRAGON NAME ★ Anael (ah•na•el)
TYPE ★ Flying dragon
DESCRIPTION ★ Anael is the color of burnished gold adorned with streaks of bronze, which are most prominent around his luminescent yellow eyes, his wings, & on his chest. He has a row of very large scales that act like plates of armor going down the back of his neck, the edges of these plates are razor sharp & end about midway down his neck. His scales are sleek in some places but dry & rough in most. Anael has two sets of horns, one pair curving gently up just behind his eyes & a second pair jutting out just behind his jaw.
PERSONALITY ★ Anael is a stubborn dragon & a tad less hyper then the rest of his species but still eager & playful. He & Alena share a deep bond but he loves testing the limits of her patience & orders. As quick as he is to exasperate her, Anael is even quicker to defend her any slights against Alena or himself are met with bared teeth & dragonfire. And though it seems that nothing can really hold his attention for long Anael is actually a rather observant dragon with an keen eye for details.ROLEPLAY SAMPLE ★
''Oh gods'' Vincent gasped stumbling over an errant root nearly sending himself sprawling into the damp undergrowth. ''Oh gods, we've really done it this time,'' He wheezed through grinning lips sparing a quick glance over his shoulder, the hunters that pursed them were not visible but the baying of their hounds was audible and seemed to be getting closer.
''No, no, you've done it! I wanted no part of this from the beginning you rat.''Alena hissed venom dripping from her words as she struggled to keep up with Vincent's longer strides.'' And I'm very glad you're finding this funny brother,'' she snarled throwing herself to the side as the whistle of an arrow pierced the air burying itself into a large oak with a heavy thunk,''because if we get out of this alive I'm going to kill you.''
''Take heart Alena!'' Vincent laughed vaulting over a fallen log with ease,''It could be worse!'' He grinned ignoring the murderous glare aimed his way. '' And you should really lay of the mutton dear sister, the hounds will be on our heels at the rate.'' he teased eyes bright with mischief even through the present danger. ''Look, the trees are thinning out here,'' he called.
''I will stab you, brother or n-- oh hells,'' Alena spat as they burst through the foliage into the clearing except it wasn't, it was a cliff.
OTHER ★ okay so in Thor: TDW, Asgard's defenses are total BS there is no way the 'Golden Realm' has only one force field powered by ONE sole generator like no way in hell, I was very pissed. Sure they have their soldiers but unless they can fly, you're helpless.
Also, I hope you don't mind that I changed the color to white. My computer screen is usually always on low brightness so it's hard for me to see in black.(c) array
[center]VINCENT ✘ MIKAEL ✘ AZAR

FULL NAME ★ Vincent Mikael Azar (ven•cent; mee•kah•el; ah•zar)
SEX ★ Male
GENDER ★ MalePERSONALITY ★ Vincent is a handsome & charming young man & he knows it. He genuinely loves interacting with people, but has no qualms on using his charm for selfish reasons even though his sister admonish him for it. Though he can be a huge flirt with about anything that moves he has respect for peoples boundaries & will tone it down if someone is visibly uncomfortable, sadly he loves riling people up too much to completely stop. He loves to laugh & make jokes, even at the most inappropriate time. They could be surround by demons & he'd still make a sarcastic quip to rile them up. Even though he can come off as careless & silly he knows what he's doing & usually has some higher goal behind his decisions. Like his sister he can be fiercely protective & ruthless the energy he seems to always have about him channeled into something deadly in battle. He also prefer logical decisions but has much more tact then his twin, he's good at soothing ruffled feather as he is at ruffling them.
STRENGTHS ★ charming, silver-tongued, swordplay, hand-to-hand combat.
WEAKNESSES ★ long distance fighting, he can be a bit of a bleeding heart,HISTORY ★ Alena & Vincent were foundling babies, twins, abandoned by their mother at a church. Supposedly, because she could not raise them or they had been conceived illegitimately, out of wedlock. Alena & Vincent grew up under the watchful eyes of the church, which was unusual as the church hardly kept foundling children for long. They would usually turn them over to the local orphanage within a few months, but the twins reacted unfavorably in the orphanage & unnerved the other staff members & children. They had been sent back within a fortnight, so the church members helped raise them, giving them basic school lessons along with religious studies. Though neither of them still practice today. They both took quick to learning absorbing all the information they could get, becoming bright young elves as they grew older. Soon the church had nothing left to teach them & set them loose on the small town they lived in to learn from the people. Even though raised with only the church members & his sister for company Vincent had no trouble connecting with outsiders, proving himself to be jovial & charming young man. Alena seemed to have missed out on that trait & only seemed to make people uncomfortable with her questions, blunt sayings & reserved attitude. And though they shared very little traits they were still tight-knit & shared a similar dream: to enlist in the Imperial Army. As soon as they could they headed for the Elven City to enlist & trained hard together for many months. When they proved to be compatible with dragons they were each given an egg & when they had formed bonds they were moved to the Dragotrian Team.
FAMILY ★ Alena Azar -sisterSEXUALITY ★ bisexual
LOVE INTEREST ★ open
CRUSH ★ openDRAGON NAME ★ Memphis (mem•fes)
TYPE ★ Flying dragon
DESCRIPTION ★ From a distance he seems to be an entirely blue color, but it takes the right lighting & a closer inspection to see the shimmering green of his scales. The green is more obvious running down the spikes of his spine, under the bend of his wings & just under his jaw. His scales are smooth to the touch sleek & shiny like water. Memphis has stormy grey eyes & two medium sized horns that arch elegantly from his head. A surprisingly soft mane of fur runs between them that sweeps down the back of his neck before melting back into scales and the razor sharp spikes of his spine that run down to the tip of his tail.
PERSONALITY ★ Memphis is in no way a calm or quiet dragon, matching his partner in that aspect, he's loud & loves pocking at things & exploring, much like an overgrown puppy. He has stopped setting things on fire as much but will jump to it given the opportunity. He's also very opinionated on everything & always shares with Vincent his likes & dislikes. Though they share a strong bond Memphis sometimes ignores Vincent's orders & does his own thing but he would never purposely put Vincent in danger & strives to keep his partner safe.ROLEPLAY SAMPLE ★
''Oh gods'' Vincent gasped stumbling over an errant root nearly sending himself sprawling into the damp undergrowth. ''Oh gods, we've really done it this time,'' He wheezed through grinning lips sparing a quick glance over his shoulder, the hunters that pursed them were not visible but the baying of their hounds was audible and seemed to be getting closer.
''No, no, you've done it! I wanted no part of this from the beginning you rat.''Alena hissed venom dripping from her words as she struggled to keep up with Vincent's longer strides.'' And I'm very glad you're finding this funny brother,'' she snarled throwing herself to the side as the whistle of an arrow pierced the air burying itself into a large oak with a heavy thunk,''because if we get out of this alive I'm going to kill you.''
''Take heart Alena!'' Vincent laughed vaulting over a fallen log with ease,''It could be worse!'' He grinned ignoring the murderous glare aimed his way. '' And you should really lay of the mutton dear sister, the hounds will be on our heels at the rate.'' he teased eyes bright with mischief even through the present danger. ''Look, the trees are thinning out here,'' he called.
''I will stab you, brother or n-- oh hells,'' Alena spat as they burst through the foliage into the clearing except it wasn't, it was a cliff.
OTHER ★okay so in Thor: TDW, Asgard's defenses are total BS there is no way the 'Golden Realm' has only one force field powered by ONE sole generator like no way in hell, I was very pissed. Sure they have their soldiers but unless they can fly, you're helpless.
Also, I hope you don't mind that I changed the color to white. My computer screen is usually always on low brightness so it's hard for me to see in black.(c) array
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@godspeed. i really like your characters and your writing, but in Vincent's weaknesses, you put that he is bad at 'long distance fighting' yet he is skilled with a bow and arrow. you can either explain further or give him a different weakness.
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@godspeed. I also like your characters, especially Vincent lol. You could also just take out the bow and arrow from his strengths.
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@FadedDreams @eritasum ^///^ thanks, I had a lot of fun making them!
okay, the archery thing is fixed! I caught that too when I was making the form but forgot to change it, a part of me was stuck on elves being good at archery but the other half was like: ''nah, vincent would love being up & personal with enemies'' lol
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thats fine! accepted!
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LUKOS

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FULL NAME ★ Lukos Meier D'Haenens
SEX ★ Male
GENDER ★ MalePERSONALITY ★ Lukos, unlike what may be expected out of someone of military blood, is in fact not rude or snobbish and does not believe himself to be better than anyone else either. He is genuinely caring, and opens his arms wide to everyone willing enough to approach him. In fact, he is quite possibly the most genuine and humble individual that someone might meet. That's why it might not be odd for him to have a natural affinity for dragons, and the dragons for him. In fact, the bond he shares with dragons of all shapes and sizes as well as other attributes landed him a spot in the Dragotrian Warriors. However, he is often oblivious to sarcasm and the emotions of others.
However, because of the fact he has military blood, he is a master thinker and strategist and has a great knowledge of weapon types and which strategies are effective for certain situations. As such, he is highly intelligent, but takes significantly longer than most to think and make decisions.
STRENGTHS ★ Knight skills, minor knowledge of healing practices, master strategist, natural affinity for dragons and dragons have a natural affinity for him, highly intelligent
WEAKNESSES ★ Takes a long time to make decisions and form strategies, oblivious to other people's emotions, often too trustingHISTORY ★ Lukos was born as a nephew to the general responsible for the formation of the Dragotrian Warriors, and that may be a reason for his involvement in the group. However, Lukos would beg to differ (and his reasoning would in fact be correct). Lukos's father, the younger brother of the general, was also a high-ranking military leader, but could not surpass his older brother. For the majority of his life, he led a mostly normal life, and attended high-class schools in which he excelled. Later on, his parents would decide to withdraw him from the school and send him to train with a sword and shield, but that is beside the point.
Anyway, as a young child, his parents decided that it would be nice to go on a vacation to the countryside, and so that's what they did. However, after arriving at a small vacation cottage, a crazed and utterly confused dragon attacked. As it made a move to gobble up the young Lukos, its rampage suddenly ended, and it drew back as if considering its actions before flying off in a calmed state. This was the moment where his parents realized the full potential that Lukos possessed, and they spent the rest of their time at the cottage happily before returning to their home. A few days after returning to their lavish estate, a young dragon the color of shimmering snow appeared one morning on the balcony of his bedroom. He named it Lux and began to spend time with the dragon. Their bond quickly grew and after a few years they became nearly inseparable.
FAMILY ★ Isaac D'Haenens (father), Elizabeth D'Haenens (mother), Remfrey D'Haenens (uncle)SEXUALITY ★ Bisexual
LOVE INTEREST ★ Open for plotting
CRUSH ★ May developDRAGON NAME ★ Lux
TYPE ★ Flying dragon
DESCRIPTION ★ Lux is a large (not quite as large as the picture, but still large), snow-colored dragon. On top of its head are scale-covered spikes that continue down it's spine and to the end of its long, sweeping tail. It has humongous wings that allow Lux to rocket through the sky at incredible speeds.
PERSONALITY ★ Lux would describe himself as a proud and majestic dragon. He is prideful of his appearance as well as his rider. The stubborn personality he displayed as a dragonet has been worn away by his rider over the years and is replaced with obedience and hard work.ROLEPLAY SAMPLE ★ Some of my best roleplaying can be found here. Do not mind the private tag.
OTHER ★ Thor, Asgard(c) array
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@windy If this was an mmorpg, Lukos looks like he would be Priest class.
@godspeed. You're welcome! :)
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(or cleric)
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(shh priest. Bible in hand, the holy cross pummels the evil sinners.)
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(but imagine that....but with sword)
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(unfortunately now i want him to be both of these things smh yall)
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(No, he has to hold a large cross that takes up half of his body but he's strong enough to smack people across the head with it. I'm mostly thinking of the Priest class from DFO, I think he does that lol)
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@godspeed. literally all i did was google "male elves"
@FadedDreams (no he will wield a sword that heals people when he stabs them with it ofc)
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tumblr as well.
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