Nobody Can Drag Me Down && private for princess + lightningpaw

Brownpaw

Feb 17th 2017

• Character Name:Brownpaw
• Character Age:9 moons
• Gender:Male
• Alliance:ThunderClan
• Rank:Apprentice
• Appearance (6 or more sentences):He has brown fur. Golden eye's that make his eye's stand out from his dark fur.. He can be almost invisible in the night. He stands at least big enough to be a good sized apprentice. He is quite muscular making him an excellent fighter. His nose is like a dark brown. And has an eye missing.
• Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements):He is a grumpy apprentice at times. Though he never back talks any of his higher ups. Though he can hot tempered he is a good friend to his Clanmates. He would fight and die at any moment for anyone of his Clan. His angry attitude is foreshadowed by his drive to be there for others. He is very ambitious and would like nothing more than to rise through the ranks. But he is respectful enough to understand there is little chance for that to happen.
• ---Likes (at least 3):He likes to eat voles they are his favorite meal. He loves to hunt and provide for the Clan. And he loves to train unlike Apprentices.
• --- Dislikes (at least 3):He hates being unproductive. He hates cats who think they are all that. And he hates lazy cats.
• ---Strengths (No MORE than 5):He has a determination to protect others that some cats don't have. He is extremely muscular and therefor a great fighter. He despite his muscular build can be fast on his feet.
• ---Weaknesses (At least 3):He is ill tempered and at times can lose his cool making him make bad choices. He is hardheaded and usually if he believes something there is nothing to stop him. He has a eye missing meaning he can't see on one side of him.
• History (8 or more sentences):He was born into ThunderClan. Though shortly after his birth his Mother died from the birthing. His father later killed in battle against WindClan. Due to his father's death he has a short fuse for WindClan cats. During a skirmish Brownpaw lost his eye it should've killed him but he was able to survive. In the short time Brownpaw has been alive he has seen a lot of hardship which has made him the ill tempered cat he is today. Brownpaw even now after everything he has gone through still refuses to leave the path of the Warrior. He wants to prove to his dead Father and Mother and his brother's and sister's in StarClan that he is strong.
• Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Brownpaw walked out into the forest in search of prey to feed ThunderClan. Brownpaw opened his mouth to drink in the scents of the forest. It was Greenleaf and due to that the forest was alive. Brownpaw soon found a scent of a mouse. Brownpaw looked around trying to pinpoint where the mouse was with his one eye. Brownpaw soon saw a mouse on the ground next to a tree root. 'I need to be careful not to make any noise otherwise it will scurry under that tree root.' Brownpaw thought to himself. Brownpaw dropped into the hunters crouch and inched closer and closer. The wind began to blow behind him sending the scent of his approach to the mouse. The mouse ended up picking up the scent and running under the tree root. "Mouse dung!" Brownpaw cursed the wind.

Brownpaw walked over he would look at Ashpaw with his one eye. "You look bored you want to go do something maybe hunt?" Brownpaw asked his dark figure was bigger than Ashpaw but he was actually about the same age. He could remember playing with Ashpaw as kits all the trouble they used to get themselves into those were the good old days. Brownpaw waiting for an answer though the twitching of his tail showed he was pretty impatient and likely if she didn't answer quick he would go on with his day. Brownpaw was unfortunate he didn't have an easy time hunting due to having only one eye. However that never stopped him often people told him he should just go and do something other than Apprentice for a Warrior.

Brownpaw would lead them into the forest as they neared some ferns a vole came out and was scuffling around the tree roots. Brownpaw barely spotted it he would get into a hunter's crouch and slowly advance however the vole slowly entered his blind spot. Brownpaw would have to move to find it. He tried to move but he scared the vole. In a last stitch effort to catch the vole he made a mad dash for it. But he ended up losing it in his blind spot. "Mousedung it is gone. I hate having only one eye." Brownpaw said.

(Feel free to have Ashpaw be the reason for Brownpaw's missing eye if you'd like.)

Brownpaw sighed. "I guess so. I hate having only one eye. But it can't be helped." Brownpaw said. He would head in another direction it was warm today. He could feel the sun rays hit his dark fur it felt good. He closed his eye and began to purr slightly. The clearing was nice and unusually open. He opened his eye he saw nothing on the left side reminding him of his missing eye. But he began scanning this clearing he saw a mouse scuttling around the edge of the clearing. Brownpaw backed up in the foliage and began to slowly make his way towards the mouse in a hunters crouch.

Brownpaw inched closer and closer he would soon be in pouncing distance. He could smell the mouse it was his favorite unfortunately this would be for the Clan. Brownpaw was finally in pouncing distance he built power in his hind legs before launching himself clear through the air and quickly dispatching the mouse. He would pick it up and bring it back to show Ashpaw pride shone in his one eye. "Look Ashpaw!" Brownpaw said happily the tiny mouse dangling from his jaws.

"Your just saying that." Brownpaw said meekly. He would drop his mouse though. "So what about heading back to put this freshkill pile and than heading back out to help you?" Brownpaw asked.

(I know so let's say as kits they play fought and she accidently brought her claws out and accidently clawed his eye out?)

"Alright." Brownpaw said as he picked the mouse up. He would begin back towards the Camp. He looked at Ashpaw. "You seem frustrated any particular reason?" Brownpaw asked they've known eachother for a long time since they were kits and he knew when she was frustrated.

Brownpaw stopped and sat the mouse down. "That's when you work harder. Look at me look at my left eye. It's gone but you know what. I don't give up I would never give up why you ask? Because as soon as you give up that is when you are truly defeated. I'm determined to become a Warrior and you should be too. It's going to be tough but you know what you should be willing to do anything it takes to protect your Clan mates. I know why don't I help you train? I could help you and your Mentor to train you. I mean I don't have a Mentor so how about it? Want to train with me?" Brownpaw meowed he seemed to be there for Ashpaw just like all those other times she was down. Yeah sure she was the reason he didn't have his left eye. But it didn't take long for him to forgive her and be there for her. Brownpaw waited a bit impatiently at her reply.

"Okay Ashpaw now let's continue back towards the Camp." Brownpaw said picking up the mouse before turning towards the camp and starting off again. Brownpaw however was stopped by tripping over a root on his left side. "Oof." Brownpaw fell but he got back up just fine. "Dumb Root." Brownpaw cursed.

"Yeah i'm fine let's keep going." Brownpaw said as he got up and continued to walk. They would get to the camp soon. And place his kill on the freshkill pile. And said "Alright lets go." Brownpaw meowed happily.

Brownpaw continued to pad through undergrowth as he was he saw a bird fly down it was Ashpaw's time to shine. Brownpaw hid waiting to see what Ashpaw would do.

"Maybe we should go back that sounded close." Brownpaw mewed staring at her with his one eye. "We could do some battle training instead?" Brownpaw meowed giving a suggestion. He would walk towards the Training Clearing. His tail swaying back and forth the sound of that loud boom still ringing inside his head.