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does anyone have any thoughts on Colouredclan's territory?

It's separated into six different biomes, along with the main camp being in a village. (more descriptions below)

Is this too confusing for people? Or does everyone like the multiple biomes?

colouredclan wrote:

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territory ..

[fancypost=background-color:#8F99D9; border-color:transparent; width: 430px; height: 150px;color: #6872B3; font-family: verdana; text-align: justify; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; padding:10px;]ColouredClan's new territory is one that finally brings meaning to their name. It is a sprawling landscape made up of many, many different biomes, sporting different prey, colours and climates.

MAIN CAMP — [IMAGE REFERENCE]
The main camp borders a large lake in the centre of the territory, and is a colourful network of houses that climb up a stone hill. Many small side-alleys wind through the little town, and steps carry up and down the different levels of camp. The houses are used as dens, and people can choose to bunk with friends or pick new houses of their own. At the bottom of the camp, nearest the lake, is a dock, with abandoned boats that are in relatively good repair. This enables easy travel across it for those who can't swim.

BIOME ONE — [IMAGE REFERENCE]
Located to the west of the territory, this is a dry, arid, windy, colourful landscape that is known for its unique animal inhabitants. There are many bison, eagles and various other birds of prey, mountain goats, and ibex. There is very little water in this territory, and though in the valleys it is rather warm, climbing up the mountains sees temperatures plummet to near-zero even in summer, and below it in winter. Miraculously, no snow touches this biome, despite the cold.

BIOME TWO — [IMAGE REFERENCE]
Biome two is located in between the main camp and biome one, and is an unusual forest indeed. The tree trunks are black, the leaves are, too; the grass is midnight blue, and the only flowers that grow are daffodils, with deep green stems and vibrant yellow heads. This area is, as you can imagine, devoid of prey, save for ravens that lurk in the trees, never to be hunted. It is a place of death, and reflection. It's permanently autumn, here, with a cool chill in the air, and no wind, whatsoever.

BIOME THREE — [IMAGE REFERENCE]
This biome is to the south of the territory, with a river winding through it that branches from the lake by the main camp. Everything here is red, with vibrant crimson bushes and mosses that cover the ground all around. Storks and herons are found here, as well as capybaras, and cod in the river. It's a lush, moderate area, with mild, forgiving seasons and plenty of rain.

BIOME FOUR — [IMAGE REFERENCE]
Up north, past the main camp and into the higher portions of the territory, ice blankets the world. Here, there are plenty of openings to underground cave systems, with rushing water and eerie labyrinths. It's a surreal, tranquil land, with no rain, and people can find some sort of almost uneasy solace here. There's little prey, but a few birds migrate during the summer, and arctic foxes are common.

BIOME FIVE — [IMAGE REFERENCE]
Located in the south east, bordering biome three, this also-lush biome is a pleasant refuge with bright reds, yellows and greens. It is one of the most abundant territories, with plenty of rodents and small birds to hunt, and a single, infamous herd of bison that are not to be hunted, migrated from biome one. This is one of the safer biomes, and is a main hunting ground.

BIOME SIX — [color=white][IMAGE REFERENCE]

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colouredclan wrote:

There's a reason this territory is so secluded, and it is because of this biome. It surrounds the territory like a defensive border, but also makes up a tiny area to the north east. Here, birds of prey make their home, wheeling overhead, and a few mountain goats are also found. It's fairly barren in terms of prey, but offers a safe place for flight and climbing practise, and is an ideal training ground.