Briarpaw watched his movement closely, and when Stonepaw tenced before running, he darted out of the way quickly, and leaped onto his back. I wont be taken by surprise! He sunk his fangs into the appretice's scruff so he could get a grip, and took them out when he attempted to turn the apprentice onto his side.
Foxthistle stood up and yelled, "Stonepaw!" The tom watched his apprentice's moves, growling. Briarpaw could notice him running! Why couldn't he have leaped up straight into the air, surprise him by not attacking, then attack?

