New Thunderclan apprentice seeking mentor!

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    I have a cat that could mentor her, (Oh course I would have to create him first and stop making up charries in my head first) Ill send you the link to his bio and we could get started with your training if you would like.

    I've got a cat named Maplemist that could mentor her. She was my first character so seems like two first characters!

    Umm...well I don't want to just randomly decide who mentors her, so how about you both post links to the bio (or just put the bio here) and include a short roleplay sample? Then I can choose her mentor from that :)

    Sure, ill have to find the link first, as you probably can tell, not the most organized cat out there. :-\
    Here is my roleplay sample though.


    Ghostfoot watched his apprentice gather moss, he paced around the tree to make sure nothing was clinging to the ragged moss scraps being placed on the ground, "No, no no!" the deep-voiced warrior meowed impatiently.
    "Curve your claws inward while cutting the moss! Those pieces are ragged and pathetic, do better." he growled swishing his long tail annoyed.
    As a clean and awesome piece of moss came down Ghostfoot's eyes shone, "Good! Thats the way to do it!" he encouraged his tone still intimidating but nicer.
    As they arrived back at camp Ghostfoot glanced at his apprentice, "Go get some fresh kill, you have earned it." he mewoed.
    Walking over there himself a flash of shock passed his eyes as he saw his apprentice reaching for a fat robin, he quickly darted over and grabbed the robin, "My bird." he growled giving his apprentice a hard stare before mewing through feathers, "There is a fat rabbit on the bottom on the pile, take that." he suggested before padding away to a shady corner away from all the other cats.
    "Oh and when your done see that moss gets to the elders!" he called before biting into the robin hungrily.

    Hmmm... Can't find her bio.
    Maplemist walked out of camp so she could hunt. She stalked away from a large oak with jagged branches and a terrible creaking sound. She aimed to pounce on a small rabbit, but felt nothing but dirt and air. She sighed and stalked away. She walked into a hallow oak and laid down. When a small mouse walked to her paws, she grabbed its tail. Once she picked it up, she started walking back to camp. On e she got there she sat the mouse down in the fresh-kill pile and went to lay down.

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    I can't find Maplemists bio. I've been around here for a while and -looks at post count- I've posted a lot of posts....

    try bookmarking them, it works for me. So if you need a bio you just go to "my bookmarks" and its there ready and waiting,

    I understand, Puppy...


    I think I'm going to have to go with Ghostfoot as a mentor. He and Rowanpaw would actually have a bit in common, as she suspects (correctly) that her father was a Rogue. I think it would be interesting to have him mentor her - she would probably start out resenting him and his "gruff, mean, and demanding" attitude, and then something could happen that causes him to reveal his story to her, and she could mention how she feels horrible since her mother got sent out of the clan, and because she's sure that her father was a rogue...and they could end up becoming a really close mentor/apprentice, like Firestar and Cinderpelt were, although she ended up not being his apprentice anymore xD