Can someone critique this roleplay plot/set up?

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    I would recommend putting the pack information (ranks, rules, current allegiances) that you currently have in the roleplay thread, into the first post of the signup thread. The signup thread is where most people check first to see if the group sounds interesting - if you have no information on the group there, it may not pique their interest enough to apply.
    You might also want to add a practical description of the system (i.e. there are 2 packs at war, one of black & one of white wolves, backstory if there is any, idk.), and maybe descriptions of the territories.