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  • ~stretches first two oc's updated Veragrey is now male and there is further explanation to his weaknesses also understand as long as he doesn't push himself past his limits he is fine. if you still need another male oc let me know.

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  • Okay, before I forget everything:


    @ToxicSoldier- Here are the things concerning Ara that I really need you to change so that all can be fair.


    1. I would really appreciate it if you would just get rid of the pheromone magic altogether. In a sense, using the pheromones to create illusions is the same thing as creating shadow clones for illusions against enemies. It is actually that magic in itself that both kid and I find it to be overpowered, considering your character is not an S-class mage. With that magic being removed, that means that you can't have your first ability and the last ability will have to be changed a bit, since like I said, the shadows can serve the same purpose. (Also, any weaknesses having to do with pheromones will have to be either removed or changed so things don't get confusing if someone *namely me* has to refer back to your form after a while)


    2. In the Night Stalk ability, there is a time limit on the "invisibility" correct? Please do make that specific.


    3. When creating shadow weapons, please do not make them "nearly unbreakable". If you fight against that weapon, there will be a harder chance in gaining an advantage. All weapons deteriorate at some point.


    4. When using the Nightmare dome (like I said, please remove the pheromone aspect), make it so that it is possible to escape. S-class mages will have learned to trained their mental state into knowing what is real and not (I'm not saying it will work 100% of the time, but there needs to be a chance). You also said that using the spell is harmful to the user correct? You DO NOT have to do this, but I think it would make sense if even when the spell in ineffective, the user still gets some harm done to them.


    5. Finally, you mention how light can weaken the dark spells. Currently, we don't have any light mages (we will get a lightning dragon slayer I assume, but keep reading) and most of the time, especially during the exams/trials, battles will be during the day, so that will seemingly almost always affect Ara's magic.


    And then for Scarlet, I agree with kid , it looks really good, you just need to add more weaknesses (refer to kid 's last post)

  • Oh yeah, I realized I wasn't specific when I said what type of mage you are. I'm assuming if you are a regular mage, that means you are an S-class trial participant? If we ever run out of participant spots, we can always add a few more.

  • Character Information:


    [img width=293 height=510]http://vignette1.wikia.nocooki…/latest?cb=20140322221712[/img]


    Name:
    Ethel Storm


    Gender:
    Female


    Age:
    16


    Appearance:
    Ethel is a pale skinned 16 year old girl with blood red eyes. Her hair is milky-blue and hidden by the giant hood she wears, making it hard to estimate the length outside of her spiked bangs and curly side-hair that sticks out of the hood.


    She wears a black dress with white accent and a three-layer ruffled skirt held with a big black belt with multiple studs and buckles to match her big collar, which usually covers her mouth. The chest, sleeves, and hood are blue and have many black and silver buckles and belts all over them. Also worn are black fingerless gloves, black boots with four belt straps on them, and black and blue horizontal striped stockings with two belt straps on each leg.


    Guild Mark Color/Location:
    Milky Blue + On her left thigh


    Rank (S-class or regular):
    Regular


    Personality:
    POSITIVE TRAITS
    Being adorable?
    Split second decision making
    Can think on her feet well
    Despite her cold exterior, she is rather sweet and means well
    Bonds with people easier than one might think and easy to befriend. Just give her a cookie
    Puppylike when happy


    NEUTRAL TRAITS
    Stubborn as a donkey
    Clingier than one might believe (not sure if this goes here or in the negatives?)
    Easy to bribe (once again, cookies)


    NEGATIVE TRAITS
    She means well, just fails on delivery
    Confused easily/a little air-headed/distracted easily
    Acts more like a child than anything
    Doesn't read people/atmosphere well
    Sometimes speaks too softly to be heard
    Can confuse with her shortening sentences, sometimes leaving out great detail or important detail which might confuse whoever she is talking to


    WRITTEN PERSONALITY
    Ethel has a cold, machine-like personality. She often speaks in a somewhat soft voice and her sentences are very succinct as she believes being concise and to the point is a far more efficient manner of speaking. Ethel has shown to be rather naive as well, almost ignorant of the world and as such is rather easy to manipulate or confuse with 'non-logical' topics.
    She has also shown to like being petted, praised, spoiled, etc. Ethel also refers to herself in the third person for some reason
    QUIRKS
    Refers to herself in the third person, will start purring when petted and is obssessed with cookies. Also loves a cuddle
    PHOBIAS
    Afraid of electricty and closed spaces
    LIKES
    Cookies, being spoilt, sweet foods in general, being alone
    DISLIKES
    Loud people, annoying people, normal people, people who don't spoil her (to a lesser degree XD)


    History:
    Ethel is the youngest of three siblings, one older sister and older half-brother whom had been conceived during a night of heavily drinking at a party with friends.
    Her mother was a wealthy merchant, her father a soldier in the military.
    Soon after she was born, her mother found out about the 'affair', and thus the half brother, and filed for divorce with her father. However during the process her mother and older sister feel deathly ill.
    Still madly devoted to his soon to be ex-wife, her father pleaded with several medical wizards and doctors to help cure her. None could help, and with nowhere else to turn to he went to the nearby church for help. After being told that to leave his wife and sick daughter at the church since their healer wasn't going to be back till the next day and this would allow him to see them as soon as he got back, he returned the next day to the heartbreaking news they had passed away during the night shortly before the church healer returned.


    Grief stricken her father took the three year old Ethel and travelled Fiore in search of her half brother and his mother. He searched fruitlessly for years only to find out that the mother had passed away years ago and her son had been put into a nearby orphanage.
    However when he got there, he was too late. The son had already been adopted and the orphanage, with the father having no proof to the claim that he was the boy's real father, refused to tell him who adopted him.


    This was when Ethel was nine and soon after her father began to train her to use weapons using his military training, because at this stage he was rather crazy and decided that the best way to protect Ethel was to train her to protect herself. And the soon she started, the better right?
    After being put through a few years of vigorous training she eventually became somewhat skilled with daggers and short bows, due to her petite frame her father had only been training her light weapons. When she was fourteen her father brought her a book from a rather shady merchant only to soon find out it was cursed. This was the grimoire which gave Ethel her the forbidden Constitution Change magic.
    It would seem that his mistake was the last straw on his mentality as he finally lost it, freaking out and leaving Ethel by herself despite the young girl crying out for her father as her body began morphing without her consent.
    Soon enough she learned to control her magic, and sometime later joined Fairy Tail.
    Strengths:
    Versatility is her main strength
    Able to think quickly and clearly on her feet without allowing her feelings to greatly affect her decision making


    Weaknesses:
    Bringing up her past. She will avoid the subject at all cost, generally going into a complete mental blank if someone pries too much or actually knows about it
    Cookies. Her main weakness is cookies, you can bribe her/trick her by offering her a cookie.
    Depending on her current state, her other weakness may vary


    Family:
    Pyro Storm (Father/MIA)
    Aqua Storm (Mother/Deceased)
    Unknown brother


    Other:
    1. Protect your nakama
    2. Generally pretty active, but it varies. During the week work a lot but should still be able to get a post a day in.

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    Magic Information:


    Magic Type/Name:
    Composition Change


    Magic Information/Spells:
    Ethel was given the ability to change her bodies composition by a cursed Grimoire rather than any specialized training or awakening. Her body, when changed, acts similar to that of Juvia's (with obvious differences with different elements) and she can control, to a point, the element her body is made up of (however most of it is just generic element manipulation, nothing too big).
    Her current changes are:
    Iron, Water, Fire, Wind, Granite and Ice however she can change her composition to anything she touches so she can/will gain more.
    Each form has it's own strengths/weaknesses:
    Iron-Defense (5/5 Stars), Offense (4/5 Stars), Speed (1.5/5 Stars). Weak to electric magic, strong against physical based mages
    Granite-Defense (4/5 Stars), Offense (3.5/5 Stars), Speed (3/5 Stars). Weak to no magic physical based magics, but strong against liquid based magics
    Water-Defense (3.5/5 Stars), Offense (3.5/5 Stars), Speed (4/5 Stars). Weak to ice and electric based magics, strong against fire and metallic based magics (along with any dirt based magics)
    Fire-Defense (2.5/5 Stars), Offense (5/5 Stars), Speed (4/5 Stars). Weak to water magic, strong against any sort of grass/plant based magic or gas magic. Varies against wind magic
    Wind-Defense (1/5 Stars), Offense (4/5 Stars), Speed (5/5 Stars).
    Ice-Defense (4/5 Stars), Offense (4/5 Stars), Speed (3/5 Stars)


    Magic Strengths:
    Versatility and flexibility in that it gives her a wide variety of options and her ability to change it's weaknesses quickly can confuse enemies
    It's healing ability is quite handy (but it drains her the more serious the wound obviously)



    Magic Weaknesses:
    Differs, however she will always have at LEAST one weakness. If she changes to iron for example her main weakness is electricity (or similar magic), as well as extreme heat (e.g. hot enough to melt iron), however if in her fire form her weakness is neither of those, in fact extreme heat will power her up. But her weakness is instead water, and to a point wind and earth.
    If she runs low on magic power she will start to 'fade away' to the point where if she runs out, she vanishes completely and will die


    Other Magic Info:
    Anything she touches she can add to her changing ability, however she cannot become animals or specific items (e.g. cups) just the element(s) which make up said item. She can also not be more than one element at a time at this stage in time. However her magic can allow her body to be up to three at any given time (as a max)
    She can transform into any element she touches straight off the bat, but must also train to properly use said element, and slowly go up by changing parts of her body at a time (e.g. if she touches gold and transforms into it for the first time, then she will start with only hands. Then once that is mastered, feet. Then once mastered, both. Etc, etc until fully mastered a complete transformation) otherwise her magic can fluctuate and go out of control entirely.
    Note she has yet to fully master wind and fire due to their complexity, and struggles transforming back from granite.


    Having another character on the way as well, however how good is this? Anything you want me to change just let me know (I hope I explained her magic well, it's kinda hard to explain it)

  • Just a quick FYI: I'm at my grandparent's until next Friday (?) helping out at my aunt's VBS. I know kid is in another state but I don't know for how long. Please hang in there guys, I don't know how often I'll be able to check up on forms and answer questions, but I will try. I can't really right now, but I wanted to update y'all. Thanks c:

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    I managed to get some time in right now, but I can't have service all the time. As Anime said, we're both busy but we will try our best to manage. I, for anyone curious and to just clear things up, will be gone until next week. For now, I can just write up a short post.


    @Lunarlord - She looks great, but again we have a lot of female characters right now. If there's a chance you could change her into male I'd appreciate it (or if your second character could be male).
    - Is she going to be an S-class participant?
    - I'd also like if you could go into more detail about the characteristics of each element she can change into, like the pros and cons. If you could even remove some of the elements for now, it'd be nice. She has a lot of elements just at this moment; dialing that down to where she gets some of them later would be nice.
    - And she doesn't get the ability to change into what she touches right away, correct? Like she has to train with that element before she can actually use it?
    (Sorry for so many questions, I'd just like if you could give more detail in her magic abilities)


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  • Can Mes be a S-Class participant? (If he's accepted of course)


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    Cloud - He can most certainly be a participant. I will note that there is a spot reserved for him there. I think his magic is pretty neat, but could you maybe explain a bit more in his attacks he can use in his forms (I know Dragon King is mostly physical attacks but in reference to the others)? And maybe expand on how long each form lasts and such.


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    @ToxicSoldier - Oh I'm not sure. Anime pointed out a few things but I haven't heard anything that you changed it to what she asked. I haven't checked either, and I'm kind of rushed at the moment so I can't check it out. I haven't accepted anyone because of this. So please just be patient and I will try and get things going for right now.


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  • I'm sorry if this looks rushed or anything. If you find any errors, I'll be sure to correct them! :3

    The post was edited 1 time, last by xXFrostedSoulXx ().

  • @Toxic-Yeah, like Kid mentioned, from what I've seen, you haven't fixed or answered what I asked you to. Mainly, you still have weapons in the 'Shadow conjure' spells as "nearly unbreakable". Also, you didn't answer my question about being able to escape from the Nightmare Dome (depending on the target's mental strength). Those are what I really need to be changed and/or answered before I can accept your form.


    @Lunarlord- I really like your form, but like Kid said, maybe you could remove 1 or 2 currently known elements (seeing as they aren't S-class) and list some pros and cons. Or just like you did with the iron, list a weakness and we'll see from there.


    @Cloud- I know you said that you wouldn't really use Dragon King mode all that much, but knowing that you could use it, I really don't like the idea of you having a "Dragon Mode". This is because you are just an S-class participant and even though it only lasts for 2 minutes, that is (in my opinion) too overpowered for my liking, even if I apply it to an S-class mage. Also, please to refer to Kid's post about your form because they get a say too. Aside from that, I really like your created magic! I'm excited to see it in use.


    @Frost- Okay, so here's the thing about your magic: Both Kid and I find all of your magics to be the same type of thing, so if you could combine those into one, we'd appreciate it. Also, we don't really like the idea of the power gems because they don't really correspond with the magic used and it's not really fair that the weapons of darkness can just reform after breaking. Even with requip weapons, if they break, you have to wait a while for them to be restored. It's not often someone can nullify your magic, because of the sheer diversity between them. Finally, because the character is part cat, do you have some more increased senses or stats that come with that? If so, maybe you could lower those stats because of the already powerful magic.

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    Animegirl#53564
    I changed it! Also, it doesn't really higher any stats besides just a better sense of smell and better hearing^^.
    Sorry for the errors!
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    [align=center][size=6pt] anemone


    [size=14]Lightning[/size]
    [spoiler][glow=darkblue,2,300][i][font=times new roman] “Lightning, lend me your power,
    So that all who defy me can’t help but to cower.
    Show me the secret to shoot a great blast.
    Anyone who faces me will be sure to not last.
    Lightning crackles.
    Thunder cackles.
    Release said power from its invisible shackles."


    By xXFrostedSoulXx

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    Thank you so much! :)
    I'm excited to role play with you too c: !
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    [size=14]Lightning[/size]
    [spoiler][glow=darkblue,2,300][i][font=times new roman] “Lightning, lend me your power,
    So that all who defy me can’t help but to cower.
    Show me the secret to shoot a great blast.
    Anyone who faces me will be sure to not last.
    Lightning crackles.
    Thunder cackles.
    Release said power from its invisible shackles."


    By xXFrostedSoulXx

  • S-class participant?

    [glow=black,2,300]Character Information:


    [img width=360 height=510]http://25.media.tumblr.com/tum…8y9tadVU1ryntt3o1_500.png[/img]


    Name:
    Amasis Cato Alduin


    Gender:
    Male


    Age:
    20


    Appearance:
    Amasis is a very thin and lanky looking person. He would almost never wear something as extreme as shown in the picture although he does wear longer and more robe looking clothes. He has light black hair although its not quite to the point of grey. And eyes consisting of every color swirling in a pool, never quite blending but existing in their own little bubble of space. He is quite tall, although this is definitely magnified by his overall presence and he is bone thin. Finally he always like to wear a smile on his face, this almost becoming characteristic of him.


    Guild Mark Color/Location:
    He has a red outlined grey mark located near the middle of his left forearm.


    Rank (S-class or regular):
    Regular


    Personality:
    Amasis is a very strategic and calculative person in battle. Always searching for weakness and putting aside his personal feelings at the expense of winning the battle. He can be brutal and cruel, even in a friendly duel. And although he will apologize after the battle, he would do it over and over again in the attempt to win. As there are very few scenarios where he will show mercy. But of course there is an Amasis out of battle. Here he is a happy, friendly, careless person. He will always be kind although it is pretty hard to gain his trust. He really doesn't care what anyone thinks about him and holds no bias over anyone else. He just tries to be a happy person. Something that can be a real struggle at times.


    History:
    Amasis was born into a very supporting and happy family. He was a lone child, and he lived in a very small and deserted area. Although he was happy, and that was all that really mattered. He grew up with few friends and as he aged he grew quite close to his parents. And soon enough he learned his father was a decently skilled user of Fire Magic. And as he reached a proper age, his father decided it was right to train Amasis up. And it seemed he held the same magic as his father at first. And it stayed like this for awhile. But one day, everything changed. Suddenly he learned that his father was not at all who he expected. As not only was he far more powerful then he initially led on, but he had recently gotten into some very shady relations with the Dark Guilds of Fiore. And while listening in on a conversation between his father and a member of a Dark Guild. He learnt that his father was planning on murdering an entire town in cold blood. After going through a near mental breakdown and some minor investigation he made a decision. Even if it would break his mothers innocent heart. He was going to contact the magic council. And just in time a single mage sent by the Magic Council came to stop his father and his small group. His father was powerful no doubt although the Magic Council didn't bother taking chances, and his father and his group were instantly blown away and taken into custody. After this his mother couldn't take the pressure and simply ran, ran from everything. The mage couldn't stay long, although seeing a young child in need decided to take him to Magnolia. Here he had a transformation in more ways then one. First, he became far more adept in his magic skills. Quickly learning that he was not at all a typical Fire Magic user. Second, learning that there was so much more to the world then the barren wasteland he previously lived in. And third, he couldn't give out his trust so easily. The mage that originally found him then became a close friend to him, teaching him things about his magic and teaching him to be a good person. Although the damage his father had done emotionally was already done. And he became a much more closed in and untrusting person. He never had it in him to be a mean person. So he always tended to just try, try as hard as he could to be happy. Or at least seem it. And after some more time passed, he seemed generally healed. Sure, it takes a lot to gain his trust, although he has learned to become happy. And through this process he has become very engrossed in his magic, doing his best to master it with the help of his mage friend and becoming adept in his skills. Eventually becoming a proud member of Fairy Tail. Also becoming a ruthless fighter as a sideffect of his childhood trauma. As this is where he lets all of his frustrations out.


    Strengths:
    *Great knowledge of his magic and magic in general.
    *Will do anything to win a battle
    *Versatile magic
    *Mentally hard to break.


    Weaknesses:
    *Anger over the Dark Guilds, as in his mind they corrupted his father.
    *If you somehow learn of his past, which is very covered as the only person who really knows is the mage that put his father into custody.
    *Also that he will do anything to win a battle


    Family:
    *James Alduin/Father/In Custody
    *Mei Alduin/Mother/Unknown


    Other:
    Protect your nakama
    For now I should be constantly online as it is summer. Although when school starts I will be on sometimes after school and often on the weekend. Also sorry for the somewhat sloppy post, writing fast.

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    Magic Information:


    Magic Type/Name:
    Rainbow Fire Magic


    Magic Information/Spells:
    Amasis has a few main colors that are easy for him to summon and hold certain properties. He also has certain other unstable colors that can be summoned in a time of desperation. And of course Rainbow Fire.
    *Basic Red Fire: The type of fire he is most used to. It has the properties of typical fire although it is quite strong as he has been training this fire for quite a long time.
    *Green Fire: Holding acidic properties this fire is very dangerous and although it is used as a primary fighting tactic in Amasis's battles it is quite deadly and at times unpredictable.
    *Variations of Blue Fire: Amasis possess two main variations of Blue Fire, one is a lighter blue which has colder and more ice like properties. The other is warmer and holds properties closer to water. These are both fairly reliable and possibly a little bit underused.
    *White Fire: His first undiscovered and underused fire. This fire is extremely hot and is known to be uneatable by Fire Dragons. It is quite dangerous even to Amasis and is only used under crucial situations
    *Rainbow Fire: A very powerful yet reliable fire. This creates an explosion on contact and is hard to work against as the multiple properties it holds can work around any counters to normal fire or one specific counter.


    Magic Strengths:
    *Extreme diversity
    *Powerful offensive magic
    *Has room for improvement


    Magic Weaknesses:
    *No real defensive capabilities
    *No practical uses
    *Hard to master


    Other Magic Info:
    I was possibly thinking of adding more colors if need be. Although I think this should be suitable to be perfectly honest. And that's really about all.
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