Advanced bio- Sandykit!

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  • Character Name: Sandypaw - Sandypelt


    Character Age: 6 moons


    Gender: She-cat


    Alliance:Riverclan


    Rank: Apprentice


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): Sandypaw is a pale ginger tabby she-cat with huge green eyes. She has some scars from when a warrior from another clan fought her, she was only a kit then so they might go away. She is long furred and sleek from eating fish. The stripes on her tabby pelt are white and she has white paws too. Her striking, deep green eyes display her feelings, no matter how hard she tries for them not to. Her tail is tipped with white and she has white ear fur too.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Sandykit is a daring and adventurous cat and will wander off a cliff if it meant she would see something new (well not really but you get the point right?). She is confident and brave but hates seeing others suffer. She is also loving and quiet at times and really sweet. Sandykit is loyal and will give her life for her clan. She hates to be lonely and likes clan life much better than being a rouge or loner. She is strategic and always thinks things through.
    ---Likes (at least 3): she likes the feel of the water sliding over her pelt, helping others, sitting by the river and watching the reflections from the water on the ground and hunting with her friends.
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): she hates tree climbing, seeing other cats in pain no mater what clan, leaf-bare and brambles...XD
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5):she is strong both physically and mentally, good at swimming, a good fighter even if she doesn't like fighting and quite fast for a riverclan cat.
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3):her friendliness and hate to see other cats suffer makes it hard for her to fight, she is overly confident sometimes and that could be dangerous and she hates the trees if she is in them she completely shuts down


    History (8 or more sentences): When Sandypaw was a week old she was found in Riverclan territory by a warrior on patrol. She was took in and nursed back to health, then later accepted into the clan. She has a brother-like relationship with Stormpaw and the two always play and do everything together. When she was six moons old she was made an apprentice at the same time as Stormpaw. She does all the duties like cleaning the dens and hunting gladly. Sandykit loves clan life and thinks how much better it is than being a loner. She also wonders who her mother and father were and if she has any littermates. Now her mentor is Cloverheart and she is learning the skills to be a warrior.


    Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}:Sandypaw waited by the river that ran through Riverclan territory. She saw a glimmer of silver and flashed out a paw, hooking her claws so that a heartbeat later a fish layed, pinned beneath her paws. She bent her head and gave it a sharp bite than sat up with a purr of satisfaction, muffled by her catch.


    Comments (optional): nope :)

    The post was edited 1 time, last by sandypelt(will be inactive because of school) ().

  • Hi Sandypelt!
    A cat has to be at least 12 moons to be a warrior. Can you fix that?

  • :-*One more sentence in personality :D

  • Is Sandykit Sandykit or Sandypelt/is she a kit or a warrior? Her history is as if she's a warrior, however, she's continuously mentioned as a kit throughout her bio. ;)

  • she is a kit right now but she will be a warrior when she grows up. I guess i should have just put her history as a kit...if you want me to do that just say :P

  • You have seven strengths in personality. Remember that even if something is only one part of the list, it can still count as multiple strengths -- for example, saying that she is strong both physically and mentally would be counted as two strengths instead of one. Please remove two of Sandykit's strengths.



    Also, if Sandykit is a kit, then her history would be things she had already experienced. Therefore, the parts about her apprenticeship and warriorship would not be part of her history. :] You'll need to rewrite that.

  • You just need two more sentences in history and this can be approved ^^

    The post was edited 1 time, last by ωolfмσση ().


  • Approved!