[500 Word Challenge Entry] A Vulture's Eyes (Short Story)

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  • A V U L T U R E ' S E YE S.



    When it happened, I felt every bone in my body. I felt them, one by
    one, lighting on fire within me. I could feel my collarbone, my ribs.
    Everything shattering before me. To be incredibly honest with you,
    I was scared. It’s natural, I guess. It hurt so much. I didn’t have any
    other things to feel. I awoke to darkness.
    She turned on a light. It did not set ease to my mind when that
    light lit the room. Perhaps it was because I could not see the source
    of it, even when I stared where it was brightest. Maybe I thought that because
    I was injured. People who are hurt imagine things. I turned, slowly, from
    where I was standing in the center of a perfectly square room. She hovered
    like a vulture, a bird of prey in the corner. She was waiting. The first thing
    I noticed were the eyes. Dreadful. I can’t tell you their color. I can’t describe
    it. All I know is they glared into me, like a beast unto its prey.
    “Who are you?” My voice was bland, like the rough wood of a picket fence.
    “I am your death.” Her reply was soft and yet sharp, like the vulture’s feather.
    Can you understand that?
    I can.
    So here we stood, the fenced-in soul eyeing the blood-seeking bird with
    a nervousness only a dead man could muster. I put my hand to my heart.
    It was not beating.
    “Where am I?” I asked.
    There was no response.

  • [justify][fancypost bgcolor=; bordercolor=transparent; borderwidth=; width:400px; text-align:justify; font-size:8pt; color: solid grey; text-transform: lowercase]✦ ✦ - very lovely! i like the suspense and the haunting feeling :0