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    Am i already accepted then? or do i wait?


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    Toxicapple
    You may have your cats back, but please know that I need you to be active. Inactivity is fine so long as your giving us a heads up. I know it doesn't sound like a lot of work, but putting cats up, taking them down, and keeping tracking of who is here and who isn't, can be a pain. I'll put your cats up later.

    Character Name/Gender;;
    Lightfeather, She-cat


    Appearance ;; Lightfeather is almost completely white in color, with only a few hazel-colored spots here and there on her body. Her eyes match the color of the spots on her body, meaning her eyes are hazel. Lightfeather has a fluffy tail, and pointy ears similar to a lynx. Her pelt isn't as fluffy as her tail, but has more of a flatter look.


    Personality ;; She's a sweet, optimistic cat. She's almost always cheerful and she is rarely let down. Lightfeather is caring of other cats and is always helpful. Some of the time she's bouncy and it's kind of hard to keep her still. However, when she serious and alert, few cats can't tell she's the same cat. She keeps her energy to do the work that has to be done.


    Kin;; Lightfeather has a long lost brother, Shadowfur.


    Crush/Mate;;
    N/A, Open


    History;;
    When Lightfeather was a kit/apprentice, a lot of cats adored her for her optimism. She was a playful ball of energy, and loved to keep her family company. One day, her mother was resting peacefully when her father burst into the nursery. Lightfeathers parents exchanged urgent words with each other and her mother quickly stood onto her legs. They said farewell to Lightfeather, and left. That was the last she's seen of her parents. However, that didn't stop her from being her same self. Yes, she missed them deeply, but crying over it won't fix anything. She still has her beloved older brother, and life was amazing the way it was.


    Desired Rank;; Warrior
    Sample of your RP abilities;;
    Lightfeather pounded into the clearing, panting. Avoiding the eyes that stared at her in confusion, she looked around for her leader. Shaking, Lightfeather crawled to the leader's den. "Lunastar, I must speak with you at once." She called. Lunastar had let her in, and Lightfeather quickly explained of what she had just witnessed.
    "A whole pack of dogs, in our territory?" Lunastar asked, and Lightfeather nodded. Taking a moment to calm down, Lightfeather continued. "I could further investigative it if you wish, but what had me spooked was the fact that I least expected it." She explained. Lunastar thought for a moment, before nodding. "Take a few cats with you, and be careful." She said.
    With that, Lightfeather crawled out of the den, ready to take on an important task.


    Do you understand that this is a semi-advanced rp & you mustn't begin RP until approved?;;
    Si, Yes!
    Screen Name;;
    Singing Skies
    Other;; (Lightfeather is 24 moons old!)

    Character name/gender: Venomousfang/male
    Appearence: Tall and slender ebony tom with very green eyes.
    Personality: Venomousfang is a very stubborn tom. As an apprentice he was known to be hard headed. He also can be white annoying as he boasts a lot. He is short tempered, though his friends see him differently. His usual mood is humorous. Venomousfang tends to be weird and strange at times, but he's really just a good cat over all. Loyal, Hardworking, Stubborn, Friendly (mostly), and other words describe him well.
    Kin: Rosethorn (Loner;Active), others deceased.
    History: : N/A
    Desired Rank: Warrior
    Sample of your rp abilities: The tom swiftly dodged the tree's as he ran through the forest. His ears were pricked and his gaze uneasy. Surely what he was smelling wasn't true? As he felt looked into a clearing, before he could see what was there, two bird flew right in front of him. When they disappeared, he saw the strange cat was no longer in the clearing. He let out a hiss of annoyance and frustration. "I guess I should get back to camp..." He hissed.
    Do you understand that this is a semi-advanced rp & you mustn't begin RP until approved?;; Yes, I do. I will try my best to keep my muse up.
    Screen name: Ocean the Vaporeon
    Other:

    Ocean
    Hey, thanks for checking out OakClan! Sorry it took some time to get back to you! I need you to add more to your appearance before I can accept you into the Clan. When that's done--whether you repost, or edit your old post--let me know!
    xx Whitey

    Whitethroat wrote:


    Ocean
    Hey, thanks for checking out OakClan! Sorry it took some time to get back to you! I need you to add more to your appearance before I can accept you into the Clan. When that's done--whether you repost, or edit your old post--let me know!
    xx Whitey


    Alright!


    edited :3
    Is that okay xD? Thats all he really looks like

    Song
    Your accepted, but in the future I would suggest asking before rping someone else cats in your rp sample. It could be consider as PP I believe.


    Boxy
    I know your trying to help, but please don't that again. I don't mind if you give small hints or details out to rpers. But considering it's Ocean's form and Ocean is expected to do the appearance themselves, Ocean is not really learning anything if they're just copying whatever you have down, and so not improving they're skills on they're own. It's kind of like giving out homework, yeah I could copy from my friend, but I am not really learning how to do it on my own if I just copy. It's not helping me in the long run. Ocean's not really improving they're writing skills by taking what you have down.


    Ocean
    They're are several more details you could add into your appearance. So he's tall yeah. Does he have any muscles, lean like a runner or heavily built like a fighter. What type of shape does his face have? Does he have any markings? Where are the scars places on his body? What length is his fur? What length is his tail? How big or small are his paws or his ears?


    Last
    To answer your question, Lunastar is most likely going to give up her apprentice. Being a new leader and juggling an apprentice right now is probably not best for her.