Character Name: Hope
Character Age: 18 moons
Gender: She cat
Alliance: Darkness of the Pale Heart
Rank: Twilight
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Hope is a small munchkin, her fur is a whitish cream color with a creamy, long tail. She has pale blue eyes and short legs. Over all, she is small and adorable but her claws and fangs are long and sharp. She is a fighter and holds herself like one. She is wise and her knowledge is portrayed in her eyes. Her creamy pelt has a warm glow and she is always well groomed.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Hope is wise and kind. She will hardly ever fight and will try to talk instead. She is always overcoming struggles and is an optimist. She is sweet and gentle always looking for the good in everyone. She is justice inclined and is always doing for the best. She is a small but strong cat and is always there when you need her.
---Likes (at least 3): She likes kits, water and peace.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She dislikes war, harming others and fire.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Hope is strong when it comes to fighting, hunting and her wisdom.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): She is weak to the fear of pain, the dark, violence and blood.
History (8 or more sentences): Hope's first struggle was birth. She was born a week early and her parents died a moon after her birth. She had to learn to care for herself from when she was a kit. She may have been forced to grow up quickly but she is still strong mentally. She then had to deal with winter. The cold nearly killed her if it wasn't for the bear hide she had found. She hid herself in it and slept, that way she kept warm. The reason she is here now is because she never gave up hope.
Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Hope walked into a clearing and looked around her in awe at what she had found. The clearing had a tunnel to one side that was covered by ferns and brambles. She padded down the tunnel and found many caves. She went further into the tunnel and claimed the last den as hers. Inside to one side, was a shelf like thing that could hold many different things. To the other side, there was a tunnel that went even deeper into the gorge but it was hidden by a group of ferns that blocked the entrance. She stepped into the tunnel and came to a large cave that had a pool at the bottom, it was feed by a spring that was a small distance away. She stepped to the side and explored each nook.
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