TEACH ME YOUR WAYS {Tutoring|P|Pocket Eevee}

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]"I can show you the world, Pocket Eevee. Take my hand and-" Atisha slams her fist into your face, chuckling. "Just kidding, I can show you this place that creator uses to roleplay. She's using you as a guinea pig to see if she could tutor friends. I'm the one who's been dragged into it to be her little mouthpiece. Just like Ash and the Queen. //shot" She lets out another giggle, dragging in Examplepaw. "Examplepaw will also be joining us, and will shift into multiple creatures, as well as changing names. Welcome to the tutoring. Now post your idea of a roleplay starter."[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]Okay, let's start with the obvious. First of all, reading. No one will want to roleplay with someone who uses giant lettering, and no capitalization. Fix that. Also, quotation marks. It separates words from actions. Which is harder to discern?

do you want to go hunting? he asked.
OR
"Do you want to go hunting?" He asked.
It tells you what is being said, and what is happening.

One more thing for that post, who is saying it? We will bring in Examplepaw now.

"Do you want to go hunting?" He asked.
OR
"Do you want to go hunting?" Examplepaw asked. (You could also say 'Examplepaw asks' or 'Asked Examplepaw.')[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]"See? Much easier to read now. If it's too small for you to read, you can always make it larger, but not TOO big. Now, try another starter, this time with the new information I gave you.. First, make a small character, just something until we get to amazing forms. Let me give you an example.

Name: Exampleclaw
Gender: Gender unidentified.
Looks: A lanky black cat with green eyes, virtually no whiskers, and a long tail.
Personality: A little mysterious, and often dragged into situations as a tester. Known as the 'Guinea Pig.'
History: Exampleclaw's name originated because they were born to be an example, and had strange parents. They were dragged into a lot of situations.

So create a small character of your own, write down the basic info, then have them start a hunting patrol.[/fancypost]

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Name: Exampleclaw Gender: Gender unidentified. Looks: A lanky black cat with green eyes, virtually no whiskers, and a long tail. Personality: A little mysterious, and often dragged into situations as a tester. Known as the 'Guinea Pig.' History: Exampleclaw's name originated because they were born to be an example, and had strange parents. They were dragged into a lot of situations.

Strange, right? Also, commas. Put them between dark, mysterious, and cunning. It looks better, like your a better roleplayer. Feel lucky, I was horrible for so long since I didn't know about tutoring. One last thing, capitalizations and punctuations. Use correct commas (again, this) and also punctuation.[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]"We also work on spelling here. Ma'am is spelled M-a-a-m. Put an apostrophe between the two A's and you've got it down. Now get to work on that hunting patrol request by Calin!" She begins pacing down the very short line. "Also, maybe you could add a nice salute to that Ma'am next time."[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]She sets a scowl on her pale face, brushing her jet black hair back so you could see it. "Is my name Atisha or what? Have Calin start up a hunting patrol, and make it long! Get silver, but don't just repeat words over and over. Use description. In an actual roleplay, it gets you a lot of silver, for your pets or powers, plus it makes you look amazing, like an advanced rper."
She sits down, pulling her hair back into place with a snap of the wrist. A chair poofs in place for her in the barren white landscape, something you hadn't noticed until now. It was pure white, with only the two of you, and the new, plush chair that the slightly so called mouthpiece of god Paralyzer had just conjured up with a flick of her wrist.[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]She stares, aghast, at the writing materializing on the paper. "* no! What did I *ing say about punctuation, capitalization, quotation marks? Did that *ing 'Yes Ma'am' mean nothing to your worthless *!?" She clears her throat, letting the slight red on her face calm down. "Excuse my language. First of all, starting a hunting patrol. That means calling for others to join them hunting, if they go hunting without another, then it's just a lab experiment hunting, not a hunting patrol. You were supposed to have Calin start a hunting patrol, and Examplepaw would come up so they could go hunting."
Plus, who is saying what? Quotation marks, boy, quotation marks!" Atisha fans her face a little, turning subtly to show off the pistol on her hip. "No random bear friends, either. Bears don't get along well with cats, although people still pretend they do. One last thing, soldier. 16 mice, a crow, and 5 voles? Prey may be running well, but this is pure madness. Way too much prey for one creature. Also, beware Gary-Stus/Mary-Sues. Calin is beginning to become one. Also, are you saying you, as the puppet master, went hunting, or that Calin went hunting and was the one saluting me? You have to specify the difference."[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]"If you know, then what was that? Try it again, this time like you actually paid attention and were starting a hunting patrol! Get to work, Pocket Eevee!"[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]"Fine, I'll start a roleplay." She clears her throat, and begins to write on the newly formed table.

Exampleclaw stalked up behind Calin, holding their long tail ridged like they were taught to by many a warrior when they were an apprentice. Then, the black cat leaped on the Eevee, screeching. "Hunting, hunting, hunting! The crazy girl over there told us to, since she's testing us. It makes me feel like an apprentice again, honestly." They rolled off, cleaning the dust out of their fur with quick, strong strokes. "Are you coming, or do I need to find another experimental creature?"[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=grey; bordercolor=; borderwidth=0px; width: 370px; height: 150px; opacity: 0.70; margin-left: -5px; color: white; font-family: arial; font-size: 8pt; overflow: auto; box-shadow: 0px 0px 4px 6px grey;][justify]Atisha sighs, deciding to intervene. Rattling the thing a little, she keeps an obvious distance from Exampleclaw. "Listen up you little *. I am testing your stupid little * so you are going *ing hunting, okay? If not, you may want to think about getting *ing boring tutoring instead of this, because-" Loud yelling begins to emit from one ear, and the female cringes.
"Stop yelling god, I'm just joking. Maybe he should consider it though, or just go into the game unprepared and be like you when you first came to this place." She gave Calin a few more shakes, then dropped him on the ground. "Now go *ing hunting you *ing cat *."[/fancypost]

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