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Reibun
[i]"Take a number, I'll get to you when I can."
(Rebooting an old thread from my old profile)
Intro
This is the world we live in
The last rays of light disappeared over a small suburban neighborhood, letting dark take it's place. A group, not too different than most, was turning in for the night, hoping that the next day would be better. As they settled in, exchanging good-nights and reassuring promises, a loud slam interrupted them, and three strong figures stepped in.
It's all been brought to survival
With the whole group now gagged and tied up in the living room, one of the attackers, a male Houndoom, grabbed the leader of the small group by a handful of hair, pulling him back. Growls of rage were muffled by the gag that restricted the male Umbreon. Dragging the Umbreon behind him, the Houndoom went to a door that had stairs leading to the basement.
The line between right and wrong, has never been more thin.
The Houndoom showed a feeling of satisfaction on his face, continued to punch the Umbreon. He was pinned to the ground, no where to go, nothing he could do. For a second, the marauder stopped, slamming the Umbreon into place with a hand around his throat. "Wrong place, wrong time. Well, for your group. It's going to be so much fun killing the lot of you. It's been a while since I've had it so easy." Little to the Houndoom's knowledge, the Umbreon had been working away at his binds with a broken shard of glass on the ground under him.
And crossing it, is just a daily act, that you have to live with.
Now with free hands, the Umbreon waited for the perfect moment. The Houndoom let go of his throat to continue to beat him again, and this was when he made his move. His hand shot from under him, light reflecting off the glass shard.
Whether you let it ruin you, or build you is your choice
The Umbreon took the steps one at a time, rage filling his eyes. As he reached the top of the stairs and opened the door, he came face to face with the Onix gijinka. Surprise filled the larger attacker's eyes as he saw a ball of dark energy slam into his face, sending him back to the ground. In a flash, the Umbreon was standing over him, his eyes slowly blinking back open, just to see a second ball forming.
But no matter what happens, there will always be consequences.
The third has fallen easily, more in fear than real pain. The bloodied leader began freeing his tied up allies. When he finished, he didn't look a single one in the eyes, knowing there were less tied up than there were who were going to bed. Pain and anger flashed through his eyes and he let out a sigh, hoping to relieve it all with that.
But with every night, there will always be a morning.
As the light broke over the neighborhood again, the Umbreon didn't move from where he sat in the back yard, staring at a line of graves. His cheeks were stained, and his hair wet from the rain that passed through the night before.
The trick is making it until then
Plot
In a harsh world with no peace, happiness, or mercy, Arc, an Umbreon gijinka, tries to lead his group to a better life. They will battle through thick and thin, trying their best to see the next day. Threatened every day by hunger, attackers, and guilt won't make it easy, but as long as there's some kind of hope, they will continue. But when that's gone, will they carry on?
Rules
1. Normal rules apply
2. Keep explicit content(Extreme Violence or other) Off the thread.
2.5. This doesn't mean there can't be a bit of violence or affection.
3. Censor swear words.
4. Help others. No blocking someone from rping by not giving them something to reply to.
5. This is Semi advanced, so at least four sentence posts. Detailed sentences. Help with this is in the help section.
6. Have fun with this, and bring ideas to the table every now and then.
Guidlines
It's just Anarchy. It's modern day, however since it's pokehumans, we'll just say they didn't have to invent guns and such. Cars, however, are a thing.
This can get violent, but don't worry, I won't let it get out of hand. This thread will be based around the group, and I would appreciate it if most everyone was part of the group(That doesn't mean people can't leave the group for plot reasons). We don't want three out of five people being loners. I probably won't allow loners at first.
The muse in this thread can go everywhere from action to drama. Let's just keep things balanced.
Help
Got muse troubles? Well I'm here for you, son. I got 99 problems, but muse ain't one.
Let's take a normal two word sentence.
"he smiled"
Ew, okay, that would make me throw a book at you. So, let's improve it.
First off, grammar.
"He smiled."
There, moving on.
When a replying to a post, read the post and build off of it. Like if he's smiling say who.
"He smiled back at her."
Look at that, three new words. Now, to make it look more official. If it's your first sentence in your reply, it's best use names for clarity.
"Joe smiled back at Jane."
There, now no one's confused. Time to go into more detail. Try noting where and what your character is doing in one to three different places.
"Leaning against the wall, Joe smiled back at Jane."
"Joe, leaning against the wall, smiled back at Jane."
"Joe smiled back at Jane, leaning against the wall."
Now, add in more detail to what you're doing.
"Leaning against the wall, arms across his chest, Joe smiled back at Jane."
Then your best friend of muse: Adjectives.
"Leaning slightly against the cold, hard wall, muddy arms across his ruined shirt, Joe smiled slightly back at Jane, standing not too far away."
There, you have yourself an acceptable sentence. However, this isn't an acceptable reply.
When replying to a post, feed and build off of other posts. Let's say, Jane and Joe were in the middle of escaping. Each sentence will be put together, like the main one.
"Joe nodded, volunteering to go under first and lowered himself to the ground, just under the chain-link fence. He put his hand forward, and pulled himself under, then repeated with the other hand. It was the same grueling process till his legs were free. Now he stood up, all dirtied up from the wet ground, and walked over to a ruined wall of what used to be a building right outside the prison. Now, leaning slightly against the cold, hard wall, muddy arms across his ruined shirt, Joe smiled slightly back at Jane, standing not too far away on the other side of the fence."
I know, that just seemed like one of those sketch books. Draw a circle, but two squares next to it, create a line going down the middle, then fill in the detail to create yourself a beautiful elephant head(Not exactly, but you get the picture). Eventually, forming sentences like these will become second nature. Oh wait, one more thing. Action sentence(s) When fighting, or running, or even just jumping, a few helpful tips.
1. Include detail on every part of the body.(This can be used in any sentence((A leg twitch, scratching your head, glaring into the eyes of Satan.... too far?)))
2. Include thoughts of your character.(Also able to be used whenever)
3. Try to leave things open for the other person if it's not a random person(He swung his right fist, aiming for the man's head.) Then, as long as they're realistic about, they'll take the hit.
That's all I have, you'll start seeing this more often on my threads. If you didn't need this, sorry to bother you. If you find this helpful, good.
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Arc
"Move on"
On the Outside_____________
Full name: Arc
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Umbreon
Appearance: See image
_______________On the inside
Personality: Wears his heart on his sleeve, willing to go against anything for his family, and won't back down from difficulties, stubborn to find a way around them. He's strong, focused, and protective, though he isn't the best with humor. He has a very survivalist mindset, always looking for what's best for the group, and completely serious at all times. He's been told many times to loosen up, and be a bit more lighthearted, but he's afraid if he slows down, he'll put the group in danger. He can get violent when his group is threatened, and isn't afraid to get his hands dirty if he has to.
However, all of this can be changed with the loss of his loved ones. While he may seem unstoppable(Like most bosses found in video games) he has one huge glowing weak spot(like most bosses found in video games). What he holds most dear: Family. You strip him of what keeps him going, he will come to a halt, losing everything he is in the process. When he's like this, he's probably more useful dead. He will try and find someone or something to protect, to fill in the vast empty place in his heart.
Fears: Losing everyone and everything that he holds close to him.
What you hold most dear:(Item, ideal, or person(s)) His group, which he considers family.
Crush: Doesn't have this mindset, but open if you're willing to try.
Family, Friends, & Love_______
Siblings?: His last and only brother was just lost to him(See intro)(He had relaxed a bit that night, trying to be a bit more "Lighthearted" when it happened)
Relationship?: None
Children?: None
Other Family?: Deceased or presumed deceased
_____________Out of Character
Username: Reibun
Nickname: Rave
Muse: 7
Activity level: 7
Other: Leader of the group.
Group
Arc-Umbreon-Male
Ella-Rotom-Female
Illiana-Eevee-Female
Jason-Metagross-Male
Glaire-Glaceon-Female
RP Thread
http://feralfront.com/index.php?topic=2176198.new#new
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