Opinions on this character/how to improve him?

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  • [size=16pt]FADEDHISTORY RANDELL[/size]
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    He's an old character that is currently undergoing the process of revamping. He has a massive backstory that isn't written down quite yet, but yes, I'm looking to improve him/my roleplay in general.


    Here's some quotes from his bio, link to the full bio in his description: