Frozensong- Advanced Bio

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  • [Character Name: Frozensong


    Character Age: 13 moons


    Gender: Tom


    Alliance: Thunderclan


    Rank: Warrior


    Appearance (6 or more sentences): A young tom who has spotted white fur. This tom has blue eyes, with tinged silver around his muzzle. Frozen song has 3 white paws and one grey. On his forehead he has grey markings. He has long black whiskers and a brown/ black nose. He has a spotted, grey tipped tail.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): A kind young tom who is easily distracted by other things. Frozensong is also a cat who you would come to for advice, he is very helpful. He is the type of cat that will do as told unless he thinks its rediculous. He likes to have fun with his friends when he off duty. Frozensong likes to teach apprentices and new warriors. And he is very easy going when he is with his friend. Often forgets cats names.
    ---Likes (at least 3): Kits, Sunshine, lying in the grass
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): Kittypets, bugs, and crow food.
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Fast, Strong hind legs, and a strong bite.
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): Claws, jumping, hiding


    History (8 or more sentences): Frozensong was born in a different clan, but adopted by a Thunderclan queen when he was found on the outskirts of the Riverclan. He grew up thinking that he was a Thunderclan cat, until he was told by his older littermate in the riverclan. Soon after he was told, the young kit became an apprentice. His teacher taught him well, because later on he became a Thunderclan warrior! At the naming ceremony his name was changed from Frozenpaw to Frozensong. Him and his friends often got chose to go on patrol together. There hasn't been any findings when they go on patrol, luckily. When he was a kit/ apprentice he usually split his fresh-kill with one of the elders in the Thunderclan.


    Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Frozensong walked through the opening to the forest ready to hunt for some fresh kill. As he was walking on the dusty path he heard some rustling in the dark green bush to the left of him. He saw to big dark brown eyes..... It was a badger! He kept his eyes on the viscous thing and slowly walked back to the opening. He would have been crow food if he has tried to run past him, especially since he had never had a paws on expierience with a live badger.


    Comments (optional): Sorry that I couldn't get exact names in my history, Later on I'm going try to get some people to become part of my Role Playing.

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Crombie217 ().

  • Hey there Crombie. :] This bio is looking good, but there are a few things you'll need to fix before it can be approved.



    The biggest thing is in the odd spacing in your sentences. Just delete the unneeded space inside your paragraph sentences - for example, in appearance, you need to delete the space between "his" and "muzzle." This makes it easier to read. ^^ Lastly, some of the sentences in your bio are choppy or incomplete ("[color=rgb(40, 60, 23)]A young dark white spotted tom with a white pelt" is one example). Could you please edit them to where it flows better?[/color]


    [color=rgb(40, 60, 23)]Once the things mentioned above are done, this should be ready for approval. :][/color]


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