Character Name: Orangepaw
Character Age: 7 Moons
Gender: She-cat
Alliance: ShadowClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Orangepaw is a siamese she. She has three toes on her right front paw, because of her abusive twoleg. She has blue eyes, and a blackish nose. Orangepaw has a short tail and long fur, with battle scars all over her small body. She can also be easily distinguished by her pale orange left hind paw. Her thick pelt keeps her warm in leaf bare.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Orangepaw is a daring cat. She's ALWAYS been boastful. But, she can be very defensive of her clanmates, and will fight for the clan. AT ALL COSTS, Orangepaw will never give up or give in. She tries to be nice, at times, but when she is bragging.... Well.... Cats don't like her very much then. Orangepaw can be a very caring, and very sweet cat. That is... when she feels it best needed.
---Likes (at least 3): Showing off. Working hard for her clan. Rescuing other cats from danger.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Cats stronger or better than her. Sick cats. Calm silence.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Forethought, bravery, and honesty.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Cannot control her anger, is blind in one eye, and gets easily caught up in a battle and may tackle her clanmates by accident.
History (8 or more sentences): Orangepaw lived with a twoleg. At first, when it adopted her, it treated her well and let her play in a big area. But when she was five moons old, it made her live in a smaller cage, in a cold room. The cages holding other cats lined the walls and were stacked on top of eachother. They were hardly fed, and had to fight for food. The twoleg that owned them, made them battle eachother for money. The twoleg would invite it's friends over and bet on which cat would win. He'd also charge other people to have them watch. And no police had discovered this. So one day, after Orangepaw had finished her fight, she had been shoved in her cage. Bloody and wounded, Orangepaw realized the twoleg hadn't closed her cage door all the way, so she crawled out. As soon as she had stepped foot out of the cage, the twoleg had noticed her, and she'd run all the way into ShadowClan territory. There, the cats chased the twoleg off and welcomed her as an apprentice of ShadowClan.
Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}: Orangepaw's hackles rose as she smelled enemy scent. She had been with her mentor on a hunting patrol and had strayed away from him when he went to make dirt behind a bush. Orangepaw saw an enormous warrior emerge from behind a tree in front of her. She froze with shock at the cats size. Thunderclan. Orangepaw let out a battle cry as she sprang at the cat. She slid under it's stomach at raked it's underbelly. The cat threw her off and sank its teeth into her scruff. Orangepaw kicked at it with her hindpaws desperately, until it got pulled off of her. Her mentor scrambled on top of it and pinned it down.
"What do you have to say for yourself? Her mentor hissed at Thunderclan cat. "And you too, Orangepaw! Wandering off like that!"
Comments (optional): This is my first advanced bio! Sorry if I messed up! I will fix it if I did! Thanks! And what do I do after I've gotten it approved? o.o Sorry I'm new to this :/
