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    [sub]its simple, definitive. little room for argument. the best thing anyone can ask for. literally.
    "what's in this hot cocoa?"
    "yes."
    "... oh okay." *chugs the pinecone-flavoured cocoa without question*


    hmm. age gap? would that make it more interesting? OR MAYBE THEY WERE BORN AT THE EXACT SAME MOMENT? HURHURHUHHRUH *dies of sleep deprivation* i am definitely making coffee in the morning...


    it'd be one of those "little is known about before the kingdoms." the default history, right? we can stage it out over time, i believe, as the plot solidifies and when we have fresh blood ideas.

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    Born at the same moment sounds pretty soul-matey, while born "too late/early" can seem more... wistful? I don't know.


    Would they be of the same kingdom? Or did we decide on different? And did we want to go the drama route or something slightly humorous/ridiculous? Because I've already got an outline for my kingdom if the latter.








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    [sub]alright, because i'm hardly awake anymore. you say 'kingdom' and i read 'cherry general'. i need sleep. i will answer that question in the morning.


    hmmm. if we go with the age gap, how big are we talking?

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    Oh, we wouldn't have to do anything too drastic, but considering it's back in “marry this douchebag (without consent)” times, perhaps when one's already married? Or one has already taken knightly vows.


    I also found this: http://m.lordsandladies.org/







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    [sub]the traveller has taken the knightly vows and the other is just like "i'm married. BUT OMG SEXY."


    it took me a moment to figure out that there was more to the site than just weird grayscale faces. you need to tell me your secret of finding random, useful sites like this.

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    Good. Yes. Obey the Yes.


    Googling "Magna Carta." For reasons I have honestly no idea about.
    I also want an excuse to put the song "Left Me in a Hole" in this, even though I have it on my ATGKSY playlist (shh), mainly because of this verse:


    You have your life, and I have mine,
    Maybe we'll meet again some other time
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    [sub]yes.


    i googled the magna carta for my civics class and i never found that kind of stuff! *is skimped on life choices* WHY NO EQUAL?


    ... yes.
    [s]idk i'm suddenly very obsessed with the word.

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    Okay, yes, what now? Did you understand the kingdom thing now? 'Cause that would require the most work, I believe.


    Holy shit, I think I just experienced what I'll do to Traverry if they become a pairing I love. And it's slightly scary.








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    [sub]figured it out just now. i don't think they'd be in the same kingdom. in fact, i think it was cherry general (so prunus) and the blueberry/salmon traveller (rubus/salmonperson)?


    what was it?

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    EDIT: Add Jeff Buckley's “So Real” to the Traverry playlist/lovefest, too.


    And, as they'd be married in/knights to that kingdom, we would hear about that much more than the others. So... can I flood you with my kingdom outline? OOh, and we were going to embrace the crack-y side of things, or mainly serious? Answer that first. Possibly with a vague, ambiguous yes.


    It was attempting to write one goddamn sex scene, with only the beef bayonet swinging as the focus of the story, and having it turn into a 5,000+ plus story about letting old scars heal and trusting someone new. I still want to get the love makin' in there, but I don't know how anymore. Oh, and it all started with "I Love A Rainy Night" and Chet Faker's "Talk is Cheap." Please help me.
    Yes.
    Please help me. Give me more relationship articles.








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    [sub]if i had a list, i'd definitely add to it, but i believe you're the one holding onto that? eh, it's not there are many rom/com songs NOT on this list.


    shoot the kingdom outline. sort of both? like a suspenseful comedy. LIKE PRETTY LITTLE LIARS OH SH8t. yes.


    that's the thing about writing. don't go in expecting one thing and being upset when something else happens. let the story take you where it wants to go. and i don't have any relationship articles (of good stature) within arm's reach right now, sorry love. but if you really want that love scene, use vagueness, implementation. go beyond your comfort level.


    or just read sm*t. a lot of it. find which style you prefer and do what everyone else does: mimic. monkey see, monkey do, monkey learn.

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    Oh, I wasn't upset. Au contraire, lady blue. I'm just sad that I now can't write three more, shove them into one document, and title it Philosophies: The Sex Episode (as each part would be named after a philosophies; the current one is idealism) unless I want it 20,000 words long.
    And I believe my style for that type of writing is more so in the character's head, without vague physical actions. Or my characters are incredibly emotional sissies. One or the other.


    Okay, hold my hand:


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    [sub]its very detailed
    *holds hand*
    i like it.




    any particular piece you want advice on?
    and which kingdom are we talking about here?

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    Oh, any kingdom, but I thought that this might be the Cherry's domain? But I don't know how CG would fit into that hodgepodge I have going there.


    Sadly enough, i think I could write an article on how your character's kinks can be symbolism. I'd... definitely need to run it with you, because I may just be pulling things out of thin air that sound like Shakespeare to me, but that homeless guy outside of Ross to everyone else. Oh my God, and know I don't know whether to go with the male or female dominatrix... or person thing when I'm going to-- you know what, just stuff a sock in my mouth.








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    [sub]maybe he's the older brother to roman? he's a bastard, too, but at least his father isn't royalty.




    [s]*hands a sock* have at it. but that sounds like a somewhat cool, albeit complex, idea

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    Hmm... I always thought "bastard" meant that one of their parents was royalty?


    EDIT: OH, WAIT. Were you being facetious?


    SUNDAE LOVE COMPLEX SCHEMES. She will also not make you try to come up with writing-development-thing for the story that has a black collar in it. But know I don't know if it was supposed to be leather or latex.








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    [sub]actually, bastard stands for 'born of two parents who are not married to one each other', but whenever most bastards are in context, its because they're related to royalty; mainly because they're the whole plotline in most stories.




    i actually had to google facetious.




    [s]make it leather. more people are allergic to latex then dried cowhide.

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    Ooh, all right. And what would your kingdom/character look like? I figure that these two kingdoms will be the spotlight, because that way we only have to developed about four—at the most—batches of characters.


    Ah, I knew it. I went with leather.








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    [sub]*flips through papers* give me a moment to figure that out. i just got back from a day out with the family.

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    Dude, you do not know how many pages I've ripped trying to get to that one page where I wrote all of my characters' (ever) current ages.


    So I've got the crazy, half-witted kingdom. Sounds appropriate, doesn't it?








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