The Tragedies Of HeartBreak

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    In EchoClan, two apprentices plus another she-cat stirs up some terrible trouble...


    Sparrowpaw and Blazepaw had always been best friends. Little did Blazepaw know, his she-cat companion Sparrowpaw had secretly mooned over him for moons and moons. And he never finds out. But instead, he falls in love with a beautiful silvery gray she-cat named Mintpaw. When they get together, will Sparrowpaw be heartbroken? Angry? Depressed? All of them?



    (For this thread, I'll be playing as Sparrowpaw. I need one player to play as Blazepaw and another to play as Mintpaw. Side characters are permitted!)


    (Brown is Sparrowpaw. The gray and yellow couple are Blazepaw and Mintpaw. Zoom in to see Sparrowpaw's thoughts.)

    okie dokie I would tell my friends but they are not really on warrior cats anymore :'(

    Lol, Alright Lily. You really like meh threads, don't ya? :P



    Sparrowpaw grinned at Blazepaw. She chuckled. They were having a discussion about the old elder, Bearface. "I'm don't know hows to speaked!" joked Sparrowpaw in an old tom voice. She smirked. "Your turn." she added. They were taking turns doing impressions of elders. It was hilarious.

    Mintpaw walked around spotting her crush, Blazepaw then Sparrowpaw I wonder if they are lovers... She thought "The truth is I don't really want to know the answer." Mintpaw whispered to herself. Walking up to Blazepaw and his friend "Hi guys, what are you doing?" Mintpaw asked giving them a little smile trying to cover her frown. Was they just making fun of elders? Mintpaw wondered shrugging it off.
    I wonder what Sparrowpaw is thinking, trying to make him hers. He's way out of her reach.... and maybe mine too Mintpaw thought silently letting out a little sigh.

    "Oh, just talkin'." Sparrowpaw replied, smiling at her acquaintance. They weren't necessarily friends yet, so Sparrowpaw just referred to her as an acquaintance. Her eyes flashed and she followed Mintpaw's gaze. She was staring at Blazepaw. With a wince, Sparrowpaw looked from her ugly brown pelt to Mintpaw's beautiful, sleek gray one. Would Blazepaw prefer her? But they barely know each other. Blazepaw has known me for moons. Sparrowpaw thought with false confidence. She sighed.

    Mintpaw smiled at Sparrowpaw once again looking only at her this time "May I join you 'Chat'? I have nothing better to do. Anyways do you guys know when your ceremony is going to be? Ashface says that I will become a medicine cat soon." she said trying to chat with them, her deep blue eyes shining with curiosity
    (I hope that Mintpaw could be a medicine cat apprentice. but it's fine if she can I will edit it)

    "Sure. We're just talking about... hunting." Sparrowpaw lied awkwardly. She felt guilty lying, but what would she do going around telling cats she was making fun of elders?

    "Oh, really? Does mice talk?" Mintpaw asked wanting to know why they were making fun of the elders

    Sparrowpaw blushed, sighing. She choked on her words to reply to Mintpaw's challenge. "I-I-" she whispered, her voice sounding defeated and wavering. With a whimper, she sprinted away.

    "Are yo-" He tried to ask but the only response was the sound of paws running across the camp.

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    Sparrowpaw scrambled up to her hiding spot, a small hollow in a tree deep in the forest. Not even Blazepaw knew about it. The only cat who knew about it had been her sister, Fawnpaw, and her brother, Bronzepaw, who had recently died in the large spread of whitecough. Sparrowpaw sniffled. All her "friendships" always went wrong! The only cat she managed to befriend was Blazepaw, and now he mind be stolen from her. She thought of all the other "friends" she had attempted to have- Owlpaw, Autumnpaw, Basilpaw... With a strange, sob-like noise, she buried her face in the pine needles she had assembled in the many upsetting times she had been there and quietly lied there.

    Mintpaw watched Sparrowpaw run away "Did I do that?" She wandered watching Sparrowpaw running away. "I better go find her." she said trying to find out where her friend was "Sparrowpaw?!" Mintpaw called worriedly "You better come, foxes are out there."

    Sparrowpaw sniffled, hearing Mintpaw's calls. Of course Mintpaw didn't know she was in a tree. She thought she was on the ground, and now Mintpaw was the vulnerable one. As she heard extra pawsteps, from more than one figure, Sparrowpaw stiffened in confusion. She poked her head out to see Blazepaw, beside Mintpaw, calling for her, clueless about the fox waiting hungrily behind them.


    (For plot reasons, I'm thinking that Mintpaw could get attacked and Blazepaw saves her, but this is only an idea! :3)