Venomdream was about to slip into darkness but the dog released her she saw Littlepaw she closed her eyes as sleep came to her.
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Swiftpaw looked around frantically for her sister tears streaming down her face.
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:PIC: Goldfeather gasped for air, she felt herself slowing. Help me find Ravenspark. I will die if I have to but I'm not giving up. She blinked water out of her eyes and dived under looking for him.
OOC: NEVER!

Dustpaw swayed with the current but caught his paws he went back to the river bank.
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OOC: Aww

IC: Goldfeather caughed, her sides heaving, she continued down the river searching for Ravenspark.
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Littlepaw dragged Venomdream to shore. He caughed up a pool of water and fell to his paws. "I-I got her," he mewed before everything went black. -
Venomdream layed there next to Littlepaw not moving or breathing.
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Swiftpaw ran over to were Littlepaw and Venomdream were she shook Venomdream tears started to pour from her eyes "VENOMDREAM!!!VENOMDREAM!!! WAKE UP"Swiftpaw shrieked. -
OOC: I'm afraid to tell you he won't come back. :(
Dustpaw looked at his mentor, "Are you alright? Don't die!"
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Littlepaw woke up. He shivered and pressed on the deputy's stomach hoping she would caugh up all the water.
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Goldfeather was beginning to get hypothermia. "R-R-R-Ravens-spark!" she called, her teeth chattering. No matter how much she wanted to go back to camp she wouldn't give up looking for Ravenspark.OOC: Why did you have to make him die?!

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Venomdream didn't move.
Venomdream padded through some woods hoping she was home with her apprentice Dustpaw,her sister Swiftpaw,her friends Ravenspark and Goldfeather,and with her clan.
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Swiftpaw continued to cry. -
Littlepaw pressed down one more time and sighed. He hoped it would work. He padded over to Swiftpaw and pressed his pelt against hers, half trying to get warm and half trying to be comforting. "She'll b-be o-k-kay." He chattered.
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Goldfeather hooked herself onto a rock. She was far from the Clan now. She was lost. She wouldn't stop looking for Ravenspark. "RAVENSPARK!" She yowled at the top of her lungs.OOC: If Ravenspark is going to die, can Goldfeather at least find his body?
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Up in starclan.
"Venomdream?" A voice cast the white light. (Ravenspark's voice)
"Why did you die for me?"Dustkit heart sank, "They can't be dead!?!?" His blind eyes were soaked.
OOC: I didn't say he dies, but now I might make him, let me think.
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"because i love you and it was my time mother even said so" Venomdream replied.
A silver,white,and black she-cat padded out of the woods "My dear Venomdream"the she-cat said
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Swiftpaw wrapped her tail around Littlepaw "No Littlepaw she's gone" she sobbed. -
Goldfeather caughed up water. She shivered, crouching on the top of the rock. She braced herself and let a gust of wind carry her back into the water. She continued to paddle, eyes scanning for Ravenspark. Don't die! Don't die! I'm coming, she told him silently.
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Littlepaw hung his head. "I'm such a mouse-brain! I tried to save her but I can't. I'm too small to do anything!" Littlepaw sunk to the ground beside Venomdream. -
"Silvernight! why did i have to die" Venomdream asked as she started to cry.
"Because we need your help"Silvernight said.
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"no (sniffle)you did your best Littlepaw (sniffle) you to Dustpaw"Swiftpaw sobbed. -
Ooc what?
Display MoreOOC: Could you Multiple all your other for?
Sugarpaw started her trip.
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Dustpaw got outta of her grip. "I'm not a kit you know!"OOC: GUYS RAVENSPARK IS GONE!
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OOC: So am I correct in saying that Venomdream and Ravenspark both died? And: Swiftpaw, Blindheart, and Cherrykit are all accepted btw!! And moonrise...are Sugarpaw and Lonepool on the way to the MoonMaple?
IC: Forestpaw heard Goldfeather's meow. Why is she calling Ravenspark's name? he asked himself. Forestpaw raced out of camp towards the sound of Goldfeather's voice.
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Cloudstar heard the yowl and raced after Forestpaw.
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Lonepool looked at Sugarpaw. -
Blindheart woke in the morning sun with a yawn she out stretched her front legs bringing her paws back on her forehead. she shook her head and blinked a couple times and got up padding with long strides out into the middle of camp
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ooc:I think so.
ic:Swiftpaw layed down next to Littlepaw and started to dry his fur,Her cheeks still wet from crying.
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Eaglepaw watched Forestpaw and Cloudstar run out of camp he looked at Cloudpaw then ran out of camp after his brother and leader. -
A worried crease formed on cloud aws forehead she took a breath then bounded after him
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~Up in Starclan~
"SILVERNIGHT! PLEASE I HAVE TO GO BACK TO MY CLAN!"Venomdream wailed.
Silvernight sighed "My Venomdream there's nothing i can do for you but to say that you shouldn't have jumped into the river"she said.
Venomdream stared at her mother in shock "WHAT?? so i was just supposed to let my clanmates DIE!"she growled.
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OOC: What the- no offense, but silvernight is a bit harsh.
Dustpaw mourn over by Venomdream.
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ooc:Yup she's mean all right :P :P :P 8) :P :P :P
ic:Swiftpaw rested her tail on Dustpaw's shoulder.
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Eaglepaw cept running trying to keep sight of his brother and Cloudstar.