Flame the loner

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    Flame curiously padded through the thick forest, she was barley 6 moons old. she smelt a strange cat sent and fallowed it to a clearing. There was cats every where but no cat took notice to her.

    Grayspots was out hunting, When he scented a loner. "Who are you?" He asked the small she-cat that he found.

    "my name is Flame, who are all these cats?" meowed flame "Do you live with all of them?" she pointed her tail to a big group of cats carring freshkill. "Wha- what are you going to do to me, i'm just a kit!" she stamered " I've lost my mother to a monster i have no home." flames tail drooped

    Maplepaw bounded over to the other cats. "Um, hi!" she mewed, and then noticed the strange scent. She wrinkled her nose and turned to stare at Flame. "Who are you? And why do you smell funky?"

    "My name is Flame, I have no home" she meowed " in this clan of yours do you take care of each other? i am tired of running every night from hostile cat and dogs!" Flame took a deep breath " I wish to join your clan"

    Grayspots circled the kit. "Kits, like you, are taken care of by queens and everybody helps hunt for and protect the clan from danger. When you turn six moons old, you will become an apprentice and receive a mentor." He told the kit.

    "Wait, you want to join?" Maplepaw asked, unable to hide her excitement. She did a little bounce then turned to look at Flame, head tilted to the side. "It's really fun here, everyone absolutely loves me! They should love you, too," she mewed, unaware that others found her super annoying. The apprentice was just excited to maybe have a new cat in the clan!

    IC: Lightningpaw heard enough of the conversation and jumped out "nobody likes you your annoying but I guess it can't be helped if you want i'll be your freind Maplepaw and come on Flame i'll take you to BrasStar and don't any of you disagree okay i'm older then you think i'm 15 moons old probably older than you Grayspots and sorry if I sound rude it's just i'm still very weak and thin from a part moon of no food and sleep and also two of my mates kits which i'm their step dad have greencough and most likely won't make it." Lightningpaw mewed.
    OOC: I'll make a private/open only to Flame and BrasStar okay.

    The post was edited 1 time, last by Lightningpaw the king of Lightning ().

    Maplepaw stopped. She stood still, not moving an inch. What Lightningpaw had just said ran through her head. Nobody likes you, you're annoying, was all she could hear. The words cut deep, she was never told before how annoying she was, and she never really noticed if nobody liked her, everyone was friendly enough towards her. She closed her eyes, thinking, it can't be true, it just can't be! The light grey she-cat was heartbroken. She didn't know what to do.


    Suddenly, she couldn't take it. "I am not annoying!" she mewed quite loudly, her tail standing straight up. "If--If you think I am, then I don't want to be your friend! You are mean!" she cried out as she started to pace back and forth before heading beside Flame. "I don't care how old you are, I'm staying with my new, nice friend, Flame," she mewed firmly.


    OOC: Maplepaw would never let you take something exciting away from her without her following, so if you are making the thread could you please make it open to the people in this thread?

    Grayspots sat down and quickly washed his face. "I am 20 moons old. But go ahead, I was hunting anyways." He told the apprentice.

    "maplepaw dont listen to lightiningpaw i dont think your annoying" flame meowed " so.. do I become Flamepaw?" flame thought 'wow i might acually have a life here with friends!'

    Maplepaw purred at Flame's words, glad that she wasn't considered annoying from everyone. She stayed beside Flame, and nodding at his question. "I guess you would be, but of course you have to come ask Brassstar if you would be allowed in the Clan," she explained. "If he lets you in, then since you are six moons old you become an apprentice, like me! And then, and then you will have a mentor, and wow it's fun training to be a warrior and protect the Clan! The other Clans are really mean, they like take our prey and stuff so we, as warriors, but of course we aren't warriors yet, but like when we finish our training we will be warriors, but I really want to be one right now but anyways as warriors we stop them!" Maplepaw said really fast then stopped to catch her breath. "It's really fun," she finished.

    Grayspots stood up. "I probably should come. Brassstar won't like having a couple of apprentices and a loner at the entrance to his den. I have a couple of mice and a vole to take back to camp." Grayspots stalked away to recieve his fresh-kill.

    "SO. when do i get to meat your leader?" wondered flame "what is he like? what happens if he kicks me out?" flame started to worry what would happen

    Grayspots turned towards her. "Follow Lightningpaw, He will take you to see Brassstar." He told her.

    Grayspots started washing his face. "I might, I do have fresh-kill to take back to camp." He told Flame.