Calm down, I'm only stealing some kits!!

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    Featherkit was wide-eyed with shock. As she sat in the center of the nursery, her mother no where in sight, all she could do was tremble in fear. Her slim body was shaky.
    OOC: You can steal her.

    Noticing a gap between the warriors, he darted forward, and grabbed Featherkit in his mouth he then ran out of the camp.

    Featherkit squirmed in the large cats jaws. "Help!" She yowled. Only 2 weeks old, she didn't know much. "Help!" She squirmed again. Where was her mother? Peonystreak had gone for fresh kill while the bandit had entered the nursery.

    The large cat bit down on her scruff, and Featherkit just wailed louder. "Mommy!" She yowled. "Mommy!"

    PeachPaw (a young apprentice) saw Scorch ran to him and sunk her claws into his neck hissing and spiting in fury >:( .

    Featherkit paid no heed to Scorch's warning, and started backing away from the fight. (don't kill her please.)

    Featherkit saw Peachpaw, a well-known apprentice in ThunderClan, hissing and batting at Scorch. Featherkit wailed and started running through the forest, as well as a week old kit can.

    Friendly staff reminder from Eclipsefur. :)


    ddddeevvon wrote:


    PeachPaw (a young apprentice) saw Scorch ran to him and sunk her claws into his neck hissing and spiting in fury >:( .


    Hey dddeevvon, harming someone's character without letting the other player choose if they had wanted the blow to land or not is called a powerplay. How can I avoid powerplaying? Instead of assuming that the blow/move is successful, use words such as aimed, tried, attempted, ect.


    Here's an example to help you get started: The tom swiped his claws at the other cat, trying to slice them into their pelt and cause injury.


    Let me know if this confuses you at all by PMing me, and I'll gladly help out! =)


    IC: A sparrow took flight.

    Duskpelt (an orange and black she-cat with a white tip at her tail and is the size of Tigerstar) Bounded out of the warrior's den gave a war cry to try and wake the other warriors from sleep to help.

    In all the noise, Blizzardkit woke up and saw whats happening. She yelped and lept into a crack at the back of the nursury. Her mother, Skidfeather was trying to bite Scorch on the leg.