So this thread is about two " humans" who are mysterious meaning they are supernaturals Zane ( a handsome tan boy with dark brown hair and dark brown eyes) is a shapeshifter. So therefore in the shapeshifter pack he falls for your character instead of the one hes destined to be with.
Is this a good plot?
Zane muttered under his breath as he rummaged in the kitchen, making his little sisters breaffast.
Taylor came dancing in the room " hey babe." She said kissin his cheek
Zaneoved away and looked at the mate he was destined for he smiled fairly and said " good morning"
Lila came in and started eating her breakfast
Zane looked aroud " time to get to the pack." He huffed softly his eyes flickering aroud as he changed into a beautiful leopard but it didn't look like a real leopard it still had his deep rich brown eyes like hot cocoa
What kinda supernatural is she? Werewolf. Vampire. Shapeshifter like she can turn into a different animal and shes in a diff pack? Or what or just human?
Ok but she's in a diff pack? Cause that's what make it forbidon.
Zane shook his head and roared letting the pack know he washere. He wa practically second in command. He nodded towards the others cooly. And said " imma go look around for any other none pack members in our territory." He walked out coming across her house
He backed up in leopard form a growl running in his throat another shifter I can tell he thought no matter ht they changed into they always kept their eye color. He recognized her from school. But that don't matter. This was wildness rn an school did not matter. He snorted observing her.
His growl rumbled in his throat as he walked out his dark brown eyes showin distrust he was bigger then her but that was because of his rank. He licked his teeth " what, mutt?"
He narrowed his eyes shifting to human form also only wearing jeans and no short showing his six pack and c line " actually," his voice slightly husky " this isn't pack territory any shifter can walk around here." His hot cocoa like eyes would melt anyone.
" I'm sorry I shouldn't have snappe I get like that in that form. But next time be careful your lucky it was me. I'm second in command if it were the alpha or the new one they would've tore you up. Territory or not. Yes I'm in your class and I'm Zane." He noticed her stare and a light redness came to his cheeks.
"Your welcome." He chuckled "I wouldn't of harmed you. I can tell by your size that your still new. Next time pay attention to their size that's how ou tell if there high rank." He heard howls in the distance " you better go." He said shifting into a oanther and keeping his eyes e brushed against er legs and ran off.
He sniffed the air.
Later in the evening
He shifted into human form and walked over to her house an leaned against it normal people would of thought he was waiting but he was rubbing his scent on it a possessive ness. Shifters could smell it and if a high rank shifter was protection or claiming someone you don't mess with him or her.
Yes. Oh yeah shifters have really good hearing and if their close or meant to be with each other tey can here each other thought
He hear the shower turn off and rubbed so more. He would protect her to the ends if that's what it raked no one would hurt er again.
He blushed bright red. New shifter or not she would know it meant all shifters did. He said " hey shai. I was just uh..." He bit his bottom lip sexily.
He nodded walking in still shirtless
" I'm fine." There was a new scar on his back ever so faintly pink but you could it if you looked closer I looed fresh and he defineltly didn't have it earlier when she saw him.
Right next to it was a rake of claws
" Taylor. The girl I'm supposed o be destined with saw me with you and got mad. The claws were from alpha reminding me of my place." He shuddered at er touch
" it's not your fault." He have a harj bitter laugh L I hate Taylor I want nothin to do with her." He sensed her about to cry and he stood up wrapping his arms around her " its not your fault."
" it wasn't just you. I've been tryin to take his place for awhile now. So he's been reminding me that he alpha." He breathed in her scent " it's not yor fault shai." His arms tightened around her never wanting to let her go. He nuzzle her neck.
" yes?" He asked, breathing in her scent deeply, vowing to never forget it.
" tell me." His voice muffle by her neck. He heard the pack callin for him but ignored it it was probably just Taylor starting b*llsh*t
He kissed her neck softly " I'm fine." He shifted into a baby kitten and mewed pitifully no trace that he was a shifter that's how well he could hide it aincw he was second in command he could hide it from certain people and show other people.
The alpha, Matt, stormed in slamming the door shut behind him his eyes mad " why the jhell is his scent all over the place you pitiful she shifter." He growled his claws slicing against her skin " you a betrayer to this pack and your now omega."
Zane shifted into a huge panther almost bigger then Matt his nostrils flared as he let out a roar lungin at Matt
Matt wide eyes ran out
Zane ran over o see if she was all right